Pushing against things in your writing

[EmilyMiller]

A stray legacy “cunt” in there. I think I need to submit an edit.

Em

 

[djrip]

Jesus.

I'll be in my bunk.

 

[EmilyMiller]

I'll be in my bunk.

I used that Jayne Cobb line in Determination . In an art imitating life moment, it was the FMC having started to read one of my stories on Lit. Determination is very, very meta.

Em

 

[MrPixel]

I gave thought to autofellatio when I was (a lot!) younger, but even as slender as I was back then I was never that flexible.

TBH I don't understand Futanari. I'll let that be your department, Em.

 

[djrip]

I used that Jayne Cobb line in Determination . In an art imitating life moment, it was the FMC having started to read one of my stories on Lit. Determination is very, very meta.

Em

I may have been intentionally referencing it

 

[EmilyMiller]

I may have been intentionally referencing it

Sorry - as ever - Em doesn’t pick up on obvious shit! Just how I’m built, sorry .

Em

 

[djrip]

Sorry - as ever - Em doesn’t pick up on obvious shit! Just how I’m built, sorry .

Em

You'd have to work to be as oblivious as me sometimes!

 

[EmilyMiller]

You'd have to work to be as oblivious as me sometimes!

I really wouldn’t

 

[Zenith77]

One of the FIRST rules of writing is, write about what you KNOW...

An excellent starting point.

And the second, third, and fourth rules are: do your research, use your imagination, and challenge yourself.

 

[EmilyMiller]

An excellent starting point.

And the second, third, and fourth rules are: do your research, use your imagination, and challenge yourself.

You have no idea how long I spent on the Wikipedia page about telepathic, levitating, space octopuses .

Em

 

[Zenith77]

You have no idea how long I spent on the Wikipedia page about telepathic, levitating, space octopuses .

Em

That's what towels are for.

 

[EmilyMiller]

That's what towels are for.

You have to know where your towel is

 

[Lifestyle66]

I began writing here and posting to LW. After being slammed repeatedly by those trolls, I was discouraged and tried writing and posting to other categories.

But after much contemplation, I've resolved to write to those LW trolls and try writing better stories which explain a different POV for "extra-marital FUN"! I went as far as writing my "Lifestyle Ch. 13: Single Swingers", where the wife explained her POV to a 3rd party that she would never risk her marriage by having a fling without her husband's approval.

She fucked a guy at a swinger party, then later meets him at a bar on her business trip. He suggests they could get together again during those trips, and she replies: "I told you before," Jan said "not without my husband in the same house. That's strike two!" she added, not in an angry tone, but as a friendly warning. "So, don't ask again and make me ruin your day. I like my dessert at the house parties, and it would be a shame to avoid you in the future."

In my later stories, I'm trying to show those trolls that extra-marital sex can be fun, so I'm pushing against the beliefs of those trolls.

 

[EmilyMiller]

I began writing here and posting to LW. After being slammed repeatedly by those trolls, I was discouraged and tried writing and posting to other categories.

But after much contemplation, I've resolved to write to those LW trolls and try writing better stories which explain a different POV for "extra-marital FUN"! I went as far as writing my "Lifestyle Ch. 13: Single Swingers", where the wife explained her POV to a 3rd party that she would never risk her marriage by having a fling without her husband's approval.

She fucked a guy at a swinger party, then later meets him at a bar on her business trip. He suggests they could get together again during those trips, and she replies: "I told you before," Jan said "not without my husband in the same house. That's strike two!" she added, not in an angry tone, but as a friendly warning. "So, don't ask again and make me ruin your day. I like my dessert at the house parties, and it would be a shame to avoid you in the future."

In my later stories, I'm trying to show those trolls that extra-marital sex can be fun, so I'm pushing against the beliefs of those trolls.

It’s a good fight maybe. But I couldn’t summon the energy.

Em

 

[Lifestyle66]

It’s a good fight maybe. But I couldn’t summon the energy.

Em

It's like playing golf. I know I'll never be a pro. But I can enjoy playing the game against my previous scores.

When I write an LW story now, I judge the rating and views against my previous stories. Just because I get 2.9 due to the trolls on one story isn't bad if I got a 2.5 on the previous one. I view that as improving!

 

[EmilyMiller]

It's like playing golf. I know I'll never be a pro. But I can enjoy playing the game against my previous scores.

When I write an LW story now, I judge the rating and views against my previous stories. Just because I get 2.9 due to the trolls on one story isn't bad if I got a 2.5 on the previous one. I view that as improving!

You have way more patience than me!

Em

 

[alohadave]

I'm not a particular fan of blowjobs IRL, so I don't tend to want to write about them or read them.

And after writing this, I just finished writing a blowjob scene in one of my WIPs.

 

[alohadave]

You have way more patience than me!

Em

Golf can test anyone's patience.

 

[NoTalentHack]

Kayfabe was a challenge for me to write, because the whole cuck thing is not my kink at all, but I liked thinking about the psychology of why it might be for other people so much that I had to write the story. If you read it, there's no expliit sex between the bull and the wife, and only a little between the cuck and the wife; there's a reason for that. I am probably going to write another one at some point; maybe not so much the cuck/bull thing, but a guy who's learning to accept that his wife wants variety that he can't give to her, based on the parachute analogy from another thread. Probably have to get over it for that one.

 

[Zenith77]

Golf tests everyone's patience.

Fixed

 

[Seadog777]

nyway, this is not about DPs. On the same thread, I was amazed how many people felt that 69s weren’t all they were cracked up to be. What!!!!!!

This is absolutely correct. "69iing" is extremely over-rated.

I'm not saying, implying, or soliciting, that people that like to do that are horrible or shitty people.

 

[Rustyoznail]

Not every couple is physically capable of a decent 69.

 

[Kumquatqueen]

I'm not convinced a 69 is ever great. A maximum of one person gets to the point of pleasure where they can't control what they're doing with their mouth. Maybe some men can come and do something else at the same time?

I have one character mention that when he was younger (18-20) he could suck himself off - "not comfortable enough to be enjoyable, just as a party piece". Known a couple guys who could have said that.

 

[TheRedChamber]

I'm not convinced a 69 is ever great. A maximum of one person gets to the point of pleasure where they can't control what they're doing with their mouth. Maybe some men can come and do something else at the same time?

From my perspective, I think it needs rebranding as 'A blowjob with excellent viewing, touching and tasting opportunities' and needs to come with a promise of 'Don't worry darling I'll see to your needs properly later (if not before)' - I love it, but no, I'm not at peak performance.

 

[ronde]

From my perspective, I think it needs rebrandings as 'A blowjob with excellent viewing, touching and tasting opportunities' and needs to come with a promise of 'Don't worry darling I'll see to your needs properly later (if not before)' - I love it, but no, I'm not at peak performance.

I almost never write a 69 into my stories because they always seem fake to me when I read or see them in porn. It seems inevitable that one party is going to come out on the short end of the stick, and since men own the stick and men being men, usually that means the woman is going to have to wait. I'd rather give her the pleasure of my tongue and once she's ready again, please us both.

Not to be critical of women who really like the guy cumming in her mouth, I think the majority of women who allow that only do so because they want to please the guy. I'm not sure what the guy gets out of it. It's ok, but not my favorite thing to do.