Loving Wives Bomb Magnet

[lovecraft68]

I read it and gave it a 5. Thought it was hot, and liked the plot twists

But you're not a troll.

 

[Lifestyle66]

But you're not a troll.

Did you read it?

 

[Lifestyle66]

My latest 17K-word bomb magnet just dropped last night into the Loving Wives cesspool.

"The Cougar's New Toy"
"A wife seduces her young boy-toy with facts of life."

I happened to get up and glance at my phone two hours after it published, and sure enough, it had a rating of 2 with 2 votes!!! My dedicated trolls didn't let me down!

It's now up to 3.16 with 25 votes. And I'm sure there are some more 1s in there as more of my appreciative audience wakes to find it.

Okay.

Almost 22 hours after the story was published, the rate is 3.27/86.

This means ... the average rate is increasing and ... ... the 1-bombing trolls are LOSERS!

Who would have guessed?

 

[Actingup]

Okay.

Almost 22 hours after the story was published, the rate is 3.27/86.

This means ... the average rate is increasing and ... ... the 1-bombing trolls are LOSERS!

Who would have guessed?

And it will bounce up further when the sweeps are done at the end of the month, or at least that's what happened to mine, which had a bunch of 1-bombs before anybody could have plausibly read it.

 

[lovecraft68]

Did you read it?

I faved it, I'll see if I can find time in the next couple of days. I don't generally read to much here these days.

 

[lc69hunter]

Positive news. Based upon the issues I write about (in Essays primarily), the early scores are generally over 4, then as the trolls find them, I find them in the low 3's. Over time, as others find them, the scores have crept up.

In the last two weeks, three readers have commented positively and saved the stories as favorites (which is my favorite gauge), and now two of my stories are approaching the 4 mark.

 

[Lifestyle66]

I don’t hate anything, I just don’t care for sharing, cheating, and especially cuck stories. I do love commenting on them though, especially when I get special attention from the author Actingup.

Thank you for FINALLY giving me a comment with a few more words to see into your mind.
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by 26thNC on 15 hours ago

Looking at the tags, I thought that you might finally reach the fourth level of vile with this one. Unfortunately, you have failed again. It was kinda sad, what with the poor war damaged veteran being cucked by the kindly small town doctor. In a plot twist , Doc is sharing his wife with the MC and it turns out he is the MC’s biological daddy. So, in another almost vile twist, the kid MC is cucking his biological pappy with his step mother, who incidentally turns out to be an oversexed slut herown self. In an educational side note, who knew, even after a 20 plus year in medicine, that you could pick out a whore from hormone levels in her blood. Ma and Pa then educators inexperienced girl friend in the joys of heterosexual and even lesbian sex, thereby turning our boy into a voyeur like his daddy. He was perfectly willing to be a cuck too, but dear old Dr Dad had a few ethics left and turned down of vile, it barely even offended me. sex with the young girlfriend. So, sorry Lifestyle, this one not only didn’t reach the fourth level
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With this, I understand that the intent is to insult. I'm not seeing constructive criticism, but a magnified version of the usual "cuck/whore" insults.

So, when it comes to the numerous threads in the AH from authors disparaging the "troll comments", it's ones like this which help you to understand their reasons. These types of readers go into the story starting with their rigid opinions, and your story will either reflect and reinforce their opinions, or they will read into the story to magnify WHY they hate it.

I might write another "What I Wrote and Why" essay for the story using 26thNC's comment as the basis for WHY I deliberately included various details. The solution to the veteran's inability to procreate, the hormone/medical condition, and (not mentioned in the comment) the "whore's'" repeated point of vows and promises, are all glossed over by rigid opinions which cannot be changed.

 

[Actingup]

With this, I understand that the intent is to insult. I'm not seeing constructive criticism, but a magnified version of the usual "cuck/whore" insults.

So, when it comes to the numerous threads in the AH from authors disparaging the "troll comments", it's ones like this which help you to understand their reasons. These types of readers go into the story starting with their rigid opinions, and your story will either reflect and reinforce their opinions, or they will read into the story to magnify WHY they hate it.

