Bite me

[twelveoone]

NSA and literotica

If you liked...
twelveoone
you'll like
fridayam

ok we write nothing alike, outside of a hefty disregard for the penti

you'll like

UnderYourSpell

really? how so and why?

to paraphrase the Doors

Weird scenes inside the datamine

now if i was really paranoid...
i'd suspect trollio was pulling the levers

except i think it must be based on some sort of concurrent mutual 5 system
but THEY see the scores and We can't
no an idiot machine is making idiot assumptions, wait for the next upgrade when the idiot machine will make your idiot decisions
true freedom at last
saves me all that thinkin bother,
right now i have to go answer the door, UPS is delivering something I don't remember ordering, but I must have wanted

Helen Vendler's panties

 

[Desejo]

What on earth are you talking about? Is there an Amazon.com type recommendation for poets on Lit that I missed? (You may like....?)

 

[twelveoone]

What on earth are you talking about? Is there an Amazon.com type recommendation for poets on Lit that I missed? (You may like....?)

yep. for poems and looking at the last set, i'm totally mystified

Helen Vendler's panties makes more sense

Owns book by Helen Vendler, RFID tag inside is still broadcasting

Straight male (admitted)

and freak (reliable source: WickedEve called me that once or twice)

I think three of the poems I read today led too erectus, where is the common thread, Ash's Faves? I thought there was a limit of 25 (once was ten), but that can't be either, none of mine link to demure.

But since I'm going on and on about shit and you're here, Ange is looking for a ring girl, and I'm looking for a valet. You'd be great in either job. And while you're googleing it, I'll be going.

 

[Angeline]

If you liked...
twelveoone
you'll like
fridayam

ok we write nothing alike, outside of a hefty disregard for the penti

you'll like

UnderYourSpell

really? how so and why?

to paraphrase the Doors

Weird scenes inside the datamine

now if i was really paranoid...
i'd suspect trollio was pulling the levers

except i think it must be based on some sort of concurrent mutual 5 system
but THEY see the scores and We can't
no an idiot machine is making idiot assumptions, wait for the next upgrade when the idiot machine will make your idiot decisions
true freedom at last
saves me all that thinkin bother,
right now i have to go answer the door, UPS is delivering something I don't remember ordering, but I must have wanted

Helen Vendler's panties

That's why we have comments. I vote if people have voting available cause I assume that means they want me to vote. But you're right about the machine and it hasn't changed yet in my years here. So comments are gold. But I know I'm preaching to the choir here...

 

[twelveoone]

What on earth are you talking about? Is there an Amazon.com type recommendation for poets on Lit that I missed? (You may like....?)

gets creepier
similar stories to my latest
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outside of the really? reaction; no big deal
the first three of yours didn't have it - but on the fourth try
Similar stories

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women's feet?
http://www.literotica.com/p/callous

 

[UnderYourSpell]

I've no idea either and I'm on the list!

 

[HarryHill]

It's obviously a code sent out to agents looking for Snowden.

 

[Desejo]

The only thing I can think of is that the site bots are tracking the voting behavior and mislabeling the results. So it's not really a "similar poems" but rather "other people who voted (a decent score, one hopes) on this poem rated this other one similarly".

I think it's a hangover from stories on the site, which are easier to categorize by penchant, events etc. For poetry, the best the bots can do is erotic or not, high scoring or not, and number of votes.

Silly. It takes a lot more than that to detect similar styles, subject matter, and form in poetry. Demure101 and I have some similar subject matter, for instance (or conceivably could) but I couldn't pull off anything in her style if it meant a date with Dwayne Johnson (and I would try, believe me).

 

[twelveoone]

The only thing I can think of is that the site bots are tracking the voting behavior and mislabeling the results. So it's not really a "similar poems" but rather "other people who voted (a decent score, one hopes) on this poem rated this other one similarly".

I think it's a hangover from stories on the site, which are easier to categorize by penchant, events etc. For poetry, the best the bots can do is erotic or not, high scoring or not, and number of votes.

Silly. It takes a lot more than that to detect similar styles, subject matter, and form in poetry. Demure101 and I have some similar subject matter, for instance (or conceivably could) but I couldn't pull off anything in her style if it meant a date with Dwayne Johnson (and I would try, believe me).

noticed no box on your two most recent
had to go back and check, thought I saw something, but it wasn't as clear cut as I remembered it
congrats, I'm seeing cross currents, surprises

 

[UnderYourSpell]

It's obviously a code sent out to agents looking for Snowden.

thought for a minute there you was talking about a Welsh Mountain

 

[twelveoone]

...being not an expert on white man's music, but this looks like the holi penti

and plagued to wit by arse and holish rhyme
that sung, sing so swooningly in poet's voice
matched verily the oink of heaven's swine

excerpt from The Acute Manchunian Form by Heavner N. Bowles

 

[twelveoone]

A bat

A deaths-head moth
lives
up
to its name​

comments? mr. O are they beneath you?

