Deep Space [OOC/Recruitment Thread]

[Vailyn]

Just a quick question. We're still waiting on people to do their 1st posts, or do we move on to our 2nd?

We're on Round 2! =)

 

[babyblueeyes]

Ashleigh Miller

Name: Ashleigh Miller
Age: 25
Gender: Female
Height: 5'7
Weight: 150 lbs
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Grey
Visual Description: http://cfile9.uf.tistory.com/image/1517AA435074B17B1B5BA2

Written Description: Always smiling. Ashleigh Miller has a ready, warm smile for nearly any situation. Such smiles light up her face and touch her bright grey eyes. A bob of dark brown hair falls about her face with strands of it commonly finding their way into her eyes. A smattering of freckles dot the bridge of her nose and are the only markings on her light, creamy skin.

She's a curvy, meaty girl with round breasts, hips, and thighs. The firm muscles underneath her smooth skin speak to an outdoorsy life. Ashleigh walks with a slight but noticeable gait. Her right leg appears natural but is in fact artificial from the middle of her thigh down. The leg is simply meant to replace the one she lost, but it is stronger than a natural limb.

She's a jeans kind of girl and hates to dress up. She'll even wear jeans and t-shirts under her lab coat when working. Her accent is subtly British, lessened somewhat from years spent abroad.

Occupation: Scientist – Biologist with minors in Virology and Parasitology

Personality: Warm and kind. Ashleigh has a bubbly personality and a desire to get along with everyone she meets. She likes to talk. Too much sometimes. The more awkward a silence becomes, the more she talks to try and fill it.

Her interest in biology stems from a brimming curiosity about how the world around her works. She has a love of animals and has never met one she didn't instantly love. She'll even joke that her leg served to feed a starving shark.

She believes in aliens. After studying the animal life on Earth, Ashleigh simply cannot believe that there is no life elsewhere in the universe. She longs to find and study this life and believes the Galileo must be full of research samples collected by her crew.

Likes: Hiking, animals, playful flirting, friendly conversation, exploring outdoors, rock bands with female singers

Dislikes: Awkward silences, rudeness, guns, and eating meat

Talents: Ashleigh has an excellent singing voice. She has no confidence in her ability and will typically only sing when she's listening to music alone.

Psychological Quirks: She has this fear of guns. It's perfectly fine for someone else to use one, but Ashleigh just refuses to hold or fire one.

Brief Background: Ashleigh's London-born and grew up in the city. She always excelled at her studies and graduated at the top of her class. But the city couldn't hold her, and she began to travel the world, studying the animal life of the various continents.

There was a time she considered becoming a veterinarian and minored in virology and parasitology with an interest in turning to a medical career for the critters. But she found too much pleasure in lab work, in puzzling out the how and why of any samples gathered in the field.

A shark attack in the Pacific claimed her leg. Her medical bills piled up, and an extravagant offer from Oracle to find the Galileo was not something she could refuse.

Alien Encounter: A, B, C, E
Dos: Spanking, giving head, foreplay, submitting, same sex encounters, anal, hair-pulling, rough sex, biting, bondage
Donts: Nothing that belongs in a toilet. No excessive violence against my character.

 

[Spectacles]

I'll get with you in a few days Spectacles. We may have some drop outs, so I'm giving them until Friday to revive. If I don't get a PM, then I'll add you to the team. Although, we'll be in serious need of a Captain and Helmsman.

Maddison to Bryana: Coffee? What coffee?

Bryana: o_o..........

Understood.

 

[HotCider]

Name: Ashleigh Miller
Age: 25
Gender: Female
Height: 5'7
Weight: 150 lbs
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Grey
Visual Description: http://cfile9.uf.tistory.com/image/1517AA435074B17B1B5BA2

Written Description: Always smiling. Ashleigh Miller has a ready, warm smile for nearly any situation. Such smiles light up her face and touch her bright grey eyes. A bob of dark brown hair falls about her face with strands of it commonly finding their way into her eyes. A smattering of freckles dot the bridge of her nose and are the only markings on her light, creamy skin.

She's a curvy, meaty girl with round breasts, hips, and thighs. The firm muscles underneath her smooth skin speak to an outdoorsy life. Ashleigh walks with a slight but noticeable gait. Her right leg appears natural but is in fact artificial from the middle of her thigh down. The leg is simply meant to replace the one she lost, but it is stronger than a natural limb.

