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Under the sea
Under the sea
Darling it's better
Down where it's wetter
Take it from me
Damn. Don’t know what’s higher; my admiration for your creativity, or my envy.
This story is so good, crazy and original. You packed so much plot in such a short story.
So much mystery, so many questions.
Ugh. Another I kind of hated and also found intriguing.
The author crafted the antagonist with remarkable care and sympathy.
I will be thinking about Gillian for a while now.
Maybe her story hasn't all been put to page.
Congrats on the nomination; well deserved.
Your writing delves into the complex dynamic of being human; I appreciate the skill with which you translate that understanding into building characters and plotlines which keep me reading even when I recognize that what I'm reading is not going to end as I would prefer. This story is another one of your skillful creations and reinforces the usual anticipation I have at finding a new one of yours.
But damn it's depressing. Now I have to go try to counteract what you've done.
Reading is the only way we can live more than one life. Please keep writing--you help make that possible.
MLJ
Where did all the good reviews come from? Did you write them yourself?
Another winner for NTH. He's able to breathe new life into well-known and sometimes tired tropes by crisp dialog and plot twists. Unlike other's Amorous Goods stories, the "key" here doesn't turn the holder into an erotomaniac. Great, fresh treatment!
I genuinely love this story. Thank you.
5 star brilliance! Groundbreaking! Cinematic in sweep!
Author! Author!
That is still one of my favorite things you've written.I appreciated this one, to Cuckolds and Incels:
I appreciated this one, to Cuckolds and Incels:
Thank you. It was one of the most fun things to write. Sheer, unadulterated silliness. Every word was written with the intent, "How can I make this as ridiculous as possible?"That is still one of my favorite things you've written.
Thank you. It was one of the most fun things to write. Sheer, unadulterated silliness. Every word was written with the intent, "How can I make this as ridiculous as possible?"
This segment here by you in my opinion summed up the whole mood of the exciting piece:
"Do you desire to be anally penetrated?"
"No."
"Do we have your permission to anally penetrate you?"
"Yes."
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That really says it all, and it made it so thrilling when it later happens.
oldtwit9 minutes ago
I realized this, well written, well thought out, great characters and this simple plot that needed no more.
Brilliant
I just found it amusing that someone would take the time and effort to deliver such commentary. Not that leaving a comment is hard, of course, but it's clearly a bar few readers are willing to hurdle. Still, I can appreciate the terseness.
Thanks, Gordo, I love it. Short, sweet, and Bam!
Busted and served in one fell swoop. Ya gotta love it. Thanks for sharing.
5 ️️️️️
AG31about 3 hours ago
I don't have a particular thing for inter-racial sex, but for those who do I'm sure this works really well. Good job.
Sad and worried for your beloved state today.
I'm sorry for the turmoil this has caused. More guns than brains is a bad combination.I received this anonymously through email feedback, so I can't respond to it directly. But I am deeply touched.
I have a friend living in Lewiston. Didn't hear from him for about 13 hours after finding out about it. That was a rough night, but I'm glad to say he is safe. (He's a Vietnam Vet in his 70s and living alone in the area.)
I hope any of your loved ones in the area are safe as well.
Well done. Short, hot and sweet.
Very well written and evocative for the length. 5 stars.
Sometimes you just need to get off.
But there’s more here … please continue.
Fantastic short story. I enjoyed it a lot. 5* for keeping it classy.
sweet and appropriate
Uh, sure, that can be your head canon if you want.Hoping that he just impregnated his sister…. And they continue this relationship throughout uni and beyond.
Perfect!
Alright, next time I'll write "a shaft of steel that's just reached melting point but not yet collapsed into liquid state". (Actually, that's facetious. The commenter is quite right. I used the simile as a placeholder, and didn't correct it during editing.)Nice little tale, short and nicely written. Just one thing though: a cock can't be 'a shaft of molten steel.' Molten means LIQUIFIED or MELTED...think about it.
Anonymous about 12 hours ago
I don't think this is the best sex you have writen on here and still omgfuck. Your stories are so hot i don't know how you do it
Jenn Potter, likes her some pot, but loves her meth. Thanks so much for passing on HPV
I got this one via email:
It is obviously not a public comment on a specific story, but Jenn Potter is a female character from the Alistaire Series, which has zero drug use or STD issues.
This thing has made my day simply because it is so out of Left Field.
I make up stories about this troubled rando. Did he know someone really named Jenn Potter? And who even knows that someone has passed on HPV?
Fido6 Stars best story here . Well written and I did not see the ending coming
Hidden Boss5 Stars on one of the funniest stories here
Homeless5 Stars on another great story by this author
5 Stars on their being a decent Lawyer
That's really cute. Of a series of a previous one, I think? Source?