 

[twelveoone]

In a conversation between man and god
and a man with his dick in his hand
at liter-rot-i-ca
guess who wins?

and someone accused me of being a popular poet

har-har-har, getcher boots anon, I gotta shovel

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Don't feed the troll

 

[twelveoone]

Don't feed the troll

now, now UYS, I seem to remember someone dogging your ass (and not in a good way) I do seem to get over in new poems quite a bit (not as much as the bot, and not as much as the you-decide guilt complex boy, the one who made the top list by 20 or fake names by some loveshorn piece of shirk),and you do notice patterns, nastier patterns than anything I ever wrote in my so-called pretend prose in my so-called pretend prose poetry that pretends to be poetry. Whoa, a pattern appears.
All is well.

 

[UnderYourSpell]

now, now UYS, I seem to remember someone dogging your ass (and not in a good way) I do seem to get over in new poems quite a bit (not as much as the bot, and not as much as the you-decide guilt complex boy, the one who made the top list by 20 or fake names by some loveshorn piece of shirk),and you do notice patterns, nastier patterns than anything I ever wrote in my so-called pretend prose in my so-called pretend prose poetry that pretends to be poetry. Whoa, a pattern appears.
All is well.

What I meant was if you feed the troll (Anon) you're giving him what he wants (attention). Ignoring him (or her) is what he/she can't stand

 

[twelveoone]

What I meant was if you feed the troll (Anon) you're giving him what he wants (attention). Ignoring him (or her) is what he/she can't stand

He amuses me, chalk it up to an interest in aberrant psychology, there is a real talent in this one, not your usual "you suck" or low score bimbo.

btw did

you like this link
(e.g. over 1.4 million poems in English alone)

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Philip_M._Parker
last count over 200,000 books written

imagine what he could do with a pantoum
Parker's Porn Pantoums probably appears on Amazon as a POD, are you beginning to see why I either avoid or mutate forms, I knew about this shit ten years ago.
Now did you read my sonnet?
Understand what I was doing?
ah, no
Did Tess who generated a prose poem that isn't, catch the fact that mine did have internal rhyme (mine was not an offset, but an after the fact.) Or did Tess catch the fact that Demure101, buried in one a rhyme scheme that ended on full stops but not on EOL. (I pointed out) Do you know some of this past proliferation in new poems is very heavily templated, and really becomes SOS fast.
ah, no

so i just go through new poems offend many and apparently please none, and occasionally pop in a take a shot at the total time wasters, however, i see very little parsing going on. as in discussion.

so what does that leave for me, for fun, anon pokin.

 

[twelveoone]

Perhaps
I think of her
I think of you
you two
who made poetry live
for me
subverted by pretension of fools
and now they live
oh how they live eluding the shadow
of the contentious dead

but I remember last time
I looked at a star
I rolled off the hood of car
as did demure

and Ash your comments register 11 on a 10 point suck-o-meter, almost makes me homesick for the banal triteness of the tazbot that crawls around.

Indo-aryan is a language group
German is a language
Aryan is a myth

which if blagsst was really astute would have picked up on the fact Ingolstadt is in Bavaria and er, they speak German there. Engloshat.

Now mofo anon who got the bigger boot size?

"the text is black the page is white" I think two famous old fucks had a song about that

and the sheetface rides the night

to be greeted by roars of laughter

 

[butters]

i think, perhaps,
thinking makes us
makes us
makes
us
more alive
if it doesn't snap us first
the unbending will break
although
know there are times to take that risk

no biting
a nibbling
a writing
a sparring
a placement
a catchment
engagement

more fluently, your poetry
throes of poetic prose
than we can suppose in complex posts
where deciphering becomes all the game and oh
oh
so
confusing
makes me want to shout
'spit it out!' because the blood and the frustration and sorrow are all bile bile bile

i want to infuse you with . . . a lightness of spirit
but this is all
all
only words
the shadows can be kind, the light of day too brittle
i fall defeated, and tuck away the stained cloth
yet still wish

 

[HarryHill]

i think, perhaps,
thinking makes us
makes us
makes
us
more alive
if it doesn't snap us first
the unbending will break
although
know there are times to take that risk

no biting
a nibbling
a writing
a sparring
a placement
a catchment
engagement

more fluently, your poetry
throes of poetic prose
than we can suppose in complex posts
where deciphering becomes all the game and oh
oh
so
confusing
makes me want to shout
'spit it out!' because the blood and the frustration and sorrow are all bile bile bile

i want to infuse you with . . . a lightness of spirit
but this is all
all
only words
the shadows can be kind, the light of day too brittle
i fall defeated, and tuck away the stained cloth
yet still wish

