Comments That Make Your Day

[LustyScribe]

Is that what it translated to? I tried Googling it and it came up nonsense, I thought it was spam.

Edit: okay so now I feel silly thinking it was just a spam bot or something.

Shows as Javanese for me, which seems right. (I'm a teacher of English learners and a student of languages, and love to study them) This would indicate your reader is probably from in or near Indonesia. Pretty impressive, if you think about it. More so when you realize English could be even a third or fourth language (or more).

 

[Djmac1031]

Shows as Javanese for me, which seems right. (I'm a teacher of English learners and a student of languages, and love to study them) This would indicate your reader is probably from in or near Indonesia. Pretty impressive, if you think about it. More so when you realize English could be even a third or fourth language (or more).

Yeah definitely put a new perspective on it, especially since it's the only comment.

Plus I really thought it was just spam. My initial attempt to translate just came up with a bunch of weird links I didn't trust.

 

[LustyScribe]

Yeah definitely put a new perspective on it, especially since it's the only comment.

Plus I really thought it was just spam. My initial attempt to translate just came up with a bunch of weird links I didn't trust.

Glad to help!

 

[oneagainst]

So I spent several months on my latest story, "Between Angels And Demons."

I knew even while writing it that it isn't going to draw a huge audience. It's part 3 of a supernatural fantasy tale, it's pretty long (for me, anyway, 7 pages) and not much sex.

Still, I've been hoping it finds an audience.

And in a way I suppose it has. The first rating shortly after it published early this morning was a One Bomb.

And then just a little while ago came my first comment.

Made my day? No, not really. More like confirmed my theory that this will be my least read story.

https://imgur.com/a/Q6oOpgl

"A very good story, an easy five-star, beautifully finished" - reckon you've at least got the Indonesian market sown up

 

[MelissaBaby]

I struggled in coming up with an idea for the Oggbashan Heroism Challenge. Heroism in some form has been a theme in a number of my stories, and everything I came up with seemed redundant. Then one day, as I pulled into a parking space at the supermarket, I noticed that the car in the space in front of me had an EMT license plate.

The story came to me in a flash. A couple of paramedics. They don't usually work together, their personalities clash. But over the course of an emotional shift, they get to know more about each other and eventually...I'm sure you can guess where it goes.

Unfortunately, I did not know squat about the subject. So, I gave myself a crash course in all things paramedic. While I did not get the story done in time for the challenge, it has been well received and reviews like these make me feel the research was well worth it.

 

[Publius68]

I struggled in coming up with an idea for the Oggbashan Heroism Challenge. Heroism in some form has been a theme in a number of my stories, and everything I came up with seemed redundant. Then one day, as I pulled into a parking space at the supermarket, I noticed that the car in the space in front of me had an EMT license plate.

The story came to me in a flash. A couple of paramedics. They don't usually work together, their personalities clash. But over the course of an emotional shift, they get to know more about each other and eventually...I'm sure you can guess where it goes.

Unfortunately, I did not know squat about the subject. So, I gave myself a crash course in all things paramedic. While I did not get the story done in time for the challenge, it has been well received and reviews like these make me feel the research was well worth it.

I haven't had the time to read past the first page on this one yet, but it is in my Read Later list. What I read did sound very "in the know".

 

[ShelbyDawn57]

Short and to the point...
Thank you @Jacktacular

"I’m just…… WOW! ️️️️️"

On Savage Daughter

 

[gordo12]

One thing I really like is a reader going through and reading several stories in your portfolio and then leaving multiple comments:

Wheelchair Girl:

10 Stars!!! I can’t believe that I have never read this til today!! I have read several of your other works, several times, and decided to read more of your works. I will now read more.. Sorry I can’t sign in and am forced to post as Anonymous. Wish I could Favorite this one and your Western stories.
Thank you for sharing your talents with us!
Munchie184

Hidden Boss:

Another 5 star submission! Excellent read, with enjoyable Characters and plot. Wonderful!
Munchie184

Homeless:

Dang! 5 Stars, again. Excellent job on this emotional rollercoaster.
Thanks for the entertainment!
Munchie184

 

[Publius68]

It has been gratifying to see a bunch of comments on my first installation of new stories about my character Alistaire.
It had been so long since the prior stories were posted here, I took some good advice and published a What Has Gone Before and Character Synopsis along with the first chapter in the new series.
These two comments made my day by giving me a good laugh, and buy letting me know I needed to make a short but very important edit...

