Comments That Make Your Day

[EroticCupcake]

This comment was exactly what I wanted:

EssEssCeh on 10/30/2023

This story was deep and uncomfortable at times and I'm really happy that I pulled through it.

Writing a BDSM-story from the perspective of the uncomfortable vanilla-onlooker was truly a stroke of Genius.

 

[SyleusSnow]

My Halloween tale attracted the baleful eye of everyone's friend Overlycritical:

I usually dislike the stories with supernatural themes, but this one seemed OK with it. And that final line really nailed it! ... I liked it even if it was silly nonsense. 5*

Five stars from him is almost as good as winning the contest, right?

And earlier today, Anonymous left a less self-absorbed compliment I really appreciate:

WOW, that was sweet, erotic, sad, and happy.. so many feels. excellent job.

 

[Smuttyandfun]

My Halloween tale attracted the baleful eye of everyone's friend Overlycritical:


Five stars from him is almost as good as winning the contest, right?

And earlier today, Anonymous left a less self-absorbed compliment I really appreciate:

Wow! Overlycritical even giving out a begrudging thumbs-up like that is pretty damn close to a miracle. So, congrats!

 

[StillStunned]

Entering "weird shit" territory for Too Cold Not to Fuck:

"Sal!!! This pastrami tastes like ass!"
"Ester, how do you know what ass tastes like?"
My point, you ask? Why the hell did you name the little sister "Sal?". Is "she" a trans-man? Originally a Sicilian wannabe gangster?

Sure. Alternatively, it might be short for Sally or Sarah.

 

[onehitwanda]

That's really cute. Of a series of a previous one, I think? Source?

It's a telegram sticker set called "The Muse"

 

[j769]

“You are a dream come true.”

- work

Definitely boosted a bit of my ego

 

[Publius68]

I love that...

 

[Lighthousenorth]

" I had to find a release immediately afterwards."

Never thought I would be able to do that with words.

 

[LIDiver]

" I had to find a release immediately afterwards."

Never thought I would be able to do that with words.

Congrats! It’s what our stories hope to ultimately (or maybe penultimately) accomplish, is it not?

 

[Lighthousenorth]

Congrats! It’s what our stories hope to ultimately (or maybe penultimately) accomplish, is it not?

Sure. It really made my day.

 

[LIDiver]

Sure. It really made my day.

I admit, I adore the crass comments to my story. To be openly told someone got wet, hard, had masturbated, fucked to, or even reenacted, after reading it is incredibly arousing.

My favorite was the couple who PMed me in mid-story to say they’re actually fucking at that moment while reading it for the first time.

Ironically my wife and I fucked too after reading that comment!

 

[MediocreAuthor]

So I wrote a hundred word story for a contest on another site (you can read it here if you want).

A Mother's Secret Pumpkin
"It's full of Pumpkin Seed"

25 great comments, all of them very positive, but I think my favorite was this one

CarltonStJames
I am so grateful I wasn't drinking anything, because I would’ve sprayed it on that last line . Good micro and entry!

 

[Smuttyandfun]

Thought this was a nice comment on Breed Me. Despite the title, it's actually a romance and readers like this one seemed to enjoy it.

Loved it, an old guy who was married and had their children years ago I was never into one night stands. Nothing more beautiful than emotional and physical love combined. Maybe even at my age I can do it one more time! Regards, D

 

[StillStunned]

ScottishTexan on "Too Cold Not to Fuck". It's always nice to subvert the reader's expectations. (Good news for the three or four commenters who have asked: I'm working on a sequel for the Winter Holiday contest.)

Let me begin by repeating myself for about the ten thousandth time: I absolutely hate one-page-wonders!
However, in this case, I'll maybe make an exception if this is the first installment of a series. I'm giving you a five for a very excellent snippet. But I sincerely hope that you have more to come.

 

[gordo12]

Nice comment on April Fools - Gotcha:

Good one !

 

[RainyDayPen]

I admit, I adore the crass comments to my story. To be openly told someone got wet, hard, had masturbated, fucked to, or even reenacted, after reading it is incredibly arousing.

My favorite was the couple who PMed me in mid-story to say they’re actually fucking at that moment while reading it for the first time.

Ironically my wife and I fucked too after reading that comment!

This sounds so nice. I think I'd not mind those crass comments at all either. I rarely get that! Almost everyone is so respectable and polite. This is what you get writing stories for subby guys as a lady. Their politeness is sweet but I don't think I'd mind being told if they came and exactly how hard.

 

[Devinter]

Got this comment from @Les_Grossman24 on the story I wrote for the Literotica 25th Anniversary Challenge, Little Sister's Paradise. It's about an incest story, as the title strongly suggests, so be warned if that makes you uncomfortable.

" This absolutely floored me. The way you wrote both Max and Ophelia and the depth of their feelings was wonderful. Ophelia especially was very easy to love. I’m so happy she finally got her man. I normally don’t do this, but I am honestly begging for you to write a follow up to this. I’ve never felt this strongly about a sibling couple, but I just NEED to see them live their happily ever after. I need to see them navigate their relationship when it’s out in the open. I need to see the movie (move in) together. I also really want them to have a family. I know pregnancy is a mixed bad (bag) when it comes to incest, but Ophelia must have dreamt about carrying Max’s babies right? Why not make that a reality? I loved this story so much and I’m grateful you shared it with us, and I would be even more grateful if you shared more. Cheers! "

 

[StillStunned]

A couple of kind comments so far on Ben's Big Mistake.