A lot of emotion and feeling in this, a straining to reach/touch something/someone,

 

[butters]

A lot of emotion and feeling in this, a straining to reach/touch something/someone,

ah... just thinking onscreen. i adore twelve's smarts, his generosity, his poetry, and his passionate desire to help others improve through thinking, opening up, reading and writing. however, his non-poemy posts have frequently left me baffled and are often full of gut-eating acid that make me sad. it's not good to feel so frustrated and hurt and angry . . . and disappointed. of course he's not the only poet here we can learn loads from, but he's right up there as one to pay attention to.

actually, perhaps it was a bit forward of me to post my visceral reaction to his posts. sometimes i should think before i post, but - you know - it's what we do, use stuff.

his poetry i get, most the time. frequently, he seems to be clearer, his message more direct in them than in his regular forum posts.

 

[greenmountaineer]

ah... just thinking onscreen. i adore twelve's smarts, his generosity, his poetry, and his passionate desire to help others improve though thinking, opening up, reading and writing. however, his non-poemy posts have frequently left me baffled and often full of gut-eating acid that make me sad. it's not good to feel so frustrated and hurt and angry . . . and disappointed. of course he's not the only poet here we can learn loads from, but he's right up there as one to pay attention to.

actually, perhaps it was a bit forward of me to post my visceral reaction to his posts. sometimes i should think before i post, but - you know - it's what we do, use stuff.

his poetry i get, most the time. frequently, he seems to be clearer, his message more direct in them than in his regular forum posts.

Ditto, butters. Did I say "ditto?" I'll say it again. Ditto.

Addendum: Anon doesn't matter.

Hey, Anon,
if you're reading this,
Ditto.

 

[butters]

Ditto, butters. Did I say "ditto?" I'll say it again. Ditto.

Addendum: Anon doesn't matter.

Hey, Anon,
if you're reading this,
Ditto.

*waves*

 

[twelveoone]

ah... just thinking onscreen. i adore twelve's smarts, his generosity, his poetry, and his passionate desire to help others improve though thinking, opening up, reading and writing. however, his non-poemy posts have frequently left me baffled and are often full of gut-eating acid that make me sad. it's not good to feel so frustrated and hurt and angry . . . and disappointed. of course he's not the only poet here we can learn loads from, but he's right up there as one to pay attention to.

actually, perhaps it was a bit forward of me to post my visceral reaction to his posts. sometimes i should think before i post, but - you know - it's what we do, use stuff.

his poetry i get, most the time. frequently, he seems to be clearer, his message more direct in them than in his regular forum posts.

if it helps, everything I learned, I learned from a komodo dragon.
and yes I am frustrated... oh well I posted four links in another thread, hopefully someone will read.

 

[twelveoone]

ah... just thinking onscreen. i adore twelve's smarts, his generosity, his poetry, and his passionate desire to help others improve through thinking, opening up, reading and writing. however, his non-poemy posts have frequently left me baffled and are often full of gut-eating acid that make me sad. it's not good to feel so frustrated and hurt and angry . . . and disappointed. of course he's not the only poet here we can learn loads from, but he's right up there as one to pay attention to.

actually, perhaps it was a bit forward of me to post my visceral reaction to his posts. sometimes i should think before i post, but - you know - it's what we do, use stuff.

his poetry i get, most the time. frequently, he seems to be clearer, his message more direct in them than in his regular forum posts.

wow, you too, that almost makes two of us
actually you learn by getting into a poem, without too many assumptions, and you learn by paying attention, see level three addition, interesting construction, and I've learned much from many, there is always another way of looking at things, another approach.
I've been here nine years, I know the 'manners' of this place, the macrophage reaction, the 'codes', the games, the excessive me-ism, and my ROI is abysmally low, something like 2,000 comments and the expectation being I am supposed to see how great and wonderful some fucking noodle is, sorry, I allow so much for fucking around (I do enough of it), and most of the time you are getting a five anyway. Because I learned, and I regretted one four that I handed out because it made a difference in some contest that I was not aware of and it was the better poem,and I hadn't commented or voted on the other. I regretted it on my own, despite the macrophage reaction. The lectures because I hit back hard or because it somehow was twisted into something else. So now I learn avoidance, a retrenchment. And really I don't have much to say or a desire to say what little is left.
"Ich Bin Ein Auslander"