Comments That Make Your Day

[Smuttyandfun]

I got two nice DM's recently.

This one on "A Perfect Christmas."

My goodness my goodness my goodness

Comments:

Such a wonderful story. It’s hard to make me feel joy, but you did.

Thanks. Kind of an unexpected joy.

And I liked this comment, on my most recent story, "Shared and Loving It."

You're a great sexy writer!

 

[StillStunned]

Another one on One Orgasm At A Time, from @TheLobster:

I recall there being some TV series where a guy is forced to right the wrongs he'd inflicted on other people by some karmic justice contrivance. This is basically it but with orgasms.

(Yes, that's a hint you should make this into a series. It even has 01 in the title already!)

I can't deny that the story was inspired by some of the old shows like Sliders, Quantum Leap, even Voyagers! and so on. But with orgasms.

And yes, the idea is for it to become a series. As soon as I can decide who she has to do next.

 

[TheLobster]

Found it! The title’s My Name is Earl. I recall it being pretty funny.

But yes, Sliders and similar sci-fi works were quite clear inspirations in your story. Looking forward to further episodes

 

[StillStunned]

Found it! The title’s My Name is Earl. I recall it being pretty funny.

I rewatched the show only last year. It's hilarious, and extremely well crafted. But I have to admit it wasn't in my mind while I was writing.

But yes, Sliders and similar sci-fi works were quite clear inspirations in your story. Looking forward to further episodes

Thanks!

 

[Kumquatqueen]

Two different Anons on the same story:

Haha. Excellent. Sniggered out loud at the reed warblers.

and

Should have left the sissy wimp cuck there and gone off to enjoy more time with Jack and Jill. Let the loser crawl home.

I'm particularly amused as it was a foray into LW and wondered if wife-swapping would be immune from the 'cuck shit' contingent. The guy in question is in fact Jack - the confused commenter is actually proposing Jill leave him there to go off with the other couple! I suspect the commenter didn't get to the end of the story - all 1 page of it...

At least someone liked the birds!

Jack and Jill Went Up the Hill

 

[StillStunned]

I'm going to have to start charging for these story prompts....

 

[Mastered_again]

From a pm:

I also found the awkward conversation between Linda and Marge sexy

Whodda thunk that's what it takes?

 

[VallesMarineris]

Just received this comment for my Geek Pride entry, https://literotica.com/s/shoshin :

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Absolutely the best thing I’ve read in a while. I feel like this was written for me You’re the reason I decided to finally make an account after like 7 years of lurking on this site. I wanted to do a private message but it’s awaiting verification Great work!!

No spoilers, but the story is written in 1st person as a woman, a very special woman. So I can't stop wondering what Anonymous meant by "I feel like this was written for me." Stay tuned.

 

[Publius68]

I have had several good comments on my latest series, Sylvan Courtyard, but here is my best yet, from a regular favorite commenter, who doesn;t wuite seem to get that this is exactly what I am always trying to do...

Perhaps it’s late onset ADHD, but I find group scenes, even threesomes (either in prose or on film) tedious and boring. It’s a bother to keep all that genitalia in perspective. It all seems passionless and more like a multiplayer workout session than a situation devoutly to be wish’d.

But then, you turn the paradigm on its head with Susan’s hidden agenda. It was no longer about a dude fucking two babes. It became a game of chemin de fer wherein Ken became tertiary and Susan was slowly attempting to seduce Becky.

It’s so much more fun to be on the inside of secret than to encounter triple mutual masturbation.

God, I hate you SO much!

 

[Agent0069]

Oh, I have one too now:

by cleareyedguy  on 21 hours ago

“In rereading for foreshadowing,” a phrase not common in wanklit, there are a bunch of early hints that I missed the first time around. Kudos

 

[TheLobster]

I love how "wanklit" is such an honest yet strangely appreciative name for literary smut. I need to start using it.

 

[Inkent]

Just had this pop up from Legacybad at the end of my first attempt at a lengthy down the rabbit hole type of story Action, Reaction and Consequences.

"Indont know if the right way to put it is that "I enjoyed it" bc it was gritty AF. I think it was a it overdone at times, although i dont doubt for a second the evil lengths governments go to protect their interests, sometimes it felt too sloppy, like Smith and Jones didnt cared who knew or found out what had happened. But I take is hard to make all the pieces fit seamessly. Tanya/Tammy's character was interesting although like with Jones and Smith's was a bit overdone with the crazyness. In the end I think is a hell of a story it hooked me up since the begining and never let go until the end. It really was about the four riders coming down trampling everyone. I think thr ending was appropriate for all parties involved. 5/5"

That's given me a nice feeling that somebody enjoyed, and got into, the story

 

[OffNSFW]

Well, this was nice. To whomever wrote it, thanks to you as well.

by Anonymous user on 2 hours ago
I was crying by the end, thank you. And then you mentioned THX 1138, Blade Runner: The Director's Cut, and Repo Man.

Thank you, damn it, thank you. I turned 60 this year and there is one of my lives I never told anyone and you told it.

(From The Virgin Islands, my entry for this year's Geek Pride event.)

 

[StillStunned]

On A Fool Not to Fuck:

where to from here?

Well, @unclemerv77, the plan is to write an instalment for the Summer Loving contest. Provisionally called "Too Far Not to Fuck".

 

[Kumquatqueen]

I laughed so much at this compliment on Conference Collaboration:

"Excellent read though rather disconcerting to read about my dad's favourite restaurant in an erotic short story. The baby octopus starter was amazing."

