MillieDynamite
Millie'sVastExpanse
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Received this comment recently on a story published way back in September 2015 at another site.
Sort of made me smile. I've gotten much better since 2015. But that'll probably be the only one he ever reads, as it was only decently average.Loved the twist in the end, but all the grammatical errors kept pulling me out of the story. Overall, decently average.