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you made me go google
eye, aye, worn window into dreams
those i-spy games no more the games than
themes that cause the lids to droop
the visions seen through steam
Bite me
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you made me go google
eye, aye, worn window into dreams
those i-spy games no more the games than
themes that cause the lids to droop
the visions seen through steam
twelveoone
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play that defunctive music, white boy
AKA the poet awakes, but his ass is still asleep
just as this moment bores me
and ennui piles up to my hole
parcels of petite poetry
line the sheets of my mole-
skine book of twee faux
AKA the poet awakes, but his ass is still asleep
just as this moment bores me
and ennui piles up to my hole
parcels of petite poetry
line the sheets of my mole-
skine book of twee faux
twelveoone
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probably preparing for my next assault on the mislaid sensibilities of this place and writing a bookwhere the fuck are you, boy?
you might be an acquired taste but my taste buds miss you
Sandpaper for the Poetic Soul
as for: Poetry. Who the fuck needs it? to paraphrase Marianne Moore once more.
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I am vers libre!
Here are a bunch of links that are more or less formal and metre, here is a dirty little secret, in most cases it is not science it is an art, and it relies on what is known as a competent reader i.e. someone who will follow the script, so to speak. And none of it exists unless you assign it.
There are too many Englishs out there for it to work across the board.
How germane is it to what you are doing, probably not much. I am vers libre. But if someone complains that it doesn't follow the metre and it sounds right to you, ask them to mark it off.
Trust me, there is always more to it, i.e. the mora (pauznik) , the dolnik, etc., all post later.
Here are a bunch of links that are more or less formal and metre, here is a dirty little secret, in most cases it is not science it is an art, and it relies on what is known as a competent reader i.e. someone who will follow the script, so to speak. And none of it exists unless you assign it.
There are too many Englishs out there for it to work across the board.
How germane is it to what you are doing, probably not much. I am vers libre. But if someone complains that it doesn't follow the metre and it sounds right to you, ask them to mark it off.
Trust me, there is always more to it, i.e. the mora (pauznik) , the dolnik, etc., all post later.
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Somehow I missed it
this
so to make up for lost time and
somehow inspired by new poems
Willie Jones in the Chair
Violence becomes us, O my love
let us write of it in blood splatter
and Abstinence just makes the heart
grow phatter
and , maybe, some other part
But a short of juice
will cut loose the kinkyness
of my incorrigible pubic hair
this
so to make up for lost time and
somehow inspired by new poems
Willie Jones in the Chair
Violence becomes us, O my love
let us write of it in blood splatter
and Abstinence just makes the heart
grow phatter
and , maybe, some other part
But a short of juice
will cut loose the kinkyness
of my incorrigible pubic hair
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with that in mind "bore" has more than one meaningNous sommes des vers libres.
Translation: we are free worms.
As in: Did I bore you Des?
ans. Not yet, but someday we might be in the mood.
ragas they bore me, there is something about "Ode to Joy", I just don't know what it is.
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twelveoone
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men bore bare women
the history of the race
and I just talked my self into reading the loneliness of the long distance runner
which I should probably have read but didn't
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Old timer?
there are at least five people here the precede me
one guy in NP, oldbear63
so what is Ash doing?
the past lives thing?
True I've been here before
but in this one I'm 23
and three years overdue
for quitting and going to Africa
ah, the eternal return
there are at least five people here the precede me
one guy in NP, oldbear63
so what is Ash doing?
the past lives thing?
True I've been here before
but in this one I'm 23
and three years overdue
for quitting and going to Africa
ah, the eternal return
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similar to the old, "writing live" thread.
Poems written with no time restrictions but
complete ASAP, submitted and then regretted.
no copy pasted, no mushrooms on the pizza.
no rewriting!
Like life. It's sudden. It's all passion.
~smithpeter 2/23/03
ah, no,
it is not
life is a carefully laid plan
all gangly and astray
but there are reasons
that it looks that way
Poems written with no time restrictions but
complete ASAP, submitted and then regretted.
no copy pasted, no mushrooms on the pizza.
no rewriting!
Like life. It's sudden. It's all passion.
~smithpeter 2/23/03
ah, no,
it is not
life is a carefully laid plan
all gangly and astray
but there are reasons
that it looks that way
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..
Liked that would have to give it a five just for the sentiment/context. consider changing that for why, avoids repetition and softens the line. *disclaimer*
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why?
that it looks that way >>>>>>>>>
why does it look that way>>>>>>>>>>>>>>?
Of course, Morrison denoted it better
...the end
20 fuckin years of koan construction
lay lying in the road
and basho's frog
has mutated
to ms. moore's toad
the wonders you can write when blood sugars level drop precipitously
twelveoone
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totally creeped
is finding pocket pictures on your phone
and realizing they are
not of your pocket
is finding pocket pictures on your phone
and realizing they are
not of your pocket
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Since Harry's playing 50 shades of off white with Shakespeare, what I would like to see is some Shakespeare movies in 2014, done by cooler directors than before.
Rob Zombie's remake of
Romeo and Juliet
a love so strong even death couldn't keep them apart
Spoiler Alert
Romeo comes back form the dead and kills everbody, well because he's pissed, but after that he and Juliet go off and (live?) cohabitate happily ever after.
Michael Bay and Henry the IV
Spoiler Alert
done with Transformers
A midsummers wet dream done as porn
probably done all ready , but I missed it, starring Sasha Grey (choke on that Willie Lovers) who retired (at 21, when the fuck did she start) and now has a legimate move career , as a matter of fact, the whole cast here, would love to do Shakespeare.
Spoiler Alert
you're joking
Richard the III by Quentin Tarantino
My kingdom for a heart
Spoiler Alert
Dick wins, yay, an updated version of the Dick Cheney story
since a Christmas Album from the Ramones does not look like it is forthcoming, that is what I wish for.
Rob Zombie's remake of
Romeo and Juliet
a love so strong even death couldn't keep them apart
Spoiler Alert
Romeo comes back form the dead and kills everbody, well because he's pissed, but after that he and Juliet go off and (live?) cohabitate happily ever after.
Michael Bay and Henry the IV
Spoiler Alert
done with Transformers
A midsummers wet dream done as porn
probably done all ready , but I missed it, starring Sasha Grey (choke on that Willie Lovers) who retired (at 21, when the fuck did she start) and now has a legimate move career , as a matter of fact, the whole cast here, would love to do Shakespeare.
Spoiler Alert
you're joking
Richard the III by Quentin Tarantino
My kingdom for a heart
Spoiler Alert
Dick wins, yay, an updated version of the Dick Cheney story
since a Christmas Album from the Ramones does not look like it is forthcoming, that is what I wish for.
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You should pitch the Romeo and Juliet one sounds like a winner. been a lot of remakes of that play including one starring DiCaprio.
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there were at least two of them, I think morewell, funny you should say that - i got a book today, cost a round one pound:
Pride and Prejudice and Zombies
i shit you not. By Jane Austen and Seth Grahame-Smith.
it's for reals!
Did you catch this:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Abraham_Lincoln:_Vampire_Hunter
or did it make it in the UK because of the popularity of
Maggie the Undead
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I've got that movie quite good in fact
Will Elizabeth behead Vampire Darcy & then give the Undead Darcy head ?!?
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I thought all that happened in the original story?
Or was it the horned Darcy giving the deadhead Elizabeth deepthroat resuscitation?
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no, it was on and quite popular, but i never went to see it. i'll look for it on dvd.
maggie the undead? that'd raise some ire - the cinemas might be torched!
&
*tuts* you men are nasssteee
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