Comments That Make Your Day

I can head for bed now feeling warm and fuzzy.

Wheelchair Girl

The voting stars are not being displayed so I will give my rating here: 5*.

You described two hurting people with gentleness and skill, while showing that redemption is possible even for a despicable bastard like her father.
 
Haha! I once got admonished for using "unsexiest", which apparently was amplified by using "coquettish" in the same story. According to Anonymous, it lent my story "an obnoxious quality". Whatever that means.
I'm just glad I threw Anonymous a bone with which to beat me. I'd be sorry if all that they could come up was that I'm a pompous, pontificing baboon with an overinflated opinion of herself.

I am irritated over discreet/discrete though; I do know the difference. I'm now suspicious of my spell-checker.
 
I'm just glad I threw Anonymous a bone with which to beat me. I'd be sorry if all that they could come up was that I'm a pompous, pontificing baboon with an overinflated opinion of herself.

I am irritated over discreet/discrete though; I do know the difference. I'm now suspicious of my spell-checker.
Pontificing? Is that like, papal assassination? Pontiff-icing? :LOL: ;)
 
[Sir David Attenborough voice] "The female of the Literotica baboon attracts her prey by overinflating her opinion of herself."
I'd need to patch my opinion with some glue and tape first after Anonymous's lacerating ministrations!
 
[Sir David Attenborough voice] "The female of the Literotica baboon attracts her prey by overinflating her opinion of herself."
How I now imagine @onehitwanda's creative process.
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Thank you for cracking my shit up, for filling my head with dark desires, for draining the shit out of me and giving me such erotic dreams, my dark, twisted, hyper-sexual bitch!
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Had a lovely DM from someone who has been following my stories the last week and it’s so pleasing to have provided a bit of enjoyment as a writer.

I am learning loads from reading other stories on here and I know I have a lot to do to improve my craft but it’s just so nice to get the odd compliment about the enjoyment of one’s work, however incomplete and raw the writing might be.
 
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