She's a jeans kind of girl and hates to dress up. She'll even wear jeans and t-shirts under her lab coat when working. Her accent is subtly British, lessened somewhat from years spent abroad.

Occupation: Scientist – Biologist with a minor in Botany

Personality: Warm and kind. Ashleigh has a bubbly personality and a desire to get along with everyone she meets. She likes to talk. Too much sometimes. The more awkward a silence becomes, the more she talks to try and fill it.

Her interest in biology stems from a brimming curiosity about how the world around her works. She has a love of animals and has never met one she didn't instantly love. She'll even joke that her leg served to feed a starving shark.

She believes in aliens. After studying the animal life on Earth, Ashleigh simply cannot believe that there is no life elsewhere in the universe. She longs to find and study this life and believes the Galileo must be full of research samples collected by her crew.

Likes: Hiking, animals, playful flirting, friendly conversation, exploring outdoors, rock bands with female singers

Dislikes: Awkward silences, rudeness, tight spaces, and eating meat

Talents: Ashleigh has an excellent singing voice. She has no confidence in her ability and will typically only sing when she's listening to music alone.

Psychological Quirks: She's claustrophobic. She simply does not do well in small spaces. Only the promise of finding the Galileo convinced her to travel on a spaceship.

Brief Background: Ashleigh's London-born and grew up in the city. She always excelled at her studies and graduated at the top of her class. But the city couldn't hold her, and she began to travel the world, studying the animal life of the various continents.

A shark attack in the Pacific claimed her leg. Her medical bills piled up, and an extravagant offer from Oracle to find the Galileo was not something she could refuse.

Alien Encounter: A, B, C, E
Dos: Spanking, giving head, foreplay, submitting, same sex encounters, anal, hair-pulling, rough sex, biting, bondage
Donts: Nothing that belongs in a toilet. No excessive violence against my character.

My only comments about this profile is that you not choose Botany as a minor because we already have a player whose scientist has a minor in Botany. Perhaps Virology or Parasitology or both of those. I don't think she would have been allowed on the ship if she was claustrophobic. It is too much of a risk for there are many closed spaces on a ship and many possible instances where she'll just have to deal with it such as in an escape pod or traveling on the Trojan vessel.

Everyone: I will be holding off submissions for anything other than Captain and Helmsman for now. I got a response from our Helsman, but nothing is ever official until I see a post go down. So if you ever go AWOL on me, you aren't off AWOL until you post something. Otherwise, I'll give up your spot in a heartbeat.

 

[SortOfBeautiful]

Virology would be perfect, considering the setting. Just sayin', people.

 

[HotCider]

BRIGHTWELL: Your post is only 69 words long, and I'm not even going to count the Chinese. If you read the rules of this game, then you would know that I asked of everyone to give 200 words or more. Your post, which wasn't worth anyone's time, needs to be either deleted or have more added to it because it's unacceptable. I only give people three chances (know that you have 2 chances left). If they can't maintain that simple rule or even struggle to make 200 words - a MERE 200 words, then I'll remove them from the game. This game encourages literacy and creative development. Not Facebook, text-type, short-quip bull. The IC is not the OOC. I know for a fact that people would not role play with that and by trying to get you to write more appreciable, it's improving your writing so that others will admire your creativity and see your character for what you're trying to portray. If they can't see that, then don't expect squat from people. It won't happen and you'll just get frustrated.

Not everyone shares my opinion, but if anyone posted what you did to me in an intimate scene, I wouldn't go any further with them. In fact, I'd never RP with them again. It's just too ugly.

 

[babyblueeyes]

My only comments about this profile is that you not choose Botany as a minor because we already have a player whose scientist has a minor in Botany. Perhaps Virology or Parasitology or both of those. I don't think she would have been allowed on the ship if she was claustrophobic. It is too much of a risk for there are many closed spaces on a ship and many possible instances where she'll just have to deal with it such as in an escape pod or traveling on the Trojan vessel.

I edited the character sheet I posted earlier. It should be good to go now.

 

[HotCider]

I edited the character sheet I posted earlier. It should be good to go now.

I find your profile acceptable. Unfortunately, I cannot accept you at this time until I find a Captain and Helmsman first. I'm giving the current Captain and Helmsman player until Friday to post something. If they don't post something by then, then I'm removing them from the game. If anyone can only find time to post once every two weeks, then they don't need to be in my game. Real life apparently has them too busy for it and so they should put their priorities forward.

