Comments That Make Your Day

Just got this from Anonymous on Micki and the Firefighter.

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I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I am working my way through your work, the only stuff I'm reading on here at the moment. I like the love and romance so much more than the usual porn clichés. You create such interesting characters with genuine depth, real feelings and inner lives, people who the reader cares about. The roller coaster twists and turns make me smile, cry and cheer with relief for the inevitable happy ending. Thank you for sharing your gift with us, x
 
Here's a couple from my most recent story which made me smile. It's always nice to hear from people that appreciate the beauty of the slow-burn.

From Anonymous:
Outstanding! This is the kind of story I'm always HOPING to find here. Complexity, ambivalence, plot, and character development. Well-written and highly erotic. I can't wait for part 2!

From Adyitzy (who has never used the forums):
The horror aspect got me intrigued but the beautiful relationship between the siblings was what really got me hooked. This extends beyond erotica and is a genuinely great piece of writing.
 
I'm rather proud of the high proportion of positive Anonymous comments on 'A Game Of Snooker', which was posted in Loving Wives four months ago and is my most-read story. I had this one yesterday which, like some others, also explains the plot to the more simple-minded anonymous commentators (spoiler alert).

That was creative and refreshing. A LW modern Game of Thrones. Catherine plotted and set up a pre-emptive chain of events that with Matthew's help, took out the villains (and her husband's mistress) and let her escape the trap she had fallen into. 5 stars

Most of them miss that the male lead and narrator (Matthew) is driving a lot more of the story than he is letting on, but that's okay -it's still really nice to have so many positive anonymous comments in a LW story where the female lead comes out on top. I expected it to be absolutely slammed for that reason. It really showed me that LW is not just for trolls and other bottom-feeders.
 
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I've tried so many times to put into words why I write the stories I do. Anonymous did it for me just a fwe minutes ago.
On my story Halftime:
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I love the positivity in your stories, the tolerance, acceptance and love. Each tale is an emotional roller coaster and I smile and cry and smile again along with your characters. If I ever find that lamp with the genie in I will wish for the real world to be like the one you create. Thanks for another great story x
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Okay, I just got one on Life Drawing for Developing Artists that made me laugh out loud:
Anonymous
Wow, this story has everything. Futa x Male pairing, cute bff, side characters, actual plot set in context, humour, and last but not least trageideigh names. It almost feel sorry j***** off to it, same way I wouldn't on an ancient Roman bust.
Please j*** guilt-free Anon, you made my afternoon :LOL:
 
I got this one today on my most recent story. Trailer Park Trixie Pt. 02 and then he mentions a previous story. Nice that folks are enjoying my stories enough to check out my other work. Thanks to @S_Fox for the smile.

S_Fox about 2 hours ago
Loving your storytelling, (although hardly likely to be true), you weave such ordinary detail into the tale it seems entirely plausible. AND, very enjoyable. I hope you find the extra mileage I think this story has.
Hot Rod Hotties was a real growth from your early work, with clever use of the cars to provide the stories spine, this has been even better, UNTIL YOU GIVE US MORE !!
 
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