Comments That Make Your Day

[LIDiver]

It REALLY juices me (ok, sometimes even literally!) when I reach other couples.

From:
https://literotica.com/s/torys-emergence

“Such a hot story! I HAD to roleplay it with my husband tonight, and it was some of the HOTTEST sex we’ve had in a while. Y’all should write more stories.”

 

[Djmac1031]

I've been feeling bad lately about not writing a new Jenna chapter.

This comment is definitely inspiring me to try and get back at it. Left on the last published chapter:

Anonymousabout 1 hour ago
An absolutely brilliant story series. Not much else to say really. Jenna is a great character but the writing is so good that all the characters are clear in my imagination. I would prefer Trish or Ellie physically, but I certainly have more appreciation for the more willowy firecracker redhead! Bravo.

 

[gordo12]

Nice comment on Following Laura's Footsteps:

good story, especially reading Nov. 18th

I have no idea why Nov 18th applies to it. I couldn't find anything relevant???

 

[EmilyMiller]

I've been feeling bad lately about not writing a new Jenna chapter.

This comment is definitely inspiring me to try and get back at it. Left on the last published chapter:

Willowy firecrackers are definitely underrated.

Em

 

[onehitwanda]

on "The lost girl of Avignon", and exactly the effect I was hoping for:

Wanda, Wanda: You are you even when you wander off your well beaten path into the noir. This was hugely enjoyable. Thank you!!

 

[onehitwanda]

And this one made me a bit sad.

Even today society is not as accepting as it claims to be. With all the happy Christmas movies that are so utterly sweet, you get an instant attack of caries and diabetes in the opening scene we rarely have any lesbian couples in them, and certainly not any like yours. I doubt we will see something like this on TV anytime soon so your lesbian romance stories are greatly appreciated.

 

[Duleigh]

My Winter Holiday story Happy Hogswatch! is a fan fiction of Terry Pratchett's discworld and in a footnote I wished my work properly honored Terry. A couple of hours after posting this comment appeared:

You sure did Sir Terry proud. I love that there are talented people like you keeping the Disc alive. This was a wonderful, touching holiday story. I gave you five stars but wish I could give more. I hope you and yours have a happy holiday season and good luck with the contest. Thanks

 

[intim8]

Post your comments when a fan makes your day.

On a non-Aces story I put up while Aces was on pause:
"Please continue the Ace series"

On the first story I posted here:
"I love the family dynamics, the deep love and easy intimacy between Ally and George, and the gently sexy story line. A very excelllent story!"

On one of my first stories ("Last Summer" in First Time):
"I hate/ love when a story on lit makes me cry. Good job. Do it again."
"This is a must read for all who love really good and inspired literature." (just having it called "literature" made my day)
"I don't love your story." (It's a callout to something in the story, not a neg at all)

Jeez, this sounds like the promotional blurbs on a book. Ooops

 

[Jackie.Hikaru]

The sand bath, sublimation, condensation, etc. Really good. Often when separating and concentrating volatiles that are sensitive to increased temperature, it helps to pull at least a partial vacuum, and a small hand vacuum pump with some associated tubing and gauges is just the kind of compact steampunk thing that would fit in here.

This critique of my description of an alchemy scene in Wölfin made me smile.
But now I'm smacking myself for not making my story more steampunky. This reader was totally right.

 

[SeraphNocturne]

This lovely comment on Feather and a Knife was first thing I saw today. I thought it was quite the sweetest. Absolutely fits for "Comments That Make Your Day".

by Jackie.Hikaru on 17 hours ago

Wow. This was good. Really good. You are an incredibly talented writer.

 

[onehitwanda]

From email:

If your home is just to the south of Bishop’s Rock I assume you are a kelpie. Tricky writing and posting stories under water; but maybe the lighthouse has what you need; perhaps an enchanted lady keeper.

 

[lovecraft68]

A mostly positive comment on an LW story that sits at a score of 2.72 and was written as a satire, but of course the crowd there is too dumb to know what that is.

This guy thought it was good...poor soul will probably get attacked now

by impotenthub_N_milf  on 21 hours ago

i had to overlook some of the details you included, but very well written and very erotic.

 

[Smuttyandfun]

Got this one on my latest, 'From This Moment On,' for Literotica's 25th Anniversary challenge.

After all the stories of lying, cheating, and humiliation, it was so nice to read this story of love told so well. Thank you. 5 stars is all they have available. So I’ll add a star hear because this was worth an extra star to me.