Just stick around until then. I'm sure there will be some people to snatch up these two roles.

Edit: An actually, those players who volunteered to make second characters, if you want to make a Captain or a Helmsman, I will accept those profiles if it allows these waiting players to finally get in lol.

 

[babyblueeyes]

Oh. I thought the captain spot was filled. I'd be happy to play the captain, but I only want to play one character. So I'll ditch the scientist if you give me the captain slot.

 

[babyblueeyes]

Alanna Blake

Name: Alanna Blake
Age: 24
Gender: Female
Height: 5'8
Weight: 140 lbs
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Hazel
Visual Description: http://womantrending.com/wp-content...om*wp-content*uploads*2013*01*undercut-15.jpg

Written Description: Skin like mocha. Black hair bound in a tight braid, one side of her head shaved. Full, fat lips often spread in a knowing smile. A British accent hovering on the tip of her tongue. Hazel eyes that glimmer with specks of gold, framed by dark, thick lashes.

A lean, lithe frame padded by curves. Every curve firm and tight. Legs that extend for miles.

Occupation: Captain

Personality: Cocky. Overflowing with confidence that's evident in her every action and every word. As far as she's concerned, it's her ship. Only begrudgingly will she admit that Oracle actually owns the thing. But it's her baby, and she finesses it like no one else can.

She's take charge. No nonsense. Nothing scares her. Thrill-seeker, she'd take more risks with the actual piloting of the ship if Oracle allowed it.

She has no use for relationships. Men can't keep up. She burns through them like candles lit with a flame-thrower.

Likes: Anything that gets the blood pumping – risk taking, martial arts, sex, flying, and flirting are favorites

Dislikes: Staying still, sleeping, cuddling, intimate conversations

Talents: There's nothing she can't fly. Put her behind the controls of just about anything, and she'll reason out how to fly the thing in minutes.

Psychological Quirks: Insomniac. Sleep is the enemy. How can people stand to waste time lying still?

Brief Background: London-born. The Royal Air Force gave Alanna her first experience in the air, and she's been flying ever since. Piloting spaceships proved to be the natural next step, and she did that commercially, tired of the military's low wages. And no one pays better than Oracle.

Alien Encounter: A, B, C, E
Dos: Spanking, giving head, foreplay, same sex encounters, anal, hair-pulling, rough sex, biting, bondage
Donts: Nothing that belongs in a toilet.

 

[HotCider]

Name: Alanna Blake
Age: 24
Gender: Female
Height: 5'8
Weight: 140 lbs
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Hazel
Visual Description: http://womantrending.com/wp-content...om*wp-content*uploads*2013*01*undercut-15.jpg

Written Description: Skin like mocha. Black hair bound in a tight braid, one side of her head shaved. Full, fat lips often spread in a knowing smile. A British accent hovering on the tip of her tongue. Hazel eyes that glimmer with specks of gold, framed by dark, thick lashes.

A lean, lithe frame padded by curves. Every curve firm and tight. Legs that extend for miles.

Occupation: Captain

Personality: Cocky. Overflowing with confidence that's evident in her every action and every word. As far as she's concerned, it's her ship. Only begrudgingly will she admit that Oracle actually owns the thing. But it's her baby, and she finesses it like no one else can.

She's take charge. No nonsense. Nothing scares her. Thrill-seeker, she'd take more risks with the actual piloting of the ship if Oracle allowed it.

She has no use for relationships. Men can't keep up. She burns through them like candles lit with a flame-thrower.

Likes: Anything that gets the blood pumping – risk taking, martial arts, sex, flying, and flirting are favorites

Dislikes: Staying still, sleeping, cuddling, intimate conversations

Talents: There's nothing she can't fly. Put her behind the controls of just about anything, and she'll reason out how to fly the thing in minutes.

Psychological Quirks: Insomniac. Sleep is the enemy. How can people stand to waste time lying still?

Brief Background: London-born. The Royal Air Force gave Alanna her first experience in the air, and she's been flying ever since. Piloting spaceships proved to be the natural next step, and she did that commercially, tired of the military's low wages. And no one pays better than Oracle.

Alien Encounter: A, B, C, E
Dos: Spanking, giving head, foreplay, same sex encounters, anal, hair-pulling, rough sex, biting, bondage
Donts: Nothing that belongs in a toilet.

