Flash Fiction

[Svenskaflicka]

If I write short-short pieces, it's usually scenes from larger works. I'm not much for verbal jogging.

 

[wildsweetone]

Yes. "Somehow possible" fits but is forced. The story doesn't need an unbirth ending. It needs to end in death and despair but not that way.

Editing Donna I could do but I really want to alter it. I know it works as it is but it could be better. Whether it ever was, or will be "erotic horror" is another question.

Og

Tone on here is not easy to convey. somehow possible. Does that sound any different? You make anything sound possible in this piece of writing because of the realities it contains.

The flash of recognition that I had when reading the ending was uncanny. Perhaps every woman who has given birth wonders at some point if she should have really brought a child into 'this' world. I think that 'wondering' says something important enough to be kept.


Welcome back Svenska

 

[Svenskaflicka]

Thank you, WSO.