From @vanye

From the synopsis, I'm not sure how this is erotic horror

And from another commenter

Why is this in erotic horror? While there is some irony in that…

 

[StillStunned]

It's taken a fortnight, but I finally got my first comment on The Dome 03: Over the Edge:

A very good story in a distopian world. I just had to keep reading, even with the minimal erotic content.
Lots of loose ends flapping around, including in Mother's mind.
I have questions, but expect that you will provide answers in due course.

Thanks, @AlexFourways, glad you're enjoying it! I'm actually doing a bit of plotting with this series, so hopefully all the questions will be resolved before the end.

 

[Publius68]

Two comments today that between them sort of encapsulate what it is that I try to do when writing here. It is nice to see that be noticed.

First, on my new Alistaire's Summer series, chapter one:

Such an amazing work! Your slow build of the characters and storyline are magnificent. You always temper your storyline with just enough reality that it could possibly happen and to me, that is gold.

Obviously, nothing I write is EVER going to happen... I just try to make it dead easy for even the laziest of skeptics to go ahead and willingly suspend disbelief.

And since it has been two years since Alistaire's last ride, I am getting a whole lot of comments from re-readers and new readers who want to start from the beginning. This one from Alistaire Too, chapter one, from @DwarfLord50

See, that comment there at the end about the Jelly Bellies is what sets you apart from others. The humor and clever comments is what I love. Well done.

I think it is a much bigger emotional risk to write comedy than it is to write sex. Making blood flow as you wish in your reader is easy. Making them laugh is harder, and more dangerous. Dull sex is still sex. Dull comedy is death.

 

[gordo12]

A few comments collected over the last few days.

April Fool - No Longer

Brilliant plot!

Very good story. For a 750 word one. If I remember correctly in real life world. I thought California it's not illegal. You don't have to tell people if you have an STD. Hopefully those laws changed.

A nice, taut 750. Well worth four stars.

Homeless

I like the story , but did not like the end for A hole Kurt

One night In Dodge City

Once again I read this fine ode of lust and horniness! Poor Conrad is slaving away to provide a comfortable site for Bart to fertilize Emily’s egg.. lol.
5 stars and a merry yippee ki yay for another wonderful read!!!
Thanks for the entertainment!!

I tend to side with Gordo12, free the floppers, bare the breasts and all other descriptions for Massive Mameries

*Authors note: Great minds think alike!

The Gun Fighter

The only problem I found was that Emily was denied the pleasure of riding Jake, while riding the faithful Steed, back to town after the dance. Such a shame. Lol
5 stars!

*Authors Note: Used that concept in another story that doesn't appear here.

Wheelchair Girl

Sorry, I had to read this again and this time, even knowing what was happening and was coming, the story was better. If the epilogue wasn’t added, I believe the story would not have been 5 star story. The epilogue was the crowning jewel that takes it over the top, and brings it full circle.
Thanks again for the entertainment. Since I gave you 10 stars yesterday, I should place you on a 5 star diet! Lol

 

[Zootonius]

Got this a week ago on Help from a Librarian. Hit exactly what this simple story was about:

It's good. him calling Michelle a goddess and treating her like one. Good descriptions of their sex. I love her private thoughts about him as she gradually accepts that he's young, virile, and fascinated with her. Their stamina is way over the top, but it's fiction, so go for it. I'm not convinced there's anything more to tell about these two. Michelle is too smart to get pregnant, and he will eventually drift away as he has incrementally fewer reasons to visit the library. But it is a fine tale all the same.

 

[Djmac1031]

Not so much a "Make Your Day" comment as it is a reminder that you can't please everyone.

Comment on my story My Daughter The Nudist, published June of last year:

olblueyes
about 2 hours ago

a bit tame for lit dont you think? my rating is average!

In fairness, olblueeyes wasn't the first to (probably) be upset at the fact that the title implies some daddy / daughter incest that never actually happens in the story.