My only qualms is you should take the time to add more meat to this skeleton. Your last profile had way more work in it than this one. Also, can we not have Captain Rhianna aboard the ship. Because that's all who I'm going to be imagining, "Rum-pa-pa-paa!"

I just can't have it lol. You can find another sexy black woman just not someone so mainstream.

I think the Odysseus would become another one of her music videos. Lordy...

 

[babyblueeyes]

My only qualms is you should take the time to add more meat to this skeleton. Your last profile had way more work in it than this one. Also, can we not have Captain Rhianna aboard the ship. Because that's all who I'm going to be imagining, "Rum-pa-pa-paa!"

I just can't have it lol. You can find another sexy black woman just not someone so mainstream.

I think the Odysseus would become another one of her music videos. Lordy...

I didn't even realize that was Rhianna. That'll teach me to write things at 3 am.

I'm just going to go back to my scientist char. I don't have any ideas on how to flesh out the Rhianna captain, so I'd probably suck at roleplaying her anyhow.

 

[Light Ice]

My only qualms is you should take the time to add more meat to this skeleton. Your last profile had way more work in it than this one. Also, can we not have Captain Rhianna aboard the ship. Because that's all who I'm going to be imagining, "Rum-pa-pa-paa!"

I just can't have it lol. You can find another sexy black woman just not someone so mainstream.

I think the Odysseus would become another one of her music videos. Lordy...

HC, bro, that's not Rhianna.

 

[Light Ice]

I didn't even realize that was Rhianna. That'll teach me to write things at 3 am.

I'm just going to go back to my scientist char. I don't have any ideas on how to flesh out the Rhianna captain, so I'd probably suck at roleplaying her anyhow.

You've talent. Consider, possibly, looking at other Sci-Fi shows like Firefly to get ideas on what to do with a Captain. Officers, particularly of real Corporate rigs like this one, would probably be tremendous academically and very professional. I'm not sure how much gender bias exists in our world (it seems up to us to define) but maybe a little might give her an edge to compete in a male dominated position.

There are a bunch of things you can do and I bet you'd do them well. HC won't beat around the bush with his criticisms - all of them constructive if you don't mind hearing them - and you can probably shape things up nicely.

 

[babyblueeyes]

You've talent. Consider, possibly, looking at other Sci-Fi shows like Firefly to get ideas on what to do with a Captain. Officers, particularly of real Corporate rigs like this one, would probably be tremendous academically and very professional. I'm not sure how much gender bias exists in our world (it seems up to us to define) but maybe a little might give her an edge to compete in a male dominated position.

There are a bunch of things you can do and I bet you'd do them well. HC won't beat around the bush with his criticisms - all of them constructive if you don't mind hearing them - and you can probably shape things up nicely.

I was just writing to try and fill the needed position, but in hindsight, I prefer the scientist. Someone else can pick up the captain spot.

I don't object to constructive criticism. You gotta be able to take that to get anywhere with writing.

 

[StoryTime87]

Name: William Traves

Nickname: Bill, Chief

Age: 33

Gender: Male

Height: 5' 10"

Weight: 185

Hair Color: Jet black.

Eye Color: Real eye (right): Brown. Cybernetic Eye (left): Ice Blue

Written Description: Bill physical attributes can be described as many straight lines and angles. His black hair is cropped short in a flat top which accentuates the overall square look of his head ending with his sharp jaw and square chin which is shaved clean. A thick neck leads to broad shoulders; he is well built though definition has faded being five years removed from service and 2 years of cryosleep. His skin is lightly tanned from his half Asian/Caucasian heritage.

The most noticeable feature aside from his multicolored eyes would be the scar that runs from his left eye socket to his temple when the socket was rebuilt. It is a thick scar line that ends in a circle at the temple.

Brief Background: Bill grew up in a small town in East Texas. Joining the Colonial Navy at the age of 18, he eventually obtained the rank of Chief Petty Officer by the end of his service. He was medically discharged at the age of 30 when a live fire training exercise took out his left eye. Tired of military life and without the funds for a military grade implant, Bill sought out Oracle Corporation for a career change. In exchange for the optical implant, he signed a 10 year contract with them and was trained as a helmsman in their fleet. After 3 years of service at the helm of small shuttles, he was placed on board the Odysseus as his first major assignment; it was a quick way to take 2 years off the contract without much work even if he didn't know what he was getting into.