I might write another "What I Wrote and Why" essay for the story using 26thNC's comment as the basis for WHY I deliberately included various details. The solution to the veteran's inability to procreate, the hormone/medical condition, and (not mentioned in the comment) the "whore's'" repeated point of vows and promises, are all glossed over by rigid opinions which cannot be changed.

Do you think there's a big 'I hate women' theme dominating here? Apparently the only women that are not whores or sluts are the ones who are totally under the thumb of their men (and if they're not, the man is a 'cuck').

 

[Lifestyle66]

Do you think there's a big 'I hate women' theme dominating here? Apparently the only women that are not whores or sluts are the ones who are totally under the thumb of their men (and if they're not, the man is a 'cuck').

I wouldn't say it's a "I hate women" direction. That's making assumptions, too.

I put it down to several different factors. First, if a guy has been burned by his ex-wife who cheated, then he's going to HATE all cheaters. It's just human nature that having been through it and feeling humiliated, he'll find flaws with any story in which a husband allows his wife to fuck around. "That just can't happen in reality, because I've been there!"

Second, there are those men who just think their marriage is perfect, and they could never accept the idea that their wife doesn't feel the same. Regardless of the signals sent or the changes in their declining sex lives over the years, some men and some women are just oblivious to their spouse wanting any more.

What it really comes down to is some people (husbands and wives) feel that the marriage contract gives them ownership over their spouse's body.

My first wife felt that way, that if she didn't want sex, then I couldn't have sex! PERIOD! END OF DISCUSSION! Now, note that I said she FELT that way, that if SHE didn't FEEL like having sex, then I was forbidden. Porn was NOT allowed in the house, and if she were to discover that I watched porn she would have thrown a fit. When she finally realized (after years of trying to get her attention) that I found a Friend-With-Benefits, and after first insisting that we should calmly divorce, she changed her mind. When she insisted on marriage counseling, and I pointed out the lack of sex, she said she would TRY to accommodate my needs. (Thus my saying she didn't FEEL like it before. EDIT: She couldn't tolerate the thought I could have sex elsewhere. She owned my cock, and outsourcing for me to have fun was forbidden!)

To 26thNC (and others), the "sharing, cheating, and especially cuck stories" give them a feeling of humiliation that they can't reconcile. "Her pussy belongs to the husband, and if some other man is using it, then the husband MUST feel humiliated!" To those types, that is the only reality they can accept. It's that feeling of humiliation which they read into the story and find offensive.

My latest story has the husband accepting that the woman he wanted to marry had an extremely high sex drive, and he still asked her to marry him. To him, her desire to suck and fuck him every way and every time he wanted allowed him to grant her one week per year to fuck her brains out with other men (with his screening and approval). That agreement between them was in their wedding vows! (To head off the "breaking marriage vows criticism.") But we still see the response from 26thNC that it's a cuck story and she's a whore, because 26thNC cannot accept ANY reason for extra-marital sex.

So, IMO, it's not a hate women attitude, but rather their own feelings of humiliation which triggers their responses.

EDIT: Those types can't see that in their version of a "loving" monogamous marriage, when the husband is done with sex, the wife should be satisfied, too. They can't see that it's treating the wife that same way MY ex-wife treated me, like a piece of property. So, it happens to wives AND husbands, ... that they are sometimes treated like property.

 

[Chet_Morton]

Do you think there's a big 'I hate women' theme dominating here? Apparently the only women that are not whores or sluts are the ones who are totally under the thumb of their men (and if they're not, the man is a 'cuck').

I think so. I'm catching comments about the husband in my stories being a cuck, but he's a participant in a threesome that happened to be his wife's idea. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

 

[Lifestyle66]

I think so. I'm catching comments about the husband in my stories being a cuck, but he's a participant in a threesome that happened to be his wife's idea. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

I read your first story, and just now browsed your second in the series.

I think you're passing judgement that the audience hates women with too small a data sample.

First, your stories are too sparse, as I pointed out with my comment. It deserved to be longer with more character building.

Second, I recommend that you take a critical look at your story to see any other "triggers" you may have included which turns the readers off. Personally, I'm not a fan of cream-pie eating, and just quickly noticing your ending of the second story, I know it's not going to get a 5 this time. (I gave you a 5 for a first effort story on the first one, but it's time to be a little more critical.)

