Comments that leave you shaking your head
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This comment was sent to me regarding a Loving Wives story
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You said people were threatening your children. How sad that the universe allowed you to have children.
Hopefully they are a product of your wife’s infidelity so you don’t pass on your DNA. If not since your parents were related they won’t last long except your in Texas…. Maybe some scary alien will come snatch them away from you and you can spend the rest of your time writing stories about that instead of this hogwash.
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You said people were threatening your children. How sad that the universe allowed you to have children.
Hopefully they are a product of your wife’s infidelity so you don’t pass on your DNA. If not since your parents were related they won’t last long except your in Texas…. Maybe some scary alien will come snatch them away from you and you can spend the rest of your time writing stories about that instead of this hogwash.
PennyThompson
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That one is wild even by LW standards
There is a contingent of readers in that category (not large, but present and vocal) who seem to read every story as if they were non-fictional real accounts, and will judge the author as if they were the main character, it's really weird!
Smuttyandfun
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Just noticed this strange comment on 'Three Little Words' But luckily, once they sobered up they apologized.
by Vanesca on 11/10/2022
Any story that depicts a pregnant woman [ Giselle] drinking or an asshole [Chuck Harper, 'Let's have a drink up in my room} ought not to be placed on a public forum. Yes, I know, but it's obvious neither character is referring to tea or lemonade. Too many ignorant readers might be misled to think it's ok.
by You on 11/10/2022
Although I'm not exactly sure what the last comment was referring to, I can assure you that no pregnant women are drinking alcohol in this, or any of my other stories.
by Anonymous user on 11/11/2022
Excellent story. Unfortunately, I was drinking and got at least three different stories confused regarding names., activities, &c. Apologies are due and are humbly offered.
by Vanesca on 11/10/2022
Any story that depicts a pregnant woman [ Giselle] drinking or an asshole [Chuck Harper, 'Let's have a drink up in my room} ought not to be placed on a public forum. Yes, I know, but it's obvious neither character is referring to tea or lemonade. Too many ignorant readers might be misled to think it's ok.
by You on 11/10/2022
Although I'm not exactly sure what the last comment was referring to, I can assure you that no pregnant women are drinking alcohol in this, or any of my other stories.
by Anonymous user on 11/11/2022
Excellent story. Unfortunately, I was drinking and got at least three different stories confused regarding names., activities, &c. Apologies are due and are humbly offered.
Actingup
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This on my latest:
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I think it's a criticism of tone? (Perhaps I should have put a pregant woman drinking in the story @Smuttyandfun , and then I'd know for sure what the readers think.)
Rosc0tusker
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I think it's a criticism of tone? (Perhaps I should have put a pregant woman drinking in the story @Smuttyandfun , and then I'd know for sure what the readers think.)
Actingup
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There's no shame in deleting comments that are personally abusive towards the writer, if you want to do that. This one shows a strange level of thinking, as Penny noted.
RocketGrunt
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I actually love this one:
"3* - not sure what it is about this particular storyline that compels you to to use the term "super effective" so abundantly, but it's super annoying. That said I enjoy the writing and world-building, so I'll stick to your other series."
This comment was left on chapter 30 of a Pokemon parody. How do you read to chapter 30 of a Pokemon parody without understanding why the words "It's super effective!" are used frequently?
"3* - not sure what it is about this particular storyline that compels you to to use the term "super effective" so abundantly, but it's super annoying. That said I enjoy the writing and world-building, so I'll stick to your other series."
This comment was left on chapter 30 of a Pokemon parody. How do you read to chapter 30 of a Pokemon parody without understanding why the words "It's super effective!" are used frequently?
PennyThompson
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My bad, I told you to put more digressions in
Statius
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Pretty sure I'd find a way to put both the accusation and the apology into my next story, just for fun. Like a pregnant woman in a story is actually accused, by a drunk, for drinking when she's not. Could even make it a background scene, something an MC over hears or witnesses.
PennyThompson
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For a certain flavor of Loving Wives story and comment, it would be very difficult to tell...
Statius
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True. One writing in that category would have to pick and choose.
Actingup
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Penny and I kind of did that in 'It Just Ain't Going To Happen' as a response to some of the discussion in my 'A Dangerous Affair', where some of the commentators advocated that Our Hero should have let his ex-wife be murdered because she'd been unfaithful. Our response story tried to give a quick Philosophy 101 about the Golden Rule. Some readers thought that was a whole bunch of wank, but most enjoyed it.
TheLobster
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I have a long-standing idea / “plot bunny” to write a satirical story which has all the fluff around it that a typical YouTube video would. A quick review of comments left on the previous “video” is something I should definitely include if I ever get to doing this.
