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My Holiday Contest entry, Father Christmas, is being well received so far. It is a sweet, kids’, fairytale romance, just with loads of Santa Sex, meaningless and not so. At 33k words, I’m surprised to have comments already.
P68 you out did yourself this time. A totally fresh concept fun and sexy at the same time. Five big ones. I don't know where you came from, but I'm glad you arrived at Lit.
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Publius68 said:
My Holiday Contest entry, Father Christmas, is being well received so far. It is a sweet, kids’, fairytale romance, just with loads of Santa Sex, meaningless and not so. At 33k words, I’m surprised to have comments already.
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Your description on this one cracked me up.
 
StillStunned said:
A wave of comments on Too Hot Not to Fuck just now, most of them very kind:

From @Fatdog25:


Ganymede69 kept it simple:


@muskyboy added:

(I'm not sure what FTDS means, but from the context I gather it's a good thing.)

Our old friend Anonymous was also kind:


And then there's this (I'm not giving the user name because I don't want to make fun of people here):

I really don't know what to think of this. There are two names: the girlfriend and the sister. No flip-flops, as far as I can tell. Was it confusing to refer to the sister (Sal) before she makes an actual appearance? Perhaps, but for an I/T story I wanted to make it clear that she'd make an appearance sooner or later, and it wasn't just about the girlfriend (Aisha). It's also important story-wise to highlight that the narrator still has sexual fantasies about his sister, even when he's in bed with his girlfriend. But perhaps this isn't clear if you aren't "able to get more than a few paragraphs into it". Fine.

I do take offence at the comments about needing an editor, though. I'll back my command of English against anyone's.

Here are those first few paragraphs:


Is it Tolkien? Perhaps not. Is it the appropriate diction for a first-year uni student just waking up? Well, no-one else seems to mind.

And at least I know how to spell "Sicilian".
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It looks like you got a very lengthy comment, most likely from the same reader with a hair fetish that left a scathing rebuke about a women being shaved on a story by djrip.

Who knew a little hair could bring out such intense emotions, enough to inspire him to leave a nearly full page comment? Guess it takes all kinds. But to say this guy has issues, would be putting it lightly.
 
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Smuttyandfun said:
It looks like you got a very lengthy comment, most likely from the same reader with a hair fetish that left a scathing rebuke about a women being shaved on a story by djrip. Who knew a little hair could bring out such intense emotions that would inspire him to leave a nearly full page comment? Guess it takes all kinds.
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Yes, I just saw that one. I had to read it three times to understand that the reader was mostly complimenting me. Well, if we write to evoke emotions in our readers, I'd say mission accomplished with this one.
 
Erozetta said:
How Much More (Romance, 16.6K words) Winter Holiday submission involving a patient falling for her therapist with everything coming to the forefront at a Holiday party another therapist invites her to. There are two lines in one scene I wish I had changed and I'm kicking myself for forgetting about them on my last read through. No one seems to have minded so far. But someone did complain that the story wasn't finished? I'm pretty sure it's finished...
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I think "not finished" should be interpreted as "I wanted to keep reading". So it's probably a compliment.

And if there are only two sentences that you want to change in the whole 16.6k words, you probably did a good job. Particularly if no-one else has noticed them.
 
Smuttyandfun said:
It looks like you got a very lengthy comment, most likely from the same reader with a hair fetish that left a scathing rebuke about a women being shaved on a story by djrip.

Who knew a little hair could bring out such intense emotions, enough to inspire him to leave a nearly full page comment? Guess it takes all kinds. But to say this guy has issues, would be putting it lightly.
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Anonybush! Great comment. It's too bad my recent story with several non-bare pussies was in LS; incest seems to be his usual haunt.
 
djrip said:
Anonybush! Great comment. It's too bad my recent story with several non-bare pussies was in LS; incest seems to be his usual haunt.
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I assume you read his comment. I couldn't believe he was still ranting about someone being shaved. Looks like he's got some time on his hands, it's just too bad he doesn't put it to better use!
 
djrip said:
"DUSTING!"
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I stand corrected, you're right, there was a dusting of hair. But he provided the same hideous description of what happens when it grows back, though. And he also claims he might have a little bit of a hair fetish. Well, duh.
 
