Let's just blame @EmilyMiller for the tentacle thing, shall we? She's not here to defend herself anyway.
Us authors need to read and comment on other authors work. Otherwise we can't complain that the punters dont!@Bazzle left these kind words on Full Moon on Old Jack's Hill:
Let's just blame @EmilyMiller for the tentacle thing, shall we? She's not here to defend herself anyway.
And thanks for reading and commenting!
It was a fun read
Very true!Us authors need to read and comment on other authors work. Otherwise we can't complain that the punters dont!
I'm glad you enjoyed it! A burst of inspiration and two days' hard work, and a lingering feeling that the sex was a bit shallow. I'm not used to writing scenes with so many actors, I suppose.It was a fun read
I have just drafted a scene that was MMFF (well mostly MFM MFM) in 3rd Person and found it a lot harder than the FMMMM scene in The Reunion and the Orgy written from the female MC POV! You can't use he much as which he (or she) is it!
I am trying to find a situation for a tentative tentacle tickle...I will find it.
My story has a tentacle moving tentatively. And some teasing, if not tickling.
And @ShelbyDawn57:
You just have to be flexible, but also careful enough so it doesn't come off as slimy.
She showed me kinks I didn't know I had.Let's just blame @EmilyMiller for the tentacle thing, shall we? She's not here to defend herself anyway.
If your tentacles have kinks in them, you probably need to rub them a bit more.
I can't, she never took the handcuffs off.
She has a knack for that.
I have got this line in my next story though "The discoordinated drunken octopus strikes again, gripping my ankles."
Pronouns are definitely the bane of writing group sex. They get confusing, but using proper names all the time sounds horribly clunky.
@buckshot6 on Full Moon on Old Jack's Hill - thanks for reading and commenting!
@Devinter on The Dome 04: Mothers. Thanks! I was never planning to write so much about life inside the Dome, until you pointed out that I should. And you were right: it adds so much to the story! Back to Xero and Raurri for the next part, though.Wonderful continuation to the saga! Not sure why, but the phrase "sought out curve of arse" felt almost poetic in the best of ways. Hehe. Obviously, the sex scene was steamy.
You could suggest it to Laurel, but I think things like that are what TAGS are for - StillStunned
used that and one click later I discovered there are 14 Pages of them at over 80 (got fed up counting - could be 100) stories a page! So 'Suck on that'
for tentacles in general - but possibly just for this case in particular! 
To be fair, I'd already published three tentacly stories here before I started to interact on the forums. Plus all the stories that I wrote that are still unpublished.So I don't think we can blame EmilyMiller
I thought you had blamed somewhere. On tentacle porn - in research for understanding VallesMarineris Nerd Girl sories (honest) I see that Anime Hentai seems more than a little obsessed with tentacles. (BTW I was stunned how close the emogi I chose looks like your avatar. Mine will when they update it!
I did blame Em. I still do. Logic be damned!
This story is about a young girl's crush (in modern terms) on her big sister's young man. Several commenters have previously discussed the period and telling the story from Clara's point of view, but this commenter has picked up on my intent of having Clara's tale transition to being more mature as she grows up in the story. It's one of my favorites and reviews like this are a reason why.
Thanks! The story does mention that he'd have been angry and hurt if it had been a human man. Also, there wouldn't have been any tentacles.
