Challenge: The perfect ten.

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worn heart on ragged sleeve
better than hidden broken heart

You know something? I sit here and read what I've written and I suddenly realise that the above could be poetry or Confucian wisdom? So am I an amateur Welsh poet with the spirit of a re-incarnated Chinese monk... :cool:...or am I a dancing banana :nana: ?
 
Merrymaker said:
tired
finding strength in morning coffee
caffeine's warm embrace
fortified

lucky caffeine
embrace to stimulation
the hug
to the whip
 
Tathagata said:
lucky caffeine
embrace to stimulation
the hug
to the whip

whip's snap
licking out with smooth attentions
develop full alert
 
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