Occupation: Helmsman

Personality: Lacking subtly, Bill is blunt with his words and actions. He is calm, collected and often singularly focused on completing the task at hand. People might think he's a stick in the mud because of his dour demeanor. He is realistic in expectations, but he doesn't give up despite what might be a grim outlook.

In private, he can be caring and compassionate as he's used to providing an ear to the enlisted men underneath him. But he doesn't beat around the bush and says what needs to be said even if it's abrasive. He's protective of the people close to him if they make the effort to get past the cool exterior.

He prefers the simple life and strives to keep it uncomplicated by doing what is required of him and fleeing from drama. Despite putting his military background behind him, he seeks out order and stability where he previously thrived. While not being one to ask for more work, he has no qualms in doing what is asked of him.

Likes: People who do their jobs, women (especially leggy women), sex, meat, order, a job well done

Dislikes: People who don't do their job, people who question his loyalty, people who can't accept the consequences of their actions, deception, chaos

Talents: Spatial awareness, navigation/maps, Judo.

Psychological Quirks: Chaotic situations causes him to rub his scar.

Equipment:

Ocular Implant - The basic function of the implant provides 20/20 vision in a manner that is indistinguishable from normal human sight. It also stores the last 48 hours of visual data. External access to the implant is available at the base of his neck. Two small circular metal disks on each side of his spine with a hole in each center. The left port provides access to the historical data while the right provides access to his current visual data stream.

Alien Encounter: B, C, D, E

Dos: Foreplay, flirtation, dirty talk, rough sex, group, anal, oral, cumplay, toys, clothed sex, public sex, light bondage, sex in many positions

Don'ts: Guy on guy, scat, bloodplay

 

[Spectacles]

I'll throw my name in the hat for Captain with this version of Ben.

Use whichever version of Ben the story needs more (or whichever fits the story better). Obviously I'd only play one or the other.

Name: Benjamin Blackburn
Nickname: Ben
Age: 26
Gender: Male
Height: 6'3
Weight: 200 lbs
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Blue-green
Visual Description: http://thumbs.dreamstime.com/z/handsome-man-glasses-16335830.jpg

Written Description: He's tall. Taller than most. His is a lithe frame, his muscles lean and toned.

Dark hair contrasts his fair skin, his short, wavy hair only casually swept back by fingertips. Perpetual stubble fans across his cheeks. Thick, black glasses rest on the bridge of his nose, an antique in this day and age, but a pilot's bound to have his quirks.

He looks devious, as if schemes lurk within his sea-green eyes. Subtle smiles spread with ease across his lips. He almost always looks amused. Anger only rarely steals across his features.

Occupation: Captain

Personality: He's easy-going and relaxed. Nothing seems capable of shaking his “zen” as he calls it. But Ben has only a basic understanding of Buddhism and mostly just likes the word and the way it sounds.

His is a quiet confidence. He's competent in flying most vessels and issues orders to crew with the full expectance of being obeyed.

He's a flirt. Nothing pleases him quite like putting a smile on a pair of pretty lips. But fucking ranks pretty damn high. He just gets on better with women in general, even when he's not trying to bed them.

Ben's a former smuggler and owes his reflexes to that dangerous job. It wasn't greed that motivated him. He considered smuggling a necessary evil in the face of unfair laws but learned to work within the system after narrowly avoiding a prison sentence.

Likes: Women, flirting, sex, rum and coke, hard hitting rock music, piloting the ship

Dislikes: Law enforcement, corporate rules, short-tempered people

Talents: The way he pilots the ship is nothing short of talent. A skilled tongue and the ability to make connections in the right places with the right people kept his pretty ass out of prison.

Psychological Quirks: His anger pulses just out of reach, as real as his heartbeat. He refuses to be anything but calm and holds himself in check in any moment his anger might spill free. It'll get loose one day.

Brief Background: Ben's from a colony on the Moon and piloted small craft from the time he stood only as high as his father's waist. He raced along the Moon's surface as a teen and fell into smuggling as he approached his twentieth year.

It was one more way to be free. But the law apparently doesn't see it in quite the same light. Only friends in high places, friends earned from doing odd smuggling jobs for them, prevented a prison sentence he would not have enjoyed.

Friends at Oracle landed him an entry level piloting position when his name became too hot to continue smuggling. He's worked his way up in the company the past five years without relinquishing the quirks that distinguish him from the stiffs. Piloting the Odysseus is his most prestigious assignment yet.