Smuttyandfun said:
I stand corrected, you're right, there was a dusting of hair. But he provided the same hideous description of what happens when it grows back, though. And he also claims he might have a little bit of a hair fetish. Well, duh.
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I was just quoting his most used word 😂
 
I cannot get enough comments on Eldritch Pact. It's my baby, and I never get tired of hearing people praise it. :LOL:

o97t5s 2 days ago
I can echo the sentiments of everyone else here: This was a really amazing story! L'ventia is a very interesting antagonist/frenemy for Stavos, and the story does a very good job conveying Stavos' helplessness in the face of her overwhelming power. Also, the ending was just perfect. I'd agree that it's a great place to leave this particular story, but I'm definitely looking forward to whatever else you have planned for this universe.
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From Anonymous, on my Winter Holiday story The (un)Lucky Girl :

" It didn’t even seem like fiction,it was so well written! This story has it all, and most of all it takes you from drama,to finding love and compassion, to the best ending ever! Great job on making this story so real, I was in tears more than once during this excellent story! Bravo! "

Quite pleased with having made such an emotional impact with the story.
 
"I really enjoyed your story. The opening pages set the scene so well---I felt right at home with all the characters in their shared house in Utrecht. I especially liked the affection and respect that the characters showed for each other. The story was believable and compelling. Thanks for sharing it."
On my story Hot Night, Cold Winter Storm

Best comment I've received so far. I tried to make the characters show proper respect towards each other, and it seems it has worked well.
I saw there is another thread about funny negative comments. Luckily I've not had any negative comments so far.
 
One that came in by email (why is that a thing, by the way?):

Bens big mistakes was hot
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You know what? I agree. It's not my kink, either the NC or the twist with the transgender woman, and in particular not first-person present-tense, but it was still pretty intense to write, and I still think it's intense to read.
 
So, @StillStunned, you're still stunned by that, right?
StillStunned said:
One that came in by email (why is that a thing, by the way?):


You know what? I agree. It's not my kink, either the NC or the twist with the transgender woman, and in particular not first-person present-tense, but it was still pretty intense to write, and I still think it's intense to read.
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I submitted a story for the Winter Holiday contest about somthing I was painfully familiar with - B-52s sitting on alert, loaded full of nuclear weapons and the crews that remained ready to go at a moment's notice. The Pilots Conjugal Christmas has been attracting some amazing comments!

Great story! I appreciated all the details, from the technical details to their dialogue - it made the story feel very authentic. Well done!

Wonderful story, rich with details and little side events. It must have been tough on those crews, wanting to fly but knowing their mission would mean the end of civilisation. 5 thermonuclear stars.

Yes, I know I'm strange but I find the mix of tech talk and sex highly arousing,

Some of this would probably go over readers heads unless you served on a flightline. Fortunately for me, I did. My planes were a "bit" faster than these but the rhythm and flow is similar. (Sounds like a Navy guy)

So much more than the typical erotic story. Super well done.

Excellent, just the hint of the preparedness of the air force waiting for the alarm and a lovely 'romance'.

🐶
 
"Very immersive storytelling - your writing makes it feel like it could be a true story, even though it is such an unlikely scenario, but that is what makes it so compelling. The intro may have been a bit too long, but setting the scene of a normal student home definitely added to the reality. Well done all round - hot and kinky bt not overboard and ridiculous. Every character had a unique persona that you followed through accurately, start to finish, and I am also glad that Steve and Fleur were left to their own story and didn't somehow also get involved. Going to read your other work now, looking forward to it!"

Another lovely comment on Hot Night, Cold Winter Storm
 
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