bluerains
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ty fairy queen... I played a bit more...and this is final take..what do you think?RhymeFairy said:Thank You Blue for stopping by.
I like this poem. I esp. like the words ... enchanted attraction. It can be soft or all consuming. Here you have painted a world of sensuality. It speaks to me ...
Take it and run my friend. Love it ~
Feeling echoes falling
from the dark,
another tear dripping
from the light of the moon
wakes me like rain
falling on the mangroves.
I search for the eyes
of lonely lost in chains
of rain's unsung blues.
I’d still be your piano,
a steady beat of your drum
or just another chord
that your guitar strums.
Such lives my opposite attraction.
Lonely sounds that says," will you play me"