Third I recommend holding off judging the whole audience until your comment sample size is after reading hundreds of comments. I don't pass judgements on the LW audience based on a few comments on my own stories, because I'm an admittedly shitty writer. (Although, I think I may have risen to just crappy by now.) I read all comments on all stories i read, and I primarily read in the LW category. So, the sample size shaping my opinions come from thousands of comments over more than ten years as a reader.

I read the stories, and read the comments with the thought of "why did they say that?" Did I see the same thing in the story?

And with that in mind, I find the judgment commenters are adamantly about "monogamous marriage ONLY" and absolutely NO to sharing!!! It's not about hating women. It's about hating extra-marital sex.

 

[Actingup]

I wouldn't say it's a "I hate women" direction. That's making assumptions, too.

(etc)

Just a quick thank you for laying out your thoughts at length. I really appreciate that. I'll stew on this.

 

[Chet_Morton]

I think you're passing judgement that the audience hates women with too small a data sample.

I was focusing on your favorite commenter more than the entire audience.

First, your stories are too sparse, as I pointed out with my comment. It deserved to be longer with more character building.

That's fair. These are the first two chapters in a planned ≥ 15 chapter series; character building doesn't start until chapter 4.

Second, I recommend that you take a critical look at your story to see any other "triggers" you may have included which turns the readers off. Personally, I'm not a fan of cream-pie eating [...]

Okay, so here's where I'd appreciate some advice from folks. Would people recommend that I file my cream-pie eating stories under Fetish instead of LW? There's only so much I can do with the tags to warn readers.

 

[Lifestyle66]

I was focusing on your favorite commenter more than the entire audience.

That's fair. These are the first two chapters in a planned ≥ 15 chapter series; character building doesn't start until chapter 4.

Okay, so here's where I'd appreciate some advice from folks. Would people recommend that I file my cream-pie eating stories under Fetish instead of LW? There's only so much I can do with the tags to warn readers.

IMO, the tags serve people who are looking for a particular fetish.

The majority of your readers will click to open your story by seeing it on the "New" category or the latest 25 stories at the top of the category page. After it drops off those new lists, your views will increase slowly.

This pattern indicates that the initial surg of readers might only see the tags AFTER they've already opened the story to read. So selecting a high-volume category such as Loving Wives or Incest will gain more views, but the readers will be less kind when you trigger them with something they don't like.

LW is the perfect example. Almost half the audience there is LOOKING FOR "extra-marital sex", but they want to find cheating wives who are punished for their cheating. So, my stories of extra-marital FUN sex and sharing are punished by the 1-bombers who HATE that fetish. Some even comment saying, "Wrong Category, this cuck story should be in Fetish!"

If I put it iin Fetish, I'd get higher ratings, but fewer views. It's my choice to put it in LW for the views and take their abuse. But I don't assume it's because "they hate women." It's the other things triggering them about the situation they hate.

 

[26thNC]

Thank you for FINALLY giving me a comment with a few more words to see into your mind.
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by 26thNC on 15 hours ago

Looking at the tags, I thought that you might finally reach the fourth level of vile with this one. Unfortunately, you have failed again. It was kinda sad, what with the poor war damaged veteran being cucked by the kindly small town doctor. In a plot twist , Doc is sharing his wife with the MC and it turns out he is the MC’s biological daddy. So, in another almost vile twist, the kid MC is cucking his biological pappy with his step mother, who incidentally turns out to be an oversexed slut herown self. In an educational side note, who knew, even after a 20 plus year in medicine, that you could pick out a whore from hormone levels in her blood. Ma and Pa then educators inexperienced girl friend in the joys of heterosexual and even lesbian sex, thereby turning our boy into a voyeur like his daddy. He was perfectly willing to be a cuck too, but dear old Dr Dad had a few ethics left and turned down of vile, it barely even offended me. sex with the young girlfriend. So, sorry Lifestyle, this one not only didn’t reach the fourth level
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With this, I understand that the intent is to insult. I'm not seeing constructive criticism, but a magnified version of the usual "cuck/whore" insults.