He has no love of the corporate world he's forced to work in, but he knows better than to voice dissent to the higher-ups. That wouldn't be “zen” of him anyway.

Alien Encounter: B, C, E
Dos: Foreplay, kissing, flirting, biting, oral (both giving and receiving), anal, spanking, bondage, rough sex, and gentle sex
Donts: The usual. No toilet-play, bestiality, or ageplay.

 

[HotCider]

Because this game has had so many potentially good writers eager to join and haven't been able to due to the current occupied slots, I'm going to start going hard on Rule #4. I've noticed that some of you have been finding it very difficult to write 200 words or more. I will tell you that anyone who exceeds 200 words and goes beyond the minimum has a better chance of remaining in this game than those who can't do it. I don't know what kind of writing, rule #4 violators have been doing before they joined this game, but I'm beginning to think just smut. 200 words isn't hard. It shouldn't be hard if you're a writer. I'm not going to be lenient about it. If you don't know how to check the word count on your post or just neglect to do so, then you will get a warning if I see your post under 200 words. It wouldn't matter if you're 199. If it's not at least 200 or more, then it's a warning and 3 is the charm.

There are more deserving writers who want in on this game and I'd rather have them than someone who likes to do the bare minimum. As I said, I understand when you got nothing to write because the muse isn't working. I suggest you opt to skip your turn so it can come when it does. If you find it too much of a hassel to post a follow-up post, then we can discuss what happened between that unwritten gap in time, and then you can just resume writing where the plot currently is at.

JudeRodney: Your last post was 165 words. Not acceptable. I hope you and BRIGHTWELL fix your posts because I won't let you post in round 3 until you both do. You have a huge gap in your post so I wanna assume that some of it got lost. If you're posting from a cell phone or through the post box, I advice against it. That is the best way to lose a whole post. All you need is for the system to be stupid or your cell to not cooperate and your hard work is gone. Post in a notepad or word document. You can even write posts in a email. Because I don't have Microsoft Office on my laptop yet, I use my email and email my posts to myself so I don't lose them.

Light Ice: Fooled me. Looks just like her. I'm still not convinced lol. And if it isn't her, then it still LOOKS exactly like her.

StoryTime87: Your character is acceptable except for one detail. The Odysseus is not a military vessel. He is working for a civilian company therefore his rank has precedence. He is not an XO. Everyone, including the Captain, is a worker for Oracle. The Ship Director is above the Captain in command. The Captain, however, plays a crucial role for having the most interaction with the crew and being in command of the ship's navigation. The discipline and the assigning of missions comes from the Ship Director who is the liason for Dr. Calvin Denver.

Spectacles: Because Oracle is such a competitive organization, I can't see Ben making the captain's spot. The company would have to be desperate and Oracle never will be due to several of its employment benefits (one of them being the highly notable offer of working miracles such as replacing missing limbs, organs, and biological reconstruction, etc.). He just doesn't come off as disciplined enough.

babyblueeyes character concept for the captain was a good one. She just needed to expand on it and choose a different image or she could have easily not used an image at all and just wrote out a description of the character she envisioned. However, because she wrote more for the scientist and seems more excited about that role, I recommend she go with that role than trying to take on too much responsibility.

Everyone: The Captain is a HUGE role in this game. It is not a joke role. The Captain (the character him/herself) will determine how this game will roll. Just as you don't want a shitty captain (and I don't mean a captain with a crap attitude, but one written poorly or one who doesn't seem like a captain period but one of the crew), I don't want a shitty captain. So if anyone chooses to attempt the captain role, please take into consideration that the game's fate may just ride on your shoulders.

We had a player drop out due to personal reasons. Which opens up a male spot, and Spectacles, since you submitted the Medic. I will accept your Medic if you still would like to play him.

Now, my situation. I will be leaving to Texas next Thursday. I may be without internet for 3 weeks to a month. I will, however, have my phone, and will be able to keep up with you all in the OOC until I can get access. I may even be able to get access in the library with a little "government breaching" since government computers do not like this site and for good reason lol. But I will be here with you all. In your hearts, until I earn my rights again. I've been in AIT for a year and I just got reclassed, so I'm going to be in AIT for "another" year. Whoo...any who, yeah after roughly a month, I should have my civilian gear back. In another case, I may not have my rights taken because I formerly went through that entry phase already. We'll see but I'm saying this just in case.