(A small, non-erotic, part of the story takes place in the institution of the Eraina Taverna in Cambridge, now sadly closed. Never had a starter there, myself.)

 

[AlexFourways]

On A Fool Not to Fuck:

Well, @unclemerv77, the plan is to write an instalment for the Summer Loving contest. Provisionally called "Too Far Not to Fuck".

StillStunned, YMMV, but surely Too Close... would fit better, but reviewing the series, you have a Early, Late, Cold, Hot, so possibly I have given you another title . Of couse in a State Side situation, anything closer than a day's drive is (as I understand it) close.

 

[StillStunned]

StillStunned, YMMV, but surely Too Close... would fit better, but reviewing the series, you have a Early, Late, Cold, Hot, so possibly I have given you another title . Of couse in a State Side situation, anything closer than a day's drive is (as I understand it) close.

My stories are set somewhere in Britain. The summer story will probably involve a European holiday.

But honestly, the titles of these stories aren't very profound, and only vaguely related to the actual events.

 

[TheLobster]

My stories are set somewhere in Britain. The summer story will probably involve a European holiday.

But honestly, the titles of these stories aren't very profound, and only vaguely related to the actual events.

The holidays need to span multiple chapters, one of which should be about a visit to the Monte Carlo racing track. Then you can finally use the title idea you missed in your other series.

“2 Fast 2 Fuck”

 

[orangecurious]

This is beautiful.
I am someone who is also clueless about the world of flirting. This is the sort of thing I'd dream of happening to me
Wonderful 5-star story
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Was sorry to see it end -- might a sequel be in the cards?
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Fabuloius.
by Anonymous user on 12 hours ago
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You got to tell us that her other job is as a librarian!
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I was initially attracted by the pun in the title but was completely and tenderly blown away. This story is so wonderfully lovely!
Thank you for sharing this balm
I'm now off to your other works!
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Great read x
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C'est magnifique! 5+fave.

What a great story! Loved it loved it loved it!
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Enormous fun, and very hot! Thank you for this one. There’s hope for the shy amongst us. Suck it up, Maya.
by Anonymous user on 05/26/2024
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I loved the story as I experienced something similar.
Earle
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Sublimely sexy, the erotic tension at the end so thick you could cut it with a knife, as they are totally locked onto each other and can't wait to be back together, skin to skin. And earlier, you capture perfectly their awkwardness without getting cringy, a superb accomplishment. I love this piece, a seductive acquaintances to friends to lovers. Totally 5 stars no question.


Sweets ;-) Nerds in lust finding their way.

it seems my Geek Pride story Between The Spreadsheets is going down well. The comment about the librarian made me laugh and it wasn't something i had even thought about

 

[Dark_Logan_]

I’ve a new favourite comment as of today

Criticism and a 1 star review because the reader couldn’t ‘load the story into a text reader and listen to it’ because of ellipses, compound words and hyphenation!!!

I’m still scratching my head on how his preference to listen and not read is my issue

 

[TheLobster]

Clearly, the only allowed punctuation mark, if punctuation is even necessary, without exception, should be, in fact, a comma

 

[Kumquatqueen]

I’ve a new favourite comment as of today

Criticism and a 1 star review because the reader couldn’t ‘load the story into a text reader and listen to it’ because of ellipses, compound words and hyphenation!!!

I’m still scratching my head on how his preference to listen and not read is my issue

The clean text which Lit outputs shouldn't be a problem for Jaws, Dragon, or even free text readers, which generally cope fine with all of those, just don't put emphasis where you'd like.

I was impressed recently with a free epub reader which even managed words in other languages to a reasonable standard.

A reader may not have the vision to read, but there is software available.

 

[THBGato]

This comment on The Third Date got a squeal and chair-dance-of-joy from me this morning:


Not just the lovely words, but who it was from: if you haven't read any Proseinagarden yet, I'd highly recommend you do. She's got a real range, from intense passionate shorts like Sexy Magnum Opus to longer, but incredibly rewarding slow burns like Finest of Pearls (personal fave) and creature features like Nightwatch. All brilliant.

 

[AlexFourways]

I got a rare comment from SkaamPlaasMeisie on The Reunion and the Orgy
"A lot of hot and fast action, in the right mix. 5 stars and favorite!
The four guys on one woman can work, but with five women, it makes a large number of guys. I lost the plot several times, but got through it by enjoying the action described, and not to worry what the action-bringer were up to a short while ago.
I'm undecided on whether I like the closure part, but it does provide context. For now, I'll continue to read it."

I appreciate both the positive feedback (any feedback), but with nineteen men and five women, I did try to keep it to five woman centred stories. I also kept names alphabetically seperate (No Ed, Eric and Evan, or Kate, Karen and Kath).
As this is a One Off story, I provide closure for those who want it and to reduce (not eliminate) the call for Chapter 2!

 

[AlexFourways]

My stories are set somewhere in Britain. The summer story will probably involve a European holiday.

But honestly, the titles of these stories aren't very profound, and only vaguely related to the actual events.

Sorry StillStunned. Didn't realise you were a fellow Brit. In that case:
Too Close == a twenty minute brisk walk, not half hour drive on a Trunk Road (Interstate)
Too Far == a six plus hour drive from home, or a similar flight time (allowing for airport secturity and boarding/alighting).
YMMV!