Comments That Make Your Day

[StillStunned]

The first two comments on One Orgasm At A Time were just posted.

By Anonymous:

The 3 where so unexpected that I laughed out loud. Well done, very well done

You probably need to have read the story to understand this comment. But the "Three Aspects" were pretty much my favourite part of the story - particularly Satisfaction - so it's great to see a reader appreciating them.

By @intim8:

You had me at "sensationalizer".

Thanks! It was difficult to come up with a name for an over-the-top sex toy that wasn't something like the Stealth Power Satisfier 2000.

Edit: another one just added - apparently the comments have all been saved up to be published more or less at once.

By @AlexFourways:

Wow, what can I say but Wow.
A marvellously silly premise with such potential for so many sexual romps. Looking forward to the next part already.
Usually, I like there to be some closure. But in this case, for each scene, both the setup and the the closure cannot be, so my imagination will have to work overtime.

Glad you enjoyed it, and glad you like the silly premise!

 

[intim8]

But the "Three Aspects" were pretty much my favourite part of the story -

That was really cool. Way to smuggle in a little psychology. And how the two encounters each only worked for only one of them. If I was writing this, the big ending would be one where all three got it, plus Intimacy makes a cameo, and she never needed her Sensationalizer again. . (Masked just in case that is an actual spoiler ) But I'm not writing it, so have at it.

But I'm wondering, how big a debt does she have to pay off?

 

[StillStunned]

But I'm wondering, how big a debt does she have to pay off?

I think it's probably about as big as my imagination.

 

[FifthEstate]

Sometimes it is who the comment is from that makes my day. I've read loads of stories by @Cagivagurl and loved them all. This is the first time she's commented on one of mine.

I mean, the comment itself is lovely too, but who it was from made me a little giddy and I had to have a little lie down. **fans self**

We love all positive comments, but the best are from other authors we’re familiar with and respect. I’ve been lucky enough to have a few too. Congrats to you on this one. Hope you enjoyed your lie down…

 

[MelissaBaby]

Okay, I think I'm pretty good...but Raymond Carver? JFC

Comment on The Broke Stem Rose

 

[orangecurious]

Very nice comment from someone here

I really enjoyed the story, it was sweet, playful, sexy. I'll be sure to check out more of the series.

 

[StillStunned]

Another lovely comment on One Orgasm At A Time, from @Publius68:

This kind of story is not normally my cup of tea, but I'm really looking forward to more.
There is an ineffable mysticism to what you've concocted that makes it work.
Bravo.

Thanks! "Ineffable mysticism" was perhaps not what I was going for (more like "silly sexytime fun"), but I'll take it nonetheless. Glad you enjoyed the story, and thanks for becoming a follower!

 

[TheLobster]

I always read "ineffable" as "something that can't be f'd." In erotica, I'm not sure that's a good thing

 

[StillStunned]

I always read "ineffable" as "something that can't be f'd." In erotica, I'm not sure that's a good thing

I've been called ineffable far more often than I've been called effable.

 

[theWollstonecraftWoman]

Okay, I think I'm pretty good...but Raymond Carver? JFC

Comment on The Broke Stem Rose

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I found this on him.

Raymond Clevie Carver Jr. was an American short story writer and poet. He published his first collection of stories, Will You Please Be Quiet, Please?, in 1976.

 

[LanaBehave]

I've been called ineffable far more often than I've been called effable.

I'll drink to that...

 

[Publius68]

Another lovely comment on One Orgasm At A Time, from @Publius68:


Thanks! "Ineffable mysticism" was perhaps not what I was going for (more like "silly sexytime fun"), but I'll take it nonetheless. Glad you enjoyed the story, and thanks for becoming a follower!

The phrase just sort of typed itself, so whether either of us agree with it, I think we must bow to the comment gods! That's what makes it ineffable.

That said, on this website, the word is a triple-edged sword, isn't it?

 

[StillStunned]

The phrase just sort of typed itself, so whether either of us agree with it, I think we must bow to the comment gods! That's what makes it ineffable.

It could be the comment gods, or perhaps the orgasm gods are real and demand to be worshipped.

So let me be the first to praise them. All hail Arousal, Climax and Satisfaction, the Orgasm Gods!

 

[onehitwanda]

Hi, my name is Robert but I was sissified by my mom Stacy (true names ) in front of her lovers when I was teenager. Could you write a story about me and my mom ?

No, Robert. I really can't.

 

[intim8]

That said, on this website, the word is a triple-edged sword, isn't it?

Yes. Stunned's character is very effable, if she'd just put down that sensationalizer for a minute...

 

[Mastered_again]

From @LucienByTheSes:
Love the authenticity of the dynamic, money affords luxuries that allow things to play out. Written with nuance and a flair not common.

Thanks, Luke
My stories

 

[StillStunned]

No, Robert. I really can't.

But what if we make it an annual challenge?

 

[onehitwanda]

But what if we make it an annual challenge?

There's definitely something annular involved. Probably something Fistula as well.

edit: we really, really need a fucking pokerface emoji for punning. Fuck my life.

 

[AwkwardlySet]

There's definitely something annular involved. Probably something Fistula as well.

edit: we really, really need a fucking pokerface emoji for punning. Fuck my life.

What we really need is some actual on-site poker app. The chips would be ratings, top list placements, you name it
It's totally realistic.

 

[StillStunned]

edit: we really, really need a fucking pokerface emoji for punning. Fuck my life.

I thought this was the picture to use for punning:

 

[onehitwanda]

I thought this was the picture to use for punning:
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I feel like it's time for an avatar update.

pity it won't render nicely at the 2x2 pixels Literotica offers as our canvas

 

[AlexFourways]

For poker face - how about or but not?

 

[intim8]

On And Then There were Five:

"Well-written and evocative!"

Not the comment itself, but the fact that somebody bothered to read that story at all. It's my worst rated story, but I don't think it deserves it. It deserves to be my 4th worst rated story

 

[Kumquatqueen]

From @yowser on Conference Collaboration:'Sweet romp through the maze of over-education. Library sex, topology, membranes: all typically excellent.'

I should point out that topology and membranes were only mentioned in passing, before anyone is disappointed!

 

[intim8]

topology and membranes were only mentioned in passing,

Now I'm disappointed.

By the way, I just went to pour myself a cup of coffee and soaked my donut instead. I always get them mixed up.