My Andy Thread

[Maria2394]

YOU are the delusional one.... YOU are the one that backtracks and changes course.l and YOU are the ONE still not taking credit for your own mistakes!!!

First you lied and said I made up Strateego. When I asked you why I hadn't changed the word after I proved it was questioned over two years ago you changed the subject. Then you had something to say about Synchronated and accussed me of making up another word. Once that was settled you changed direction again. Now, you are calling me a liar again and asscusing me of misrepresenting my daughter and blaming her for something I couldn't care less about to begin with.{

IF you dont care about typos, then WHY did you attack LIar over one?? am I lying about that, huh?



Okay eve, i agree with you. I respect you . I am outta here. I tried to read his work, offer suggestions and feedback. He didnt want that any way, he wants people to ooh and ahh over his little award.


ooohh, ahhh., there cubby, you can be happy now. YOU won, you got people to read your work, there are easier ways of doing that without alienating everyone you come in contact with. I dont regret attacking you, see? I admit what I do and what I dont. It just pissed me off to see you so low-classed attacking good people with no reason,except to make yourself feel bigger.l dont mind defending people, and if someone cam ein here and called you name swith no provocation I might have defended you before you acted like an ass...

and you did make up Streteego, all your fussing and growling wont change it, but hey, if you lie to yourself and that makes you feel happy, go for it!!!

BUt, you should quit lying to yourself!! only then will you be able to grow as a poet, if you dont, then you will continue to blame others for your problems and failures in life.

also, you do owe your daughter an apology, above and beyond anyone else, for usiing her like you did when you blamed her for your mistakes and not accepting them as your own.

be well, grow. write. stop calling people names.


I am sorry I ever called you any names. That wasnt right. I admit that.

and that is all I apologize for.

 

[annaswirls]

Hey Andy, just a quick friendly note: All you have to do to get a poem "approved" in the Poetry Discussion Forum is review two poems (and I know you have done that akready-- you gave an insiteful review on one of mine, and others as well.)

There is no pre-review or approval, just a possible wait in line. There are a bunch of different ways to put poems out there for review all over the forum, and I know you have probably found most of them, but in that particular spot, it was thought best to focus on one new one at time. It seems to have worked out very well for many people.

I think whatever works for you is what you should do, but I did not want you to exclude that venue over a misunderstanding.

Okay, back to work! Have fun,

~anna

I declined to post there because I don't feel like taking the extra step
to post my poetry for critique.

I ddn't see any purpose of having to submit a poem
and then have it reviewed and approved for critique.

I post my poetry in many forums for critique with little fear or
concern for what may arise.

I do it to improve my writing and the poem.

If you would take a minute to scan the folder you are referring to
you would find I am contributing there.

I have also posted approxiametely ten poems on this site in the past
week.

Feel free to critique any of them. So long as you know in advance
there is little chance of you influencing me or my poetry in any way.

That conclusion is based on reading you.

best,
andy

 

[Cub4ucme]

YOU are the delusional one.... YOU are the one that backtracks and changes course.l and YOU are the ONE still not taking credit for your own mistakes!!!





IF you dont care about typos, then WHY did you attack LIar over one?? am I lying about that, huh?


best,
andy

 

[Cub4ucme]

Hey Andy, just a quick friendly note: ~anna

Anna,




I'll give it a shot based on your good intentions.

Have a good night, and thank you.

best,
andy

 

[Cub4ucme]

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[Cub4ucme]

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[Tzara]

You are one sick lying, deceitful, unhappy, talentless bitch.

Fuck you. I'll not only call you names.

I'll make you sorry you ever assasinated my character to begin with.

Futhermore, if you continue to tell me how to handle my daughter and don't keep her out of the discussion I'll stick comcast so far up your ass you'll be wondering what the hell happened to your voice.

I've had enough of your shit now.

There's no turning back.

You either own up and apologize or deal with me.

You've been wrong about EVERY fucking accussation you've made.

You're a talentless CUNT with an agenda.

You wanted to piss me off. Good you suceeded.

Now, deal with it.

Fuck You you brainless cunt.

andrew spaschak

This is just uncalled for, whatever the provocation.

There is no defense or excuse for the vileness of your response.

I can't even respond to this in any way but revulsion.

 

[GuiltyPleasure]

T, have you got the antedote to this poisonous thread?. This is definitely an overdose.

 

[Cub4ucme]

vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv


Maria's Meltdown

She dreams of fish-smells
mullets jumping in her mouth
soft boats that shake and spit

it's just a dream

nobody's looking

inside her pants
where she screams
"fuck me please"

the tilted head
gives her away
it's painful
to want
to need

it makes her angry
she plays handball
against the ceiling
gravity always wins


karma doesn't skip generations
it boomerangs before a day is done

the candle flickers
she fucks herself to sleep
then wakes up to a dark MOURNING

just a play on words
just a play on him
just a play on life

nothing's ever settled at Greystone
they die and a new one gets a bed.

ajs

 

[champagne1982]

This is just uncalled for, whatever the provocation.

There is no defense or excuse for the vileness of your response.

I can't even respond to this in any way but revulsion.

Tzara, you can respond, report the post to Literotica. I did.

And no andy, you are still on ignore, but I do know how to use the vB tools.

 

[Cub4ucme]

This is just uncalled for, whatever the provocation.


.

Oh, really?



andy

 

[Cub4ucme]

Tzara, you can respond, report the post to Literotica. I did.

And no andy, you are still on ignore, but I do know how to use the vB tools.

Oh, and I suppose I should care?

I'm glad you filtered me.

