Comments That Make Your Day

[gordo12]

Nice comment on April Fool - No Longer. I think he meant to say love, not live!

Good story. Would live to read the aftermath.

Hilariously, a reader faved all three April Fool Stories on his profile and then shortly after an anon comment appeared. Just a coincidence, I'm sure!

 

[Whanmore]

I had a guy Tell me I "took my time with this one" and its was a perfect chapter. Getting posiie comments (or really any comments) keeps me in the writing mood

 

[dmallord]

I have the first comment on my recent story; The Swarm - Unraveling the Shadows.

It deals with human trafficking and a lady samurai-like avenger posing as an FBI agent. It brings characters from two different themes I have used into the same storyline.

Anonymous1 day ago
This has been a very interesting story which sadly has a very strong ring of truth in the events written. Looking forward to more of your writings. I dont normally critique other writers vocabularly but I find yours very good in keeping your story moving.

 

[oneagainst]

@djrip I believe they're on sale at the moment....

"I need to get the missus a dress like that..." - from The Monogamists Ch. 04

 

[Candy_Kane54]

Gordo12 - I hope you don't mind if I use your thread to commemorate one of our own, Maonaigh, who passed yesterday. He was a prolific commenter and I always enjoyed getting his comments on my stories, even if he was gently correcting me on errors he found in my writings.

For example:

Next story please!
by Maonaigh
on 04/09/2020
I had meant to comment on the first chapter when it came out but got side-tracked over something and forgot about it. So now I decided to read the lot in one go and comment when finished. I was in the British military when homosexuality was still illegal and saw a number of otherwise good soldiers go down simply because they didn't conform. You deserve a lot of praise for this, Candy, although I'm sure many readers will be upset by the tragic ending (I killed off a couple of my main characters---life isn't all happy endings and writers shouldn't pretend it is). Even without the erotic passages this would have been a story to be proud of (although a lot shorter). I am looking forward to your next story.

Anticipation
by Maonaigh
on 04/17/2020
A very good illustration of the problems facing the 'outsider' in the military in the past. The final page-and-a-bit were suitably erotic but I thought the building up of the sexual tension between Alex and Virginia was better---it's the thrill of anticipation that works. Another first-rate piece of work, Candy.

Foreign country
by Maonaigh
on 04/20/2020
The past is a foreign country: they do things differently there (L P Hartley). And how things are different. There was a short article in my newspaper yesterday about a married transgender couple. The wife, while still a man, had been an army captain and had been given an official award in recognition of his work with LGBT groups in the military. Fifty years ago he would have been cashiered (dishonourably discharged in the US) and possibly even spent time in a military prison. So things have changed for the better. This was a sad and slightly bleak story showing how bigoted official policy had the potential to ruin lives without redress. Five stars excellent, Candy.

"...who you love...
by Maonaigh
on 06/25/2020
...is between you and God..." Somewhere in most of your stories, Candy, you find the perfect sentence. This is one that as an old lapsed Catholic I fully endorse (perhaps the Church's stance would be different if not governed by a bunch of old men in the Vatican). So as usual, a greatly satisfying chapter. I could have waited for Lady with the Lamp as suggested but I was in no mood for self-denial this morning (and if I had been I would have cracked sooner or later). If I can make one small criticism: near the start of the chapter you were a little heavy on the technical aspects of Judy's work. This might lose you some readers which would be a pity. Otherwise, just great.

Bitter-sweet
by Maonaigh
on 11/26/2020
A grand finish to this saga although there will be an eagerly anticipated follow-up/rounding-off with "What Dreams May Come". The bitter-sweet ending of this part brought a massive lump to this old man's throat but then, it was true to life. As you get older people around you---family, friends and others---die and the world goes on. Fine work, Candy.

If I could be allowed a minor criticism, there were two or three places where you used the same words twice about something in the same sentence. For example, when Virginia and Judy were using the dildo, you used the words "my fake cock" twice in the same sentence and fairly close together. It would have read better if a different word had been used for one of those. Still, a minor quibble that doesn't detract from the power of the story as a whole.

