ShelbyDawn57
Fae Princess
- Joined
- Feb 28, 2019
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This one came in today; "just WOW!"
Sometimes less is more.
Sometimes less is more.
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Thanks!Beautifully crafted short story. I love it.
wow.
A sweet something over on Christmas in the Outback.Its been a while since I've seen your name in the stories lists. I hope you bring life once more to the characters and their adventures.
This story was fun. At first, I did wonder if Toofy had become human.
You’ve outdone yourself. I was a cynic and nearly didn’t read it after seeing the subject, because I thought that nobody could pull it off. You did. You now need to resign your job immediately and do this full-time.
You should.Seriously considered changing my author tag to "disturbingly intriguing" lol
It's such a rush to get the "disturbing" comment. You know the reader really felt it, but enjoyed it enough to keep reading and even leave a comment."This story is disturbingly intriguing"
It felt great to get this comment. Seriously considered changing my author tag to "disturbingly intriguing" lol
Thanks... that's exactly why I loved it. I wish that @anonymous could hear this discussion... It's really analogous to what kept me going back to read @oneagainst when his content was disturbing (the arc I wrote is an alternate universe off of oneagainst's universe).It's such a rush to get the "disturbing" comment. You know the reader really felt it, but enjoyed it enough to keep reading and even leave a comment.
Strides into the middle of the amphitheatre, raising sword... "Are you not disturbed?"Thanks... that's exactly why I loved it. I wish that @anonymous could hear this discussion... It's really analogous to what kept me going back to read @oneagainst when his content was disturbing (the arc I wrote is an alternate universe off of oneagainst's universe).
You're welcome. Your story was both smutty and fun.Totally plausible scenario! And (no sarcasm now) totally hot!
I loved this line: "I'd always been a hard worker, and now I was extra hard".
Thanks, @StillStunned !
That's what I aim for. LOLYou're welcome. Your story was both smutty and fun.
You mentioned getting one bombed. I've never submitted in H&S, so I didn't know what to expect. I was shocked when the story just went up, and I got a 5.00 and a favorite. For the next few hours I got fifteen 5.00's in a row. Which I had never seen before. Of course it wasn't long till the one bombs started, and the score is now at 4.56. Though it's weird since all seven comments are positive.You're welcome. Your story was both smutty and fun.
I got one comment complaining about too many short pieces and flooding the lists, particularly for a contest. And one comment that just said "yeah, no, 1 star". Even though several hundred other readers seem to like it.You mentioned getting one bombed. I've never submitted in H&S, so I didn't know what to expect. I was shocked when the story just went up, and I got a 5.00 and a favorite. For the next few hours I got fifteen 5.00's in a row. Which I had never seen before. Of course it wasn't long till the one bombs started, and the score is now at 4.56. Though it's weird since all seven comments are positive.
It's hard to know if it's readers or other authors playing tricks. Having a story in a contest is not always good, because I've noticed all my entries get bombed. Only good thing, the ones should be swept away before the winners are announced.I got one comment complaining about too many short pieces and flooding the lists, particularly for a contest. And one comment that just said "yeah, no, 1 star". Even though several hundred other readers seem to like it.
I think contest entries draw some hate, perhaps people are sick of reading about the same theme over and over. Or they want their own favourites to win.
Or perhaps the reader just had other expectations.
He is, he is.5 Stars! Well done! Sounds like the brother is having a fantastic Christmas.
"Makes me sound like a fat gangster. " I see what you did there. (IYKYK)
Loved it, too. Definitely 5️.
erm dang man
Comments seemed to be delayed for some reason. But at least they finally showed up.It took a while, but comments on Too Early Not to Fuck finally showed up last night.
First up, @Smuttyandfun:
He is, he is.
Next, @Fatdog25 got the in-joke:
And Anonymous had a cryptic message which I'm going to take as a compliment:
Thanks!Fix the link in your signature; it directs you to the control panel.