islander01
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and lengthenscookiejar said:The ummm plot thickens...
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I had shocked myself with my aggressiveness with Sterling, my flippant comment about the eggs hid my sudden awkwardness. He seemed to sense it and we lay still, both of us deep in thought. Sterling seemed to come to a decision and he opened the nightable drawer and pulled out a videotape.
"Maybe you had better see this," he said quietly. "I'm going to shower."
He put the tape in the machine and painfully he left, leaving me alone. The tape started and I saw Slick at a desk. I didn't recognize where he was but I understood what was going on. It was painfully obvious and I sat up in bed, my heart in my throat. His head was back and I heard his soft moans, saw his hands in his lap. I wanted to shut it off, but I was powerless. I had to see, it was a subtle form of torture.
She came out from under the desk, straddling him, kissing him deeply. She was a voluptuous readhead, and as I watched in horror she began to rise and lower on him.
I got out of bed on legs that were threatening to give way ... the moans echoing in my ears. Their orgasms were approaching, their tempo increasing. His hands held her hips as she rode him until with a series of groans they came. I turned the tape off, and went to the window. I looked out, staring sightlessly , the tears running down my cheeks.
The door opened, the silence stretched. "I'm sorry you had to see that Cookie," Sterling said.
"How did you get that?" I choked out.
"I had a tip that Big Slick was really alive and in a small building over on How-To. I was able to plant a camera and well you just saw a part of what it taped."
"Who she is? I need to know. She looks familiar."
Sterling sighed, "Her name is Liza ... a stripper who is billed as Tantalizing Liza."
I remembered her now, she had auditioned at the strip club. We had turned her down, we wanted erotic, not vulgar. Obviously Slick liked her style.
"I knew he cheated, but seeing it ..." I couldn't go on. The tears were flowing now and I dashed them away. Sterling put his hand on my shoulder but I pulled away. Shock was being replaced by anger and I turned to him, "Let's go."
"What?" he asked. "Where?"
"Anywhere but this town ..." I ground out. I was leaving with no more than the clothes on my back ... Happy New Year Cookie ... I thought.
MR. Gibson
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hello cookiejar I am back in the big city again driving up in my 1939 speedster boatail(rear is shaped like a canoe). I am wearing my big brown snap fedora and brown pinstriped double breasted suit and brown spectator shoes on my feet. this is a suit and car of a real "Killer" like me! . I hope you are doing well cookiejar and sterling . And it is nice to meet you too icey. you are a lovely woman like our cookie here! chat with you guys later.
. I hope you are doing well cookiejar and sterling . And it is nice to meet you too icey. you are a lovely woman like our cookie here! chat with you guys later.MR. Gibson said:hello cookiejar I am back in the big city again driving up in my 1939 speedster boatail(rear is shaped like a canoe). I am wearing my big brown snap fedora and brown pinstriped double breasted suit and brown spectator shoes on my feet. this is a suit and car of a real "Killer" like me!
Ty Gib...have a good day and a better night...
sueanninct
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Cookie is leaving Lit City. Us floozies will miss her.
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hey cookiejar maybe I can be a hard boiled dick or a gangster heavy all dressed to the nines in one of your stories too. Why should you and sterling have all the fun! just call me "GIB" or "bogeyman" since I love Humphrey bogart later Doll!
MR. Gibson sexy tales!
MR. Gibson sexy tales!
MR. Gibson said:hey cookiejar maybe I can be a hard boiled dick or a gangster heavy all dressed to the nines in one of your stories too. Why should you and sterling have all the fun! just call me "GIB" or "bogeyman" since I love Humphrey bogart later Doll!
MR. Gibson sexy tales!
Feel free to add to the noir at anytime...just try to tie the story in with all the others...
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oh ok cookie I was just wondering how it all worked. It's a continuing thread. nice idea. feel free to add my name if you like in any of the stories though. thanks!
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Sorry this isn't that long a post. I need to come up with some ideas.
Bunkie had come looking for help, but had only found trouble. She needed to speak to the Lieutenant privately, but his co-workers didn’t seem too keen on the idea. Detective Davis seemed eager to work on the case. Maybe a bit too eager. He kept pacing the room, asking what he could do. Bunkie thought he was acting like he had just graduated from the police academy. Then there was Officer O’Reilly. He wasn’t stationed outside the room like he was supposed to be when Bunkie had arrived. He told the Lieutenant he had stepped out for a bit to eat. Judging from his breath, he had a pint of Guinness to go with it.
But Lt. Head seemed oblivious of everyone in the room. His eyes were focused on the envelope Davis had given him. “Everyone out,” he said quietly. The others stood quietly for a few seconds, then left the room. The ice in his voice told them he wouldn’t take no for an answer. Bunkie stood and approached him. She dropped the note in his lap. “Whenever you can find the time, Lieutenant. I’ll be outside.” She walked out, and headed for the waiting room. Unbelievable! She had a clue to one of the biggest crimes in the history of Lit City, and no one could be bothered to give her the time of day. She flopped down in a chair and sulked. Finally, she was doing something right, and no one was noticing. ‘This night can’t possible get any worse’ Bunkie said to herself. At least that’s what she thought, until all of the lights went out, and the hospital was thrown into darkness.
Bunkie had come looking for help, but had only found trouble. She needed to speak to the Lieutenant privately, but his co-workers didn’t seem too keen on the idea. Detective Davis seemed eager to work on the case. Maybe a bit too eager. He kept pacing the room, asking what he could do. Bunkie thought he was acting like he had just graduated from the police academy. Then there was Officer O’Reilly. He wasn’t stationed outside the room like he was supposed to be when Bunkie had arrived. He told the Lieutenant he had stepped out for a bit to eat. Judging from his breath, he had a pint of Guinness to go with it.
But Lt. Head seemed oblivious of everyone in the room. His eyes were focused on the envelope Davis had given him. “Everyone out,” he said quietly. The others stood quietly for a few seconds, then left the room. The ice in his voice told them he wouldn’t take no for an answer. Bunkie stood and approached him. She dropped the note in his lap. “Whenever you can find the time, Lieutenant. I’ll be outside.” She walked out, and headed for the waiting room. Unbelievable! She had a clue to one of the biggest crimes in the history of Lit City, and no one could be bothered to give her the time of day. She flopped down in a chair and sulked. Finally, she was doing something right, and no one was noticing. ‘This night can’t possible get any worse’ Bunkie said to herself. At least that’s what she thought, until all of the lights went out, and the hospital was thrown into darkness.
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Happy New Year!!
Just stopping in to wish all the Noir Friend and of course the Lovely Cookie a very warm and loving New Year!!
may all of your dreams come true in the new year
Hugs and Kisses
Just stopping in to wish all the Noir Friend and of course the Lovely Cookie a very warm and loving New Year!!
may all of your dreams come true in the new year
Hugs and Kisses
MR. Gibson
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Happy new year also to cookie and all the guys and dolls at this site. I know santa claus gave cookie a lot of presents because even though she may be naughty she is oh soooo niiiice! . cheers to all of you!
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