The following comments meant a lot to me, coming from a great writer that I felt I wasn't worthy of being mentioned in the same paragraph with ...

"...what dreams may come...
by Maonaigh
on 01/10/2021
...when we have shuffled off this mortal coil, Must give us pause..." Wonderful, absolutely wonderful. This has got to be your finest story yet, Candy. If I could attain something as lovely and powerful as this, I'd be more than satisfied. Thank you for an outstanding piece of work.

A multi-tissue story (and how!)
by Maonaigh
on 09/17/2021
Not sure if it's a good way to start the day, having my emotions battered so early in the morning, but you've surpassed yourself with this one Candy. It's probably the most powerful story about a cancer death that I've read since Chapter 3 of McKayla's Miracle (Literotica Lesbian some years ago). Congratulations, Candy---it will take a really inspired piece of writing by somebody to beat this.

Forever eighteen...
by Maonaigh
on 04/08/2022
God almighty, Candy, you certainly know how to kick the crap out of our emotions. This is a wonderful story but it's left me drained! However, it is lovely to think of Kathy and Grace forever eighteen in their own personal patch of heaven. I'll have to stop before I'm completely overwhelmed, so thank you for this.

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And his last comment ...

Off beat...
by Maonaigh
on 03/02/2023
...and off at a tangent. A very interesting (five star interesting) change of categories
and style for you, Candy. At first glance I wasn't sure how this was going to work but work it did and very well too. I quickly grew to like your trio of lovers and wonder if you can squeeze more out of them. For instance, we know Anna's story to the point where she gave up the twins; why not develop this into Anna's history after she reaches adulthood and up to the time she goes to the Blue Moon for the first time? Anyway, as it stands, an altogether enjoyable tale.

Unfortunately, I didn't get his requested story finished before he passed. Part 3 of 4 was just published today and the last part will be published next week.

Just last week we had exchanged emails as we discussed my upcoming radiation treatments and his encounters with cancer. He even mentioned his next story that he was working on. I had no idea he was close to death and he never let on to the last that he was in poor health.

To the last, he cared for the people he corresponded with, and had left instructions to his step-children to contact us and let us know about his passing. I will miss his comments and our conversations.

 

[gordo12]

Gordo12 - I hope you don't mind if I use your thread to commemorate one of our own, Maonaigh, who passed yesterday. He was a prolific commenter and I always enjoyed getting his comments on my stories, even if he was gently correcting me on errors he found in my writings.

I don't mind at all. I think we all have favourite commenters that like our work and publicly say so. Perhaps a thread acknowledging some of them would be appropriate.

And kudos to you that your writing brought him such joy and positivity in his life.

 

[gordo12]

A couple of nice comments this morning. I'm pretty sure they came from the same anon I mentioned before that faved my three April Fool stories and commented on the first one. Now the other two appear as Anons.

April Fool - Best Friends
Funny twist. Critics obviously didn't read it or are just trolls

April Fool - Gotcha
Great twist..

 

[shakna]

NIcely done , has been a wile thanks for continuing.

on Cooking with Adja.

I think it's been a year since cancer knocked me sideways, and took my memory so writing became ridiculously hard. Nice that some people still read my things.

 

[onehitwanda]

I think it's been a year since cancer knocked me sideways,

Oh, honey.

 

[dmallord]

It's sad to lose writers and those who offered constructive advice on stories. I just got out of a four-day hospital stay today and logged in to see what's up in the Lit world. This is the first thread I checked.

My sympathies to those who knew Maonaigh, and my prayers for those suffering from similar conditions. Age has a way of weighing us down.

 

[MillieDynamite]

Speaking of cancer, has anyone heard from Ogg of late?

 

[djrip]

Speaking of cancer, has anyone heard from Ogg of late?

No...

 

[MillieDynamite]

No...

Oh, that's not good.

 

[NoTalentHack]

Beloved Scars, which is about an empty nest couple finding their way back to intimacy, apparently hit close to home for a lot of people. This one made me so happy, though:

Wow. What a wonderfully told tale! There's nothing sexier than a committed, trusting relationship, where partners feel free - and safe - to explore together. Like others who have commented before me, I will tell you this hit very close to home for me, and gives me a glimmer of hope at the bottom of a dark cave. I believe I'm going to take a leap of faith and forward this to her. Thank you for sharing it!