In the meantime, heartofcourage volunteered to be the acting GM during my absence. I hope you all are cooperative with her and aid her. I will be sending her plots. Heart, if things get too stressful, don't be afraid to pass along the scepter. However, you must let me know before you do such a thing.

This game, I believe, moves at a pace comfortable for everyone since you can post when you have time to. As I said, if it takes you 2 weeks to write one post so that you post every 2 weeks, which is twice a month, this game is DEFINITELY not for you.

I hope this gets everything straight.

Welcome to the game

babyblueeyes

Spectacles

StoryTime87

 

[HotCider]

Spectacles: Okay, I made this a new section specifically for you and your "Dr. Ben" character. My only problem with this character is that he comes off as more of a crazed surgeon. Medics aren't surgeons. They are only tasked with mitigating the victim's injuries and prolonging/improving their survival chance. They are not allowed to perform any surgery on the injured at all. This is speaking on military since I've worked around medics. Say for example, if someone landed on a bayonet and was still alive with the bayonet protruding from his or her chest. They are not allowed to remove the bayonet from the victim's chest. Instead, they must apply dressing around it. The reason why is removing the bayonet may cause more damage and worsen the victim's condition. What would need to happen is the victim would need to be evacuated out of that situation as soon as possible. So if anyone ever receives such heavy injuries in the game, then the mission must be aborted for the life of the crew is more important. As long as Dr. Calvin can keep his workers alive so they can keep working, then he is happy. However, if they are permanently injured in a way that makes them useless...you guys can find out what happens. lol

But yes, mad surgeon is not acceptable. I said you were accepted because yeah need a medic, but if you can't tweak your character's personality. Then I have to reject him. I won't post him up on the front page until this is done.

Story: Same to you buddy. I told you the corrections that need to be made. Let me know when you've tweaked it and I'll add your character to the front.

 

[Spectacles]

Spectacles: Okay, I made this a new section specifically for you and your "Dr. Ben" character. My only problem with this character is that he comes off as more of a crazed surgeon. Medics aren't surgeons. They are only tasked with mitigating the victim's injuries and prolonging/improving their survival chance. They are not allowed to perform any surgery on the injured at all. This is speaking on military since I've worked around medics. Say for example, if someone landed on a bayonet and was still alive with the bayonet protruding from his or her chest. They are not allowed to remove the bayonet from the victim's chest. Instead, they must apply dressing around it. The reason why is removing the bayonet may cause more damage and worsen the victim's condition. What would need to happen is the victim would need to be evacuated out of that situation as soon as possible. So if anyone ever receives such heavy injuries in the game, then the mission must be aborted for the life of the crew is more important. As long as Dr. Calvin can keep his workers alive so they can keep working, then he is happy. However, if they are permanently injured in a way that makes them useless...you guys can find out what happens. lol

But yes, mad surgeon is not acceptable. I said you were accepted because yeah need a medic, but if you can't tweak your character's personality. Then I have to reject him. I won't post him up on the front page until this is done.

Story: Same to you buddy. I told you the corrections that need to be made. Let me know when you've tweaked it and I'll add your character to the front.

You're right. He does have that mad surgeon bent to him as he is now. Revision will happen.

I wasn't exactly sure what the Captain role was, but after your explanation, I'll stick with the Medic.

 

[Vailyn]

LOL! Food revolt is gonna happen! Hahaha

 

[JudeRodney]

My post is fixed.

 

[StoryTime87]

StoryTime87: Your character is acceptable except for one detail. The Odysseus is not a military vessel. He is working for a civilian company therefore his rank has precedence. He is not an XO. Everyone, including the Captain, is a worker for Oracle. The Ship Director is above the Captain in command. The Captain, however, plays a crucial role for having the most interaction with the crew and being in command of the ship's navigation. The discipline and the assigning of missions comes from the Ship Director who is the liason for Dr. Calvin Denver.

Roger that. I've made the updates I saw fit and added detail on the eye; any feedback would be appreciated.

Also adjusted his age to take into account the lack of aging in cryosleep.

 

[babyblueeyes]

Does this mean I can go ahead and post my entry (waking up from cryosleep, etc)?

 

[Vailyn]

Does this mean I can go ahead and post my entry (waking up from cryosleep, etc)?

Pretty sure you have the go ahead to post. You're on the team after all. =)

Say hi to the slimer goo that we call veggies.