Challenge: The perfect ten.

[Reltne]

better similes than smilies
but my computer
can be fickle

Emoticons get it done
why be won
by smiling pickle?

 

[tungtied2u]

Waiting for words
lighter than down
to appear on paper.

my breath upon her down
put pause to her words

her words in my ears
gave pause to my heart

 

[tungtied2u]

words, papers, thoughts
drift to meaninglessness
all waiting for godot

is it arrival
or a rival
which I fear more

 

[Angeline]

is it arrival
or a rival
which I fear more

no arrivals
or departures
but each moment
on its own

 

[Remec]

no arrivals
or departures
but each moment
on its own

I string the moments
along like
so many handmade
necklaces.

 

[Angeline]

I string the moments
along like
so many handmade
necklaces.

pearls and gold beads,
a necklace my father
gave me.

 

[Remec]

pearls and gold beads,
a necklace my father
gave me.

All I got
is dark looks
and an Irish
temper.

 

[Angeline]

All I got
is dark looks
and an Irish
temper.

Daddy ripped apart
a door once,
but mostly
he smiled.

 

[Guest]

You don't love with your fist;
something
I couldn't understand.
_______________

I'm used to chaos,
screams--
now remembering
peace
without them.
_______________

With boxing gloves down,
I embrace love
and finally
myself.

________________

What I thought was normal
almost destroyed...
peels mold.

_________________

Today--
new beginning,
promised--
I will succeed,
soar
in faith.


saldne

 

[flyguy69]

Daddy ripped apart
a door once,
but mostly
he smiled.

The door a metaphor; ripped
with romance your mother's
heart, open.

 

[Luv2PleasureF]

Newfound belief,
Resurrects bliss,
Nevermore tears,
Save ones of joy.


A golden
Binds my to yours,
With a tender

Bending the rules a bit, do emoticons count as words?

 

[Guest]

Daddy ripped apart
a door once,
but mostly
he smiled.

My daddy's door
was shut tight
and he seldom smiled.

 

[The_Fool]

My daddy's door
was shut tight
and he seldom smiled.

Daddies
often find it hard
to laugh
or to cry

 

[lindiana]

Affections
aren't the only
thing
I'm wanting
to burrow
in.

My wet warmth
is wide open
and waiting, wicked one.

 

[ishtat]

lights out

Daddies
often find it hard
to laugh
or to cry

Dad kissed us goodnight
love unseen,
without light.

 

[flyguy69]

Daddies
often find it hard
to laugh
or to cry

Not this dad, who finds it harder
to not, daily.

 

[LilPixyDarlin]

White Hot~

Liquid gold
Simmering bubbles
Dipping feverishly
into my Honeys' Sweet~


Lil~

;o)~

 

[flyguy69]

Liquid gold
Simmering bubbles
Dipping feverishly
into my Honeys' Sweet~


Lil~

;o)~

Gee, you seem familiar... Welcome, LilPixy!

 

[LilPixyDarlin]

Thanks FlyGuy
Familiar you say?
Hmm Thats good

err right?
~~~~~~~~~

*Smiles*~

 

[tungtied2u]

Fishing for love
I was hooked, gutted
and fileted

 

[CupidsGurl]

Dad kissed us goodnight
love unseen,
without light.

Daddies love is shown
through his eyes
with a smile.

 

[CupidsGurl]

Dancing

Love to Dance
down the street
doing the Funky Monkey.



OK so it's a bananna
So sue me
Wanna dance?




So Don't take my rose
You want my heart instead?




I can Kiss my heart goodbye
You lil Devil you....



Want to lick you up
Like with cat with cream

 

[CupidsGurl]

Still Dancing

Really confused are ya?
Then Smile an be Happy!!!




Cause all I wanted do was dance
the Funky Monkey






Nuff said
Nice Meetin ya
Thank You for the dance

 

[Guest]

Really confused are ya?
Then Smile an be Happy!!!




Cause all I wanted do was dance
the Funky Monkey






Nuff said
Nice Meetin ya
Thank You for the dance

Looking above,
I know
I'm not
the only crazy one.


Someone, anyone, please kill the nana's. They make me dizzy.

 

[Man Ray]

Sun shining...

sun shining
sunny thoughts
sun kissed woods
sunlight in your hair




Yes, I know theres eleven words but the lady who inspires me to write will forgive me so why can't you?