onehitwanda
Venatrix Lacrimosal
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- May 20, 2013
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Excellent story, brought tears to my eyes as I read, it was lovely. Reading about her lost love Bonnie, remembering all of the great times that they shared together. As I grow older and lose more friends the memories become more precious and important to me. Thank you, for sharing.
I looked very fondly at the "report" button for that one.are you implying that my puns are cataclysmic? Or merely catastrophic.
I'll go to catechism to say Ave Meowria in penance.
Great story!
I just wanted to say thanks. Your writing started me on a reading journey and it has literally changed my life. If not for the way you captured my attention in Elysium, I would have never found the wonders of reading for pleasure. After reading most of your stories, I found myself craving the stories more than the spicy scenes and turned to actual books. A big part of it was that I wanted to escape my reality and turned to fantasy books such as ACOTAR and basically any NA/ Adult dark fantasy
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I know I sound like a true fanboy, but I can promise you its purely for trying to support you and getting more reading material from a favoured author. I hope you have a lovely festive season and just thanks again for creating stories that captivate me each time I open this website. Nowadays it only happens when I have no more books to read.
it's strange that I helped someone grow with smut that I concocted.Feedback that crafted and lovely, I don't care if you're institutionalized.
"Want my details?"
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"Would it be wrong of me to put money in your commissary account?"
(Well done Wanda)
Sounds like two characters from one of the stranger BBC children's shows from the 1970s.Logorrhea and cerebration
avidreader123 3 days ago
Wow, chills up my spine. Excellent tale of vengeance.
Helen1899 17 days ago
As worthy of 5* as any story I have read on here. Well written great characters, a change from some of the garbage published on here.
I had thirteen added by the same person in a day a few weeks back. Probably as bookmarks to read in the future. Maybe it was your guy!Okay, so not a comment.
But just checked the home page to find someone has added 16 of my stories to Favorites!
Now I realize that in all probability, they haven't actually read all 16, certainly not that fast, and are probably just Bookmarking them.
Still. SIXTEEN stories???
I hope they enjoy them. @Emberburning if you're ever in the forum and see this, let me know what you think.![]()
Well that sure turned out far better than expected. 5*, Gordo I've only read your three romance stories and now this one in the time I've been following you. To my way of thinking your stories definitely fit in here. I would so hate to see you stop posting. I've gone back to re-read Homeless several times. It's that damn good! Thank You!!
High praise for a one off holiday piece!This deserves a second chapter
What a bunch of lame-os!Kind of the opposite. I logged into Chat Room Lobby and said "Hi" and some guy I don't know said OH MY GOD IT'S GIRL FUR and someone else said LOL. It was weird and embarrassing and obviously sarcastic. And nobody would talk to me after that.
Thanks!I love it. This is masterfully written. There is no lull in the story, nothing is omited or unnecessary elaborate. The suspense and the peaks are perfectly spaced.
The way you throw the reader into the story from the first sentence and give explanations and details as you go is perfect. It grasps the attention and never let's it go.
I wouldn't mind seeing this story revisited sometime. Perhaps Sligh returns home with his new wife to claim the title of his house and perhaps experienced a visit from a certain Terana? (threesome?)
5 Stars and a favorite! What a fun read. Loved the twist, too. Well done!
No, it was a good story!I woke up this morning to find this from @Smuttyandfun on Ben's Big Mistake:
Thanks! (And I hope I didn't guilt you into commenting.)
Kinda proud on that one. Managing to write a love story between two total strangers, with only a couple of days passing. Christmas in the Outback.Welcome back! Some of us have sorely missed your prose. You did a great job with the romance between Clancy and Ginger. It's very warm and caring. Definitely a love story not based strictly on lust. I thoroughly enjoyed it. 4/5
Great story! It felt a bit rushed, but that's not a bad thing. I think a six or seven pager might have been about right. Perhaps draw out the lawsuits and police activities a bit more - add some drame about whether they'll turn out the right way. But even as it stands, it was a great story. Thanks!