Can it be done? Second person POV

[SkyBubble]

I've done it. In some circumstances, it can work. Be careful with it.

 

[MillieDynamite]

We all write second person when we are writing dialogue. That's the only use I have for second person. "How you doing?" "Why did you say that?" "You went there, after I told you not to!"

 

[Trionyx]

I’m sure it has been done successfully, but for me, it is an automatic back click. Just my personal preference.

 

[MillieDynamite]

You read, the first, "You turn and see your wife, fucking, washing dishes, looking through a magazine, whatever." You hit the back button and escape.

I’m sure it has been done successfully, but for me, it is an automatic back click. Just my personal preference.

 

[SmilingLez]

Ever since reading this thread, I decided to work on SFW lesbian flash fiction. Never in my life have I written the word you so much. Reminds me of the hokey pokey song

 

[anthrodisiac]

Ever since reading this thread, I decided to work on SFW lesbian flash fiction. Never in my life have I written the word you so much. Reminds me of the hokey pokey song

That's what it's all about.

 

[SimonDoom]

Reminds me of the hokey pokey song

You put your right foot in,
You put your right foot out,
You put your right foot in,
And that's when they tie a loop of tightly wound jute rope around it and fasten the other end to a metal post in the middle of the concrete floor, and you realize the real fun is about to begin.

 

[bestkeptsecret678]

You put your right foot in,
You put your right foot out,
You put your right foot in,
And that's when they tie a loop of tightly wound jute rope around it and fasten the other end to a metal post in the middle of the concrete floor, and you realize the real fun is about to begin.

I’ve spent an evening or few on the concrete dance floor of a dusty honky tonk, and this makes for a delicious plot bunny.

And for the record, 2nd POV can work, see my 1st submission ever here, still holding that little red H all these years later.

https://www.literotica.com/s/here-and-now-01-shopping-day