I mean, this has me shaking my head hard. I do not think that I EVER have deleted a work on here.
So now I my head is spinning, wondering if something of mine has been deleted by some other means or error!
Also, how the fuck did someone comment on it, if it is deleted?
And what was the fucking comment?
Cripes...
AlexFourways
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Wow, a real case of "The Blunders of Modern Technology."
One of my personal phrases that helps when people are trying to serve you, but are being hindered.
Another is "I hope I am providing a training opportunity, rather than creating problems."
They are in the same family as "Insult yourself first. It reduces other people's scope!" ie if you have said, "I'm just an old-fashioned Brit." Any attempt at a put-down can be treated as them joining in on the joke!
Oh, and make sure none of your stories has gone AWOL!
RocketGrunt
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Did you edit or rename anything?
Fatdog25
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It likely means that your comment on someone else's story was deleted. At least, that's what mine meant.
ToddEverman
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Recently left on my story, Glory Hole Wife:
https://www.literotica.com/s/glory-hole-wife
While I highly doubt this story is true, either way, leave it to Anonymous to post something... unsettling.
https://www.literotica.com/s/glory-hole-wife
While I highly doubt this story is true, either way, leave it to Anonymous to post something... unsettling.
ShelbyDawn57
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I read the first sentence of the comment and have to be honest, what followed is not where my mind went.Recently left on my story, Glory Hole Wife:
https://www.literotica.com/s/glory-hole-wife
While I highly doubt this story is true, either way, leave it to Anonymous to post something... unsettling.
Can you say plot bunny?
lovecraft68
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This is from a few months ago but caught my eye when I received a new comment on the story
inno0cent_bystander5 months ago
21 wimp ass with a curfew? Wtf
What's headshaking about it is at the very beginning of the story the brother (21) is ticked off he has a curfew but is doing it as a favor to his father so the younger sister won't make a fuss that she has to have one and he doesn't. The father even thanks him a few paragraphs down for "taking one for the team"
Not a wimp, just trying to help his parents out.
No surprise this type doesn't recognize someone being a good kid.
inno0cent_bystander5 months ago
21 wimp ass with a curfew? Wtf
What's headshaking about it is at the very beginning of the story the brother (21) is ticked off he has a curfew but is doing it as a favor to his father so the younger sister won't make a fuss that she has to have one and he doesn't. The father even thanks him a few paragraphs down for "taking one for the team"
Not a wimp, just trying to help his parents out.
No surprise this type doesn't recognize someone being a good kid.
darkquasar
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oh fucking cry about it.
left on a story that is 99% about a man having sex with his mom, in the T/I category.
Has a part where the guys impotent dad cleans the sons cock and sucks him off.
I bet the readers of the Gay Male category would just love a story about a man having sex with a woman being in that category /s
ADirtyPerv
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This one has bothered me for a while.
The premise of the story is a widow, whose husband died months after her son was born, without much of a support system. She put her grief on hold for her son. And as she starts to live again, she gets flashes of grief that bubble up. Memories of her husband, including as sexy stuff happens, because that was an important part of their life together, and she hasn't said goodbye.
Pardon me for writing a character who feels some stuff, I guess.
The premise of the story is a widow, whose husband died months after her son was born, without much of a support system. She put her grief on hold for her son. And as she starts to live again, she gets flashes of grief that bubble up. Memories of her husband, including as sexy stuff happens, because that was an important part of their life together, and she hasn't said goodbye.
Pardon me for writing a character who feels some stuff, I guess.
InvisibleHarvey
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I got a comment on one of my stories that was mostly white supremacist ranting (talking about "retiring" my race to cleanse the gene pool, etc.) but it started out by saying that my story wasn't realistic because the men in it weren't lonely. Like, I'm not about to feel bad for a white supremacist, but that's just a sad, sad person that wrote that.
AlexFourways
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If you check https://www.literotica.com/s/love-your-readers-categories, it states that the "Number one 'trump' category? Incest" So the is wrong by the rules of the site.
However, I wrote a Mother - Daughter story or even had scene where that happened* I would have a line at the start "PLEASE NOTE:- This story involves lesbian sex." You could use WARNING instead and even mention it's Mother - Daughter, depends if you want to avoid a spoiler. Consensus elsewhere is people use Catergories and Tags for finding stories, not filtering them out. YMMV : I Reserve The Right To Be (proved) Wrong.
*Oh, I have! My Stepbrother and Our Family
But I didn't put that warning (but it's in the tags) and nobody has objected, or were they the 1 bombs? No comment, so how will I ever learn!
