Comments That Make Your Day

[EmilyMiller]

Absolutely right, I probably do overuse "cream". I'll have to start looking for an alternative. Anything but "juices", though

Yogurt?

Em

 

[StillStunned]

Flange Flan?

I should be locked up away from you guys until I'm cured

Better than my other option so far: pussy pus.

 

[StillStunned]

Yogurt?

Em

Or, as we say on this side of the Atlantic, yoghurt.

Neither really says "eat me" though. Perhaps skyr?

 

[onehitwanda]

Better than my other option so far: pussy pus.

I was hungry.

I am no longer hungry.

Thank you for this gift.

 

[StillStunned]

I was hungry.

I am no longer hungry.

Thank you for this gift.

I'm going to market my sense of humour as a weight-loss product.

 

[gordo12]

Nice comment on April Fool - No Longer, a 750-word entry. I don't get the name reference at the end, there is nobody in the story named Ann or Theresa but

great idea I wish I'd thought of it a long time ago. eh Theresa or is it Ann now )

 

[madelinemasoch]

Just received a slew of nice comments from @AG31 that I will be posting here to save for a much-needed ego boost

 

[gordo12]

Nice comment on Homeless:

Daddy's Girl. (Both of them; madonna and child)
This also would be a nice Hallmark Holiday Special... family values?

There are a couple of other comments by the same individual, but it seems like they are picking up on the generic social statements within the story. I won't complain because I do poke at social issues.

 

[ShelbyDawn57]

This one just popped up:

One of the few times I've given five stars to a story in all the years I've been on this site loved it

 

[Smuttyandfun]

A nice comment on 'A Perfect Christmas.'

Great story! A real plot with the right mix of romance, humor, and sex!

 

[gordo12]

Seriously, you can go skim these if you like:

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April Fools - Best Friends
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April Fools - Gotcha!
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April Fool - No Longer

 

[Phantom300]

This one isnt true, but I appreciate the thought.

Going Back to School

 

[ShelbyDawn57]

I've been debating sharing this one and decided to go for it because it makes a point. It is savage and so accurate. I fucked up when I wrote the story and he is one of many that have let me know. The cheating he references is so unintended, but if you read the story it is also so there.
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I guess the whole ''I like you for you and not your penis'' thing she fed Ted/Teddy was a heaping pile of horse manure. What an asshole, truly.
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The story up until when the author started introducing guys/the club bit and the prospect of them getting a divorce/her cheating on him was an easy 4/5. Not to mention Teddies piss poor, lack luster response to finding out her wife cheated on her helped drag the story down even further. Ted/Teddy was utterly heartbroken, yet wanted to be her maid of honor? Doesn't really make much sense. Oh well, It is what it is.
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1/5. It'd be lower if Literotica allowed for a negative score, in which case it'd be -5/5. At least they got what they wanted in the end, so theres that.

 

[oneagainst]

On Grown Up, in Incest/Taboo - a mother/daughter/stepfather story:

"Cuckquean story with a twist… one where beyond the taboo, it is the cuckcake that feels used in the end. Going for the title King of the Cuckqueaning Genre? You have it already, I believe."

@John_Vandermeer I'm pretty sure I'm not. There would have been a coronation, wouldn't there? I'd have remembered that happening.

It was a fun story to write and to put into I/T as opposed to Fetish, where it could also have gone. Done as an experiment to see how the I/T readership go with D/s versus lap-sitting on car journeys. It was interesting to see that there's a group for whom it wasn't pure and therefore should not have been in the category, but it's holding a steady 4.6 for an author who isn't known in the category so I'd have to assume there's a second cohort who really like the idea of the daughter cucking her mum. Interesting data.

 

[StillStunned]

Four Anonymous comments were added to You Know You Shouldn't last night. Not a single one seems to care about 2P POV. Instead they can all be summarised as:

Hair, phwawww!

Plus some details which personally I feel could have been omitted, but oh well. Nice to know I made some readers happy.

 

[ShelbyDawn57]

Four Anonymous comments were added to You Know You Shouldn't last night. Not a single one seems to care about 2P POV. Instead they can all be summarised as:

Plus some details which personally I feel could have been omitted, but oh well. Nice to know I made some readers happy.

Last sound you hear before a pubic hair hits the floor is Pew...

 

[onehitwanda]

I’m not really a fan of the supernatural, so I can’t offer more than a 4 star. But then again, I aknowledge that it may be unfair since you should accept the point of genre. Maybe I’m ineligible to even have an opinion. Sorry about that.

I'm... yeah, okay.

 

[Emilymcplugger]

Got this one on my latest story THERE’S A LOT OF ME ABOUT (encouraged by the folks on here during conversations)

“EmilyMcPlugger is on another roll! All aboard!!”

 

[John_Vandermeer]

On Grown Up, in Incest/Taboo - a mother/daughter/stepfather story:

"Cuckquean story with a twist… one where beyond the taboo, it is the cuckcake that feels used in the end. Going for the title King of the Cuckqueaning Genre? You have it already, I believe."

@John_Vandermeer I'm pretty sure I'm not. There would have been a coronation, wouldn't there? I'd have remembered that happening.

It was a fun story to write and to put into I/T as opposed to Fetish, where it could also have gone. Done as an experiment to see how the I/T readership go with D/s versus lap-sitting on car journeys. It was interesting to see that there's a group for whom it wasn't pure and therefore should not have been in the category, but it's holding a steady 4.6 for an author who isn't known in the category so I'd have to assume there's a second cohort who really like the idea of the daughter cucking her mum. Interesting data.

I know we all hate to be boxed in. But if there is a recurring theme in your writing you pull off very well is the slowburn female psychosexual angst. Particularly the “conflict” between femsubs/femdoms in their various combinations. The agony of the choice to be one, or the other, or even which kind of each (eg loving vs cruel femdom) to be. Just embrace it. And market it…

 

[gordo12]

Another comment from my Anon reader who seems to be more interested in the social aspect than the story itself:
The Bet:

Amazing evolution of a carefully thought out motivational impetus to the immature pack of guys living the'Peter Pan Principle'. The twist was discovering her own 'soul mate in her game of 'Punked'! Evolution or growth of imperfect 'homo sapiens'... (smart people?)

 

[gordo12]

Another nice comment from an Anon about Transplant:

Amazing story of love and life after death.
Nice unusual creative plot with a surprising ending or beginning. Kudos to Author.

 

[gordo12]

Nice comment on Homeless:

No matter how many stars were available to vote on, You'd Get Them ALL!
YOU DID GREAT !
THANK YOU !

 

[oneagainst]

I know we all hate to be boxed in. But if there is a recurring theme in your writing you pull off very well is the slowburn female psychosexual angst. Particularly the “conflict” between femsubs/femdoms in their various combinations. The agony of the choice to be one, or the other, or even which kind of each (eg loving vs cruel femdom) to be. Just embrace it. And market it…

There's something about a slow-motion emotional car-crash that's just good to write. Plus, in this story, it was rewarding to hold up a mirror to the standard trope and have it peel off in a different direction. I feel that readers like hot, but they (in the majority, from the rating and the comments) also like unexpected, and the slowburn tension can deliver that. I think: write all the way up to the beginning, and then stop. Let the readers carry on the story from there.

 

[shakna]

Well this is just all kinds of wholesome camaraderie .. a little too good to be true but full of warmth and intrigue .. nicely done.

not sure i believe the bit about the four roast dinners and a salmon ;-)

A lovely something on Christmas in the Outback

 

[gordo12]

Nice comment on Homeless:

Homeless

A fabulous story of how a chance encounter changed so many lives.