Comments That Make Your Day

[THBGato]

I had a comment compare me to Carey Thomas (https://literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=3518148) today. Made my day. LOVE her stories.

 

[Kumquatqueen]

On Bad Brat Girl, from my kind beta reader @joy_of_cooking:

You are along the few authors I've found on this site who depict realistic BDSM in all its varied and diverse glory. Switches and safe words and FUN, oh my!

 

[oneagainst]

It seems this reader expected a formula and spent an irretrievable hour of his life in my story hoping I'd eventually course-correct and give him that formula. I'm flattered by how much of a chance he gave me!



I'm not sure what "vampiric interaction" means---blood drinking? On-scene fighting? Clan warfare? Vampires vs werewolves?

If Anon went on about giving her the Cain [sic], s/he (aw shit, why beat about the bush, obv a he) has been unobombing my stuff too.

Personally, I liked the idea of a lonely vampire in the modern world, as you know from what's coming up.

 

[StillStunned]

On Too Late Not to Fuck:

What a fabulous story! So well thought out but certainly it is completely fiction. No set of twins has ever experienced this amazing adventure in real life. It certainly had me flipping the forward arrow quicker as the story progressed. Thank you for allowing us all to COME along as the story, I hope, continues.

Thank you, anonymous reader! And good news: the adventure continues in just a few hours!

 

[StillStunned]

Here's a story told in three comments.

On Too Cold Not to Fuck:

Promising.

On Too Early Not to Fuck:

The best so far, descriptions, discriptions, discriptions.

On Too Late Not to Fuck:

Oh My ! ! !

Thanks, @Klitomatic, glad you enjoyed the ride!

And from @FreyaGersemi on the latest instalment, A Fool Not to Fuck:

Ha! Loved the ending!! For anyone reading this, you'd be a fool not to read this story!! 5-stars!!

Thanks for reading and for the kind words!

 

[FreyaGersemi]

And from @FreyaGersemi on the latest instalment, A Fool Not to Fuck:

Ha! Loved the ending!! For anyone reading this, you'd be a fool not to read this story!! 5-stars!!

Thanks for reading and for the kind words!

Thank YOU for writing great stories!!!

 

[karina_jayde]

Liked this one on the finale of my steampunk mystery/group sex trilogy, Crimson Clockwork

My first thought is that this is an excellent beginning to a series of stories. On the other hand, Lyneth seems determined that this will be her last adventure, and sometimes the most important thing a writer can know is when to stop. 5/5.

It's always great when readers hunger for more, but it's just as appreciated when people can respect the conclusion of an arc and recognize that some things are better off ending where they are, rather than trying to force a continuation for continuation's sake.

 

[gordo12]

Nice comment this morning on:

Sir Peter Renton:

10 big blazing stars for writer for a hot hot hot story. I was so pissed at the slut wife but hubby hot the younger hotter rich daughter and ended up better off without his slut wife! She was a true whore all the way.

 

[joy_of_cooking]

From @countdowntolov3 on Vampires Don't Wait Tables:

Really wonderful.

The amount of imaginative world building you packed in without distracting at all from the story is really great. Hong drinking tea to feel warm (to others), the gruesome nature of vamp-on-vamp violence, coins as souvenirs, orgasms being dangerous. All interesting and fun. And in each case you unfold them like little mysteries. Often authors are so eager to share their unique ideas with the reader that they forget it's fun to tease them. But when Hong says "do you want me to take a bath?" and we realize alongside the MC: of course, tea isn't her only option, bath makes so much sense; that's just such a fun time.

It goes on like this for over 300 words. I am blown away by the attention and care she has lavished upon my story. What a gift!

 

[StillStunned]

A bunch of new comments on A Fool Not to Fuck:

@Fatdog25 wrote:

I wound up getting so involved in the story that I completely forgot the April Fool's tag. The ending was definitely unexpected.

I really enjoyed this series. If your Muse permits, hopefully these three will be back occasionally. Thank you!

@Flamethrow added:

Ultra hot sex, heaps of fun had by all, and a delicious twist at the end. What’s not to love about this story?

While @lc69hunter simply

Loved it...

@AchtungNight wrote:

Did not enjoy the test, but I will accept that absence makes the heart grow fonder in some cases and things can be made more special with time. It's not the same as physical/emotional abuse- it was consensual and involved no lasting harm, the relationship did not end and no one was hurt by it.

Otherwise excellent story and very hot.

Several other commenters remarked on "the test", and in much stronger terms. As Sal puts it, the test was "To see if you were serious about us." The angry commenters all seem to ignore the second part, though: "And to show you not to be so full of yourself." Essentially, Big Brother was being a dick, and the girls made him realise what he stood to lose.

But I suppose it's on me if that didn't come across. That said, the story is doing pretty well, not just by itself but also in generating an extra 10k views for my other stories in one day. So presumably most readers liked it.

 

[gordo12]

Two nice comments yesterday afternoon. And one comment showing on my dashboard yesterday morning that has never surfaced. He has commented frequently in the past without problem so I'm not sure why it doesn't show.

April Fool - No Longer:

Short but powerful.
Remember this is make-believe, so don't insult the author by complaining about flaws.