So, when it comes to the numerous threads in the AH from authors disparaging the "troll comments", it's ones like this which help you to understand their reasons. These types of readers go into the story starting with their rigid opinions, and your story will either reflect and reinforce their opinions, or they will read into the story to magnify WHY they hate it.

I might write another "What I Wrote and Why" essay for the story using 26thNC's comment as the basis for WHY I deliberately included various details. The solution to the veteran's inability to procreate, the hormone/medical condition, and (not mentioned in the comment) the "whore's'" repeated point of vows and promises, are all glossed over by rigid opinions which cannot be changed.

I have, as I’ve said previously, no problem at all with your writing. You’re actually quite talented in fact. My only problem is with your content. The last story was a twisted, convoluted, cuck and near incest plot. It was actually a little interesting for a cuck story. I don’t mean to insult authors, but most of the stories I insult are pure garbage that shouldn’t even be posted. It’s ir, impregnation, lesbian, BDSM, and cuck shit have pushed out the simple cheating wife stories, not to mention my beloved BTBs. Even ic69hunter’s favorites, the swinging and swapping stories usually somehow turn into cuck stories . These stories don’t arouse any feelings except for disgust, for both someone who writes this garbage, and those who praise it. Some of the anonymous “My wife and I” comments are better than these stories. You guys beat me up pretty thoroughly here in this forum and a few others, so I don’t feel too bad when I go after your stories.

 

[Lifestyle66]

I have, as I’ve said previously, no problem at all with your writing. You’re actually quite talented in fact. My only problem is with your content. The last story was a twisted, convoluted, cuck and near incest plot. It was actually a little interesting for a cuck story. I don’t mean to insult authors, but most of the stories I insult are pure garbage that shouldn’t even be posted. It’s ir, impregnation, lesbian, BDSM, and cuck shit have pushed out the simple cheating wife stories, not to mention my beloved BTBs. Even ic69hunter’s favorites, the swinging and swapping stories usually somehow turn into cuck stories . These stories don’t arouse any feelings except for disgust, for both someone who writes this garbage, and those who praise it. Some of the anonymous “My wife and I” comments are better than these stories. You guys beat me up pretty thoroughly here in this forum and a few others, so I don’t feel too bad when I go after your stories.

But you DO cluelessly insult over the content of the story, even if you don't see it in your own written comment.
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Looking at the tags, I thought that you might finally reach the fourth level of vile with this one. Unfortunately, you have failed again. It was kinda sad, what with the poor war damaged veteran being cucked by the kindly small town doctor. In a plot twist , Doc is sharing his wife with the MC and it turns out he is the MC’s biological daddy. So, in another almost vile twist, the kid MC is cucking his biological pappy with his step mother, who incidentally turns out to be an oversexed slut herown self. In an educational side note, who knew, even after a 20 plus year in medicine, that you could pick out a whore from hormone levels in her blood. Ma and Pa then educators inexperienced girl friend in the joys of heterosexual and even lesbian sex, thereby turning our boy into a voyeur like his daddy. He was perfectly willing to be a cuck too, but dear old Dr Dad had a few ethics left and turned down of vile, it barely even offended me. sex with the young girlfriend. So, sorry Lifestyle, this one not only didn’t reach the fourth level
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First nothing in the story says he actually fucked the other wife, merely that the four of them decided he was the only one who could give her a baby. That might have been via IVF, except for your narrow mind.

Second, any competent doctor should be able to look at hormone levels in a blood test and have a good idea of the patient's energy and sex drive. It's only some politically correct types who try to nay-say and hide from the public that excessively high levels of certain hormones cause changes in mental state (ie, excessively high levels of testosterone can cause anger management issues and violent tendencies in men.)

Third, nothing in the story says she takes any money for sex (whore?), particularly from Doc, since she owns THREE beachfront condos in the Florida Keys, and she actually states she only married Doc for his cock.

Lastly, the MC never said he offered or wanted Doc to fuck his GF, merely that Doc stated he would never do that because she's both too young and a patient of his.


So, troll, you are reading into the story your own insecurities and being triggered by your own imagination. And you still hide behind an alt ID to cowardly protect your own stories from such judgements from us. (Not that I would as unfairly retaliate against yours, but it would be interesting to see where your head's at in your own writings.)