@AG31:

Five stars for dramatic tension up until the reveal.

@Carnevil9:

Very hot! I especially liked the internal dialog with his dick; made the whole thing feel all the more intimate.

I always say, find someone to talk to who's more intelligent than yourself...

So far, the ratings are better than I'd expected. Lots of 5s, but enough 1s being dropped to know that people don't like first-person present-tense.

 

[Zootonius]

Got this on Part 01 of His Professor Aunt some months back,

"I hope there are many more chapters."

Turned out to be true.

 

[LIDiver]

Ha! Someone actually gave me props. My wife usually gets all the commentary!

Oh my god, to have a husband like this. What an incredibly hot story

from:
https://literotica.com/s/torys-emergence

 

[EroticCupcake]

Thanks for the nice comments on https://literotica.com/s/man-woman-and-meaning-between

@FeralSmile, @joy_of_cooking, @TheDok



I wish this had more views. My only recourse is to... write something else.

 

[NoTalentHack]

This was on someone else’s story, which I will not name, because that just seems mean.

Instead of whining … the author might want to consider why the reaction to their story was not as they hoped.

Perhaps reading NoTalentHack's recent essay might help them come to grips with the LW crowd a little better.

Oh, and FYI: it was left on a ridiculous burn story, complete with an ex-military protagonist.

 

[StillStunned]

My new story Too Hot Not to Fuck went up today, and has drawn two lovely comments so far:

From @AchtungNight:

Awesome story, especially the ending. Hope Aisha and Sal have attraction to each other for the next chapter… if you’re into that. Thanks for the inspiration.

And from the always-supportive @Smuttyandfun:

Really well done! Fun story of a very lucky guy. Now I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Thanks, both of you!

 

[EroticCupcake]

A nice, anonymous person said about "Like a Rolling Stone"

There are a few stories that are too good for this site. This is one of them. The fact it isn't a straight-five star isn't a surprise. Remember, "Pearls and swine."

That story was very personal to me (which also makes it difficult for me to evaluate objectively).

The below two stories are basically sisters, dealing with the same themes, loneliness and travel and how to balance morality against sexual attraction. One is scoring much better than the other. I'd imagine it's due to:
1) I'm getting better as I write more.
2) Like a Rolling Stone is about NOT having sex for the right reasons, whereas the other is HEA.

It's reasonable to take a scoring hit when you break genre convention. It's okay, so long as the story is worth it to you, but it certainly helps to get nice comments like this one.

The best way to find people to read something you love is to write something else you love.

 

[StillStunned]

A wave of comments on Too Hot Not to Fuck just now, most of them very kind:

From @Fatdog25:

That was a fun little surprise at the end. It sounds like that may have not been the end of that, either. This is definitely worth 5️.

Ganymede69 kept it simple:

Nice!️️️️️

@muskyboy added:

FTDS 5/5

(I'm not sure what FTDS means, but from the context I gather it's a good thing.)

Our old friend Anonymous was also kind:

Well done. Great anticipatory ending- I am looking forward to the next installment.

And then there's this (I'm not giving the user name because I don't want to make fun of people here):

I wasn't able to get more than a few paragraphs into it. You need to use an editor! Your grammar and sentence structure is elementary level, and with the character name "flip-flops", it's obvious that you didn't use an outline. Good writing is created by planning, not by "just winging it" as you go along.

And Sal for female name? Remember your audience. Every time I hear or see the name Sal, I (like most people) think of a balding Cicilian.

I really don't know what to think of this. There are two names: the girlfriend and the sister. No flip-flops, as far as I can tell. Was it confusing to refer to the sister (Sal) before she makes an actual appearance? Perhaps, but for an I/T story I wanted to make it clear that she'd make an appearance sooner or later, and it wasn't just about the girlfriend (Aisha). It's also important story-wise to highlight that the narrator still has sexual fantasies about his sister, even when he's in bed with his girlfriend. But perhaps this isn't clear if you aren't "able to get more than a few paragraphs into it". Fine.

I do take offence at the comments about needing an editor, though. I'll back my command of English against anyone's.

Here are those first few paragraphs:

Christmas groceries. What a way to spend Saturday. Hearing the door slam shut, I was glad it was my parents and not me.

I was visiting them for the first time since uni began. Celebrating Christmas and showing off my girlfriend, Aisha. We'd been going out for more than two months, driving everyone around us sick with how in love we were.

I was also hoping to introduce her to my twin sister Sal. But Sal hadn't got home yet, and Aisha had to leave again this morning to get to her own parents.

So I snuggled up against Aisha's warm body under the thick blanket. I let my hand slide across the curve of her hips to her arse. She murmured and wriggled against me, and I felt my cock come awake with a twitch.

Her thigh felt wonderful in my hand, firm and plump. I rubbed her beneath the blanket, drawing murmurs and sighs from her until she glanced over her shoulder at me. "So we're awake, are we?"

Is it Tolkien? Perhaps not. Is it the appropriate diction for a first-year uni student just waking up? Well, no-one else seems to mind.

And at least I know how to spell "Sicilian".