Cheatify The Bastard: (sequel to Cheatify The Bitch) A tongue-in-cheek fun pair of stories to write!

Hehe. Fear the tech! DT_Iverseon MCs usually have tech wizardry as well but have more restraint. Here it is unbridled devastation.

Laughed at the comment about the Demonically Possessed. So true. So many sheep being led what can at best be defined as a narcissistic false prophet. Sigh. 5 stars.

 

[StillStunned]

@Devinter commented on The Dome 01: Out Into the Wasteland:

Marvelous how each character came to life so vividly in a rather limited amount of words. Greater still that the world you've created does not only feel alive and unique, but realistic and believable. Hoping for a bit more backstory on Xero in chapter 2, as I feel like the Dome is incredibly central to the story - I mean, it's the namesake of the series! - but the insight we got into how life truly was on the inside was rather limited so far. Still, it's the juxtaposition of the wasteland that really captivated me the most. The way of life out there. The creatures. The tribes. So I hope you expand on that further before you move the action back inside of the sphere! Tons of potential here, and I'll be following this one closely, my friend! Thank you for uploading this.

Thanks! In future instalments we'll see life inside the Dome, from Xero's actual mother. I agree that it will work best if it contrasts starkly with life outside. No sex, for a start.

 

[shakna]

More!!!

One of several appreciated comments on the concluding part of My Sister's a Werewolf!

 

[TarnishedPenny]

I won’t go into the details of one I just received, but it was about a story I’d invested a lot of me in and I so very, very much wish I had a return address for Anonymous, ‘cause my week has been made. Thank you, Anon.

 

[ShelbyDawn57]

Love getting comments like this from @Lisanotsurea

Beautiful and heart warming story. I want to live in that reality. I only cried in 5 different spots, ha, but each time brought a warmth of love for our fellow inhabitants of this world. I needed this story today. Thank you so much for taking the time to put it to 'paper'. xo

 

[FreyaGersemi]

Everyone is always so kind with their comments that they always make my day, but today, this one stood out (maybe it was just the mood I was in and needed a lift). I published a trilogy of very short (1,000-word) vignettes that I was really on the fence about.
Part 1: Faith, Part 2: Hope, and Part 3: Love

Most importantly (and nervously), I was publishing them in the "Non-Erotic" category on a site named after EROTIC literature.

@AlexFourways had this to say: "I have read 10,000 word stories here that by contrast were less erotic per 1,000 words than you achieved in this work, especially the last few sentences of this last part."

But like I said, so many readers have made my day with their comments!!

 

[intim8]

Part 1: Faith, Part 2: Hope, and Part 3: Love

I had to respond to one of your comments here: "What's the point of preachy? I just simply tell a story and let the words speak for themselves."

It's show, don't tell, at a meta level. Much more effective.

That was a really good story. Going to read the other two now.

 

[Publius68]

My first posted story in three months, and this began my first comment:

...and he's back and it's glorious. A wonderful start to one of your glorious ridiculous adventures.

I cannot tell you how gratifying Wrexcar's, one of my most frequent commenters, immediate response was. Positive, sure. But nice to know I was missed!

 

[toughfire]

On my story Deep Fire:

Strong writing. Good development toward the boss's goal and a nice twisted--and logical--ending, if the reader wants to see where this could go.

Coming from one of the biggest authors on the website, that means a lot. Thank you for the compliment.

 

[StillStunned]

On A Fool Not to Fuck:

HOT

Thanks, anonymous reader! Short but sweet.

 

[ShelbyDawn57]

Got this one today. 'reread', how can I not smile at that?

Love this story every time I reread it! Always causes a few tears but its always so worth it!!!

--Living UP to the Legacy

 

[Koboldwithaquill]

A simple "I loved it!" on my latest story made me feel all warm and fuzzy. It's a great feeling, to be reminded that there are indeed people that enjoy my silly smutty stories.

 

[SyleusSnow]

Despite plenty of reads, comments favorites and even votes on my stories have been non-existent for months... to the point I've been considering just writing for Smashwords and elsewhere. I mean, why bother posting on Lit if readers won't even take the time to click a rating star?

Then yesterday I get this (links added):

Several years ago I read the All for You 3 part series, I found it again in the past week and re-read it and was really impressed with the writting which prompted me to read the On the Side and Warmer by the Lake series, all were fantastic stories so I went ahead and read everything else the the writer has published, all truly fablous. I even teared up to the Eight Dates with the Dead and Recall stories. Very refreshing to find a writer here that can give great sex wrapped in loveing, trusting and caring characters, cant wait for more from SyleusSnow.

Sadly, posted as Anonymous so I can't thank them personally, but wow. Almost makes up for the lack of feedback. Almost.

 

[THBGato]

I got this one the other day, which kind of freaked me out:

"Today, this story helped me realize my sometimes-crippling anxiety disorder is mostly from the exhaustion of performing neurotypical, and failing so often. Thank you, so much, for this story; it has literally changed my life."

I mean... wow. But also, I'm not sure I can deal with that level of responsibility. I'm not writing stories to change people's lives! Wish it wasn't Anonymous so that I could message them and check they are ok.

 

[intim8]

this story helped me realize my sometimes-crippling anxiety disorder is mostly from the exhaustion of performing neurotypical, a

What's the story?