 

[TheLobster]

title implies some daddy / daughter incest that never actually happens in the story.

You posted it in E&V without any tags that’d suggest incest so it’s really just the case of readers being unable to, well, read.

 

[Djmac1031]

You posted it in E&V without any tags that’d suggest incest so it’s really just the case of readers being unable to, well, read.

His comment was at least much more polite than this one on the same story:

Screenplayerabout 1 year ago
Idiotic. What the heck is the matter with Phil (aka you?) She's not a child, and he wouldnt be "exploiting" her, for gods sake. In fact she's far less of a child than he is - she could have taught him so much about intimacy. Theres so much more to mature sex - physical bonding - than Phil denied to them both, with much permanent damage and estrangement, because of his/your thoroughly fatuous (fat-headed) attachment to childish Sunday school mumbo jumbo, and archaic Augustinian control mechanisms. And yet he/you embraced prostitution, and the amorality of all that tawdry, scripted deception and secrecy.

Life is so short, with so few chances of experiencing something special, without a harmful downside.

You've saddened my whole day.

 

[TheLobster]

he/you

Gee, imagine writing a main character that you, the author, don’t identify with! I mean, who on Earth would ever do such a thing? Completely preposterous!

 

[Djmac1031]

Gee, imagine writing a main character that you, the author, don’t identify with! I mean, who on Earth would ever do such a thing? Completely preposterous!

I actually just found it funny / disturbing that the guy apparently feels wanting to fuck your own daughter is not only perfectly acceptable, but beneficial to both parties.

 

[Rob_Royale]

This I got today on my open marriage LW story, The Colonel's Wife. Some people think way to hard on this stuff.

Anonymous about 4 hours ago
Based on the stories of the US authors published here and the based on the comments on these stories, I am beginning to understand why america will never be great again.

 

[LustyScribe]

This I got today on my open marriage LW story, The Colonel's Wife. Some people think way to hard on this stuff.

Anonymous about 4 hours ago
Based on the stories of the US authors published here and the based on the comments on these stories, I am beginning to understand why america will never be great again.

LOL yeah, it's our erotica that's gonna bring us to our knees; yep, gotcha.
10,000 reasons we could crumble, this wouldn't be one!

 

[TarnishedPenny]

Okay, I don't normally post here, but this one actually made me catch my breath.

Just a quick note to let you know just how good 'Past, Present and Future is. You style of writing is utterly captivating and, for me, hits just the right balance between remaining hugely erotic while making me care about the characters.
Five stars all the way
Thank you

Thanks for that!

 

[oneagainst]

On my latest in LW, Some Small Mercies, a story about first love, and second love, and starting over again, again. These were literally next to each other:

"Ridiculous sheep-cuck husband, as usual here in LW."

"Brilliantly done, so full of feelings, great descriptions of love and pain. Well written, thank you."

I, uh.... um. Can't please all the people all the time??

 

[oneagainst]

On my latest in LW, Some Small Mercies, a story about first love, and second love, and starting over again, again. These were literally next to each other:

"Ridiculous sheep-cuck husband, as usual here in LW."

"Brilliantly done, so full of feelings, great descriptions of love and pain. Well written, thank you."

I, uh.... um. Can't please all the people all the time??

There's more: "Too bad about the beginning and the numerous wrong pronouns. Sticks out like sore thumbs. Couldn't read past the second paragraph"

...and yet Anon bravely soldiered on as far as the comments section....

 

[StillStunned]

@Devinter left this very nice comment on The Dome 03: Over the Edge:

Finally found the time to read it, and it was majestic. The descent down the cliff was incredibly creative, with the scorcher chasing the snack all the way down. And although I am not usually drawn to the 'type', Raurri is incredibly aluring in her own unique way. Great chapter. Managed to feel inspiring despite some truly dark moments, which is a difficult thing to pull off!

Thanks!

 

[SimonDoom]

I just received this one, to the concluding chapter of my mom-son incest series, which I finished six and a half years ago with no intention or sign of continuing:

More please and maybe anal sex too

I always appreciate when I've hooked the reader enough that they want more, even though I no longer ever follow up on the request. The anal request made me laugh because there are so many incest readers who DON'T want any hint of anal.