God, if I managed to actually help a marriage with one of my stories? What the hell more could I ask for?

 

[Limnophile]

A comment on my story 'Sexbot Cafe' https://literotica.com/s/sexbot-cafe

That was fucking brilliant! Your imagination and sense of humor is off the charts. I could read this kind of fun, silly banter and hilarious descriptions all day long. Thanks for making my month so much better. You have no idea how much I needed that laugh. You totally rock!

 

[djrip]

Holy shit...!

Well written, good plot, and in the beginning, the story sounded somewhat believable. However, I stopped reading at, "No panties, and also no hair at all." When I started reading this story, I thought it was going to be about a nephew who was going to fuck or be fucked by a MATURE AUNT. Did you guys get that, an AUNT, meaning this SHOULD have been an AGE APPROPRIATE story, evidenced by (a generous amount of thick pussy hair. Because AUNTS like MOM'S, like Mother's-in-Law, Older sisters, and other (over 40) ladies should always be depicted as hairy / full bush. These ladies are at minimum usually 38-40 years old - Aunts are usually not 19.) However, this aunt was for some reason depicted as a teen girl seemingly about to model swimwear!!! Yes, she is described as if she was an 18 or 19 year old, evidenced by a "dam silly" shaved pussy -- on an aunt story, as if the plot was about bikini's and beaches. Well it was not about that either. Its a story by an author having 20 works listed on this site, who OUGHT to by now, know better than to try that. But obviously, does not knoew better because it's another attempt to "DUMP" a shaved pussy story, about a mature lady (ALWAYS HAIRY IF MATURE / OVER 40, shit if over 32-34!!!!) on readers. Not only is it not realistic (AT ALL), it may explain why this author ONLY has 481 listed followers. A SHAVED CUNT ON A MATURE AUNT! so tomorrow morning when they want to fuck again, this author destroyed that possibility because tomorrow morning, it will be a disgusting mess of razor burn, pimples, and stubble, on what could have been described as a "hairy aunt story." So, a whole 481 followers. Oh Well. djrip, I guess just continue to "BE BOLD,!!!," and keep on writing those shaved pussy (razor burn - infected hairs, pimples oozing pus) stories. Seriously, keep at it, I mean really, what author needs followers, or even ratings above 1 or 2. Go on, tell readers about how to get rid of the orange tinge from the mix of pimple blood and pus on a 3 day old - just refreshed with a razor mound of stubble. Readers love stories like that.

 

[Smuttyandfun]

Holy shit...!

Holy shit, is right! What a weird comment.

 

[djrip]

Holy shit, is right! What a weird comment.

Well it got me thinking about a Rapunzel story...

 

[Rob_Royale]

Holy shit...!

Wow. He better stay away from my storys then.

 

[oneagainst]

Holy shit...!

OMG WTFBBQ that is an AWESOME comment. You should frame that one.

That's you told. Now, out to the flogging shed.

 

[ElectricBlue]

Holy shit, is right! What a weird comment.

The guy has got firm and fixed views on what is acceptable, that's for sure.

That @djrip, what a subversive fellow he is for letting the chap down .

 

[onehitwanda]

The guy has got firm and fixed views on what is acceptable, that's for sure.

That @djrip, what a subversive fellow he is for letting the chap down .

I think @djrip wins this month's Cone of Shame.

 

[onehitwanda]

Also, this is amazing, and I am dying

 

[Voboy]

Apparently, I failed to reach this reader:

by Anonymous user on 8 hours ago

Sluts will NEVER find romance so this story is a wash. Webcam sluts are the worst! 1*

Seems to be hung up on the word "slut," which is interesting; I use it five times in the piece. Three are derisive, two are meta. And I put it in the description, since "webcam slut" seems to be one of the accepted terms in a world I don't really know everything about.

But? They can never find romance. The poor lambs.

 

[gordo12]

Holy shit...!

Holy shit is right!
We have a winner That comment beats any stupid comment I've had by a mile!