Challenge: The perfect ten.

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M.R. Ducks
M. R. Not
O. S. A. R.

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C. M. Wangs
L. I. B.
M. R. Ducks


Okay so I cheated.....:p

No I didn't create it...I just thought it fit....
 
ugly duckling
waddling away,
returning
as a graceful white swan.
 
Ah!

Hocus Pocus
no smoke

in this locus-- a hall
of mirrors...

numbers don't lie
but verify

how beautiful
she is!
 
When the end comes
Don’t tell me.
Just walk away.

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Can’t you put an end
To your meanness?
Your anger?

***

The fighting means nothing.
Its making up
I care about.
 
Sounds...

shut up
you'll drown
what's being
unsaid

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walking with headphones
navigating through sweeps
beats and pedestrians

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cling bite grab bruise
shout my name
give me tinnitus

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silence
sigh
rustle
kiss
creak
giggle
whispers
"Again?"
"For ever."
 
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Tickle the ivories,
Stroke the strings,
Shiver me timbers!
Genius!

Harry's sax sings.
Ain't it the truth?
Songs without words.

I love these frosty
crystal days.
Unobstructed sun
endless blue.

The forecast is for starry nights,
cold front moving
in.


The flowers died
forgotten
No heart
to throw them out.
 
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The perfect tan
the perfect man
George Hamilton
in bronze.


What?
Oh . . .
You said
The perfect ten
well, never mind.
 
schematic
americana


rabbit ears
phone poles
fender twins
billboard signs.
 
impaled
upon
a rusty yet
razor sharp
illusion
of grandeur




Who the hell are you
to believe
in me?!
 
eagleyez said:
10 words
hill a beans

ten kisses
mountain.
Let me reduce to 10 my following old extension of the known saying:

        a picture is worth a thousand words
        a woman is worth a thousand pictures
        ergo a woman is worth a million words


Now the short version:


                picture = a thousand words
                woman = a thousand pictures



Regards,
 
You space out,
superfluous,
redundant
they said.
Condense this, motherfuckers.

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Dreams of 'larger than life'.
But where would I sleep?

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An ordinary, boring, plain neutrum.
The only alternative lifestyle left.

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even icons, kings and presidents
suffer
the occational consipation
 
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