 

[Publius68]

I guess Anonny wanted to be nice today... This is from my Winder Holiday entry, Father Christmas:

One of, if not THE, best "Winter Holidays" story I have ever had the privilege of reading. Period. You have blended an erotic tale of love with the magic of Father Christmas and man behind it all. Well balanced, tastefully naughty, with an captivating plot and filled with intriguing details. Very well done!

Thank you.

 

[Smuttyandfun]

I got this one today on my Pandemic story, Sexy Sadie:

I found this was so good to read I have had some wonderful times.

And I thought I'd written a literary masterpiece. LOL

 

[dmallord]

This comes in as the ninth comment on 'Red String of Fate.' The last two days have gone badly for me - though not for the story. I am a bit down. Then I spotted this anon comment tonight, and my heart sings again. Makes me want to believe in Christmas! Thank you, kind Anonymous.

Anonymous about 6 hours ago
Just some thoughts.

I loved the craftsmanship and the research put into both characters. Many writers here are not so adept at incorporating other cultures into their writing. The Silicon Valley people were distinct from the heartlander’s and Minami’s family had a good balance of Japanese culture but flavored by aristocratic arrogance.

Also the end, while a little disappointing, halts at a crossroads. Things could go any number of ways. A Japanese pov might emphasize that in three weeks she must do what is best for her family and to have the story then proceed from there. The romantic trope followed by most commenters here would demand to know the outcome of every character through their grandchildren. Personally, I would have wanted to see the various tensions come to a head - Ethan’s career and does he RE-take the world? How does Minami approach her father - does she try for a western life or something else?

Still, the one thing that this writing does not show is arrogance. It was carefully constructed and it seems the ending was chosen with care.

 

[Smuttyandfun]

I got the feeling he enjoyed this, from his comment on my latest, 'From This Moment On.'

10 Big Blazing Stars for a very happy romantic Story. Thank You "SmuttyandFun" for such Great writing. Great Idea, Great Story, Great romantic Plot, and Great Effort. I love a 'Happy Ending". Thanks, Buster2U

 

[oneagainst]

"I like your style and the narrative development. This was a pleasure to read. I shall seek out your other stories. Thank you for your creativity. Surely, in the interests of equality, you should have procured a chastity belt for each lady??"

Do they not know how expensive a custom steel belt is? Sheesh.

 

[Gamblnluck]

"Wow for a no sex story this was awesome. Have you thought of writing fiction?"

 

[shakna]

God damnit! Why do you always make me cry and laugh. Seriously, this was fucking amazing. Thanks for writing and sharing this love story.

A really nice comment over on Cocktails, Heels & Desperate.

 

[EroticCupcake]

Anonymous
Thanks for the fantastic story. It was interesting how it transitioned from an over the top coercive nonconsensual fuck fest sorority fantasy to a somber reality without getting tooooooo dark. I don't think there's many like it on the site. Well done

Nice comment from Mr. Anonymous. There is something uncomfortable about looking back at old work, even if I'm proud of it (or parts of it ).

It's not quite like a different person wrote it, but more like a snapshot of obsession that moved on to something else.

 

[Gamblnluck]

Another recent comment. This one from Anonymous:
Oh My how do some commenters VENT!

After page one 1 I'll be sure to read as Paul Harvey would say. (THE REST OF THE STORY)

Oh Page one was great; now forward.

 

[MediocreAuthor]

Anonymous 22 minutes ago
Well, best writer in the world strikes again…crazy, how hot this was!

This was a comment for Test Subjects, which is crazy, because I think that story needs a rewrite. But I'll take it. Lol

 

[LIDiver]

It REALLY juices me (ok, sometimes even literally!) when I reach other couples.

From:
https://literotica.com/s/torys-emergence

“Such a hot story! I HAD to roleplay it with my husband tonight, and it was some of the HOTTEST sex we’ve had in a while. Y’all should write more stories.”

This brief “delicious” one for some reason really made me smile….
“Exciting & your ending was a delicious surprise!”

 

[MediocreAuthor]

Anonymous32 minutes ago
Yawn. DNF.

Obviously that's a mean comment, but it absolutely made my day.

You have to understand the full extent of the comment.

It was posted on the 3rd chapter!!!
So either the reader read 2 previous chapters before yawning and not finishing -- or they started in the middle like a complete moron, in which case, yeah... No wonder it was boring.

"I didn't like this book! It was boring, and I couldn't finish it!"

"Boring from the start, huh?"

"Oh, idk, I started at the 3rd chapter."

I'm fuckin dead