It's one less asshole I have to deal with.

andy

 

[Tzara]

T, have you got the antedote to this poisonous thread?. This is definitely an overdose.

All I can suggest is that everyone ignore his posts. We don't respond to him, he will eventually stop responding to us. I hope.

That he was angry about whatever slights he felt he had received was one thing. But with this last incredibly ugly post, he has now not only stepped over a line, he has completely erased any claim to sympathy whatsoever. That was just disgusting.

I am sorry I ever commented on anything he wrote. That was a mistake. I am not sure that I made anything worse, but I certainly didn't help.

My apologies to anyone affected. I now feel unclean.

 

[champagne1982]

Misdirection

The problem with a misogynist
is the mistrust and hate spills
into idiocy and becomes
misanthropy, a self hate
that damages self-control
and respect. Being female,
I daren't criticize the hater
for accusations of misandry
will rise up out of the pool
of testosterone to drown
me out. I love men, I prefer
their company but then again,
I like dogs. Maybe since
both wag their tails.

 

[Cub4ucme]

All I can suggest is that everyone ignore his posts. We don't respond to him, he will eventually stop responding to us. I hope.

That he was angry about whatever slights he felt he had received was one thing. But with this last incredibly ugly post, he has now not only stepped over a line, he has completely erased any claim to sympathy whatsoever. That was just disgusting.

I am sorry I ever commented on anything he wrote. That was a mistake. I am not sure that I made anything worse, but I certainly didn't help.


My apologies to anyone affected. I now feel unclean.

We-We-We-

Asshole-- You should have figured that out a long time ago.

What you fail to recognize (conveniently, I might add) is who initiates things.

Don't respond to me. I'll thank you down the road.

You'll thank me too.

It WILL happen, you just don't know it yet.

best,
andy

 

[Cub4ucme]

Misdirection

The problem with a misogynist

 

[Cub4ucme]

tertege

 

[bogusbrig]

I am not going to ever back down or allow someone to assasinate my character in any way, shape, or form.

Jeez Andy. Stand back and take a look, no one has to assassinate your character.

You would have been better off doing a quick side step, giving a smile and letting your poetry do the talking more than ten pages ago.

We all get pissed off at some point but don't you get pissed off at being pissed off or is that a particular problem I have?

 

[clutching_calliope]

Shovelling

Pleas excuse this interruption:
Just taking some time to keep burying the bones. Please feel free to grab a shovel and join in keeping Literotica clean.
Thank you for your cooperation.

 

[Cub4ucme]

Misdirection

The problem with a misogynist
is the mistrust and hate spills
into idiocy and becomes
misanthropy, a self hate
that damages self-control
and respect. Being female,
I daren't criticize the hater
for accusations of misandry
will rise up out of the pool
of testosterone to drown
me out. I love men, I prefer
their company but then again,
I like dogs. Maybe since
both wag their tails.

I've got you figured out

 

[Cub4ucme]

Jeez dfgesgdr

 

[Cub4ucme]

For Maria:

I'll continue thiis with one poem until I am tired of it:



Toy Soldiers


Fresh,
a slip of tongue
an adolescent impulse.
Later he will learn not
to say what he means,
when he dims to mellow.




Tough,
he'll learn to be
a remnant of himself.
He'll carve days of dollars
they'll rise and fall,
sink or swim.




Later,
he will gaze
at the slip curl of
a summer moon
thinking of lead
army men, and G.I. Joe.




June,
such a lovely month
for a man to be born,
again, and again,
dying in-between
each blink of sun.




Stranger,
what kind are you
Gray or blue?
I'd really like to know
if you ever won
at Strateego.




Before,
we begin our dance
of words and impressions,
here beside the middle-age
of life, still taking sides
and building walls.




Tomorrow,
you may find me
beside a hemlock
picking small cones
for a Marigold potpourri
no less, or more a man.





Until,
that day arrives
we guard ourselves
enough to be at ease
to give each other
what we plan.




Free,
Is a large word
it comes in moments
when the soul is loud,
then quietly slips away
hanging just beyond
our reach.




Me,
I chose the ones
in the prone position
blue, they fought at rest
hidden in the black grass
bullets whizzing by.



ajs

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i love the line "when he dims to mellow". i also enjoyed theimagery you use and your use of colors. they make things more vivid. this poem really involves the senses and i like that.
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I don't know much about construct and structure in poetry but I like the "look" of this poem. The words are great, of course. Thanks for the read.

Scott


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ah, you had me from start to finish.. i went back and read it again.. very interesting, your words pulled at something in me.

"Tomorrow,
you may find me
beside a hemlock
picking small cones
for a Marigold potpourri
no less, or more a man."

beautiful hearttouching read.. did you write this recently?

regards
thyme

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Sabine
seaspirit06
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Thyme

Thyme,



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shropshire lad
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Greetings Andy
This is an interesting poem
It generates a lot of thought
Also questions
I read it a few days back
But I wanted it to settled before comment
As some of the type of imagery I was commenting on elsewhere

I like this very much
Free,
Is a large word
it comes in moments
when the soul is loud,
then quietly slips away
hanging just beyond
our reach.

Also the last strophe
There is much to be admired
In the entire work

Thank you
Warm regards jack








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Ruredernot32 welcome to Splash
these are great words
what a set up this is for relateing to Toy Soldiers
awesome


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I'm not sure how I missed this. It's beautiful and interesting all at once.



There are just so many thoughts and images in this to appreciate.

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Sampo
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Hi, Andy.

Some great words and images in here -

Later,
he will gaze
at the slip curl of
a summer moon
thinking of lead
army men, and G.I. Joe.

June,
such a lovely month
for a man to be born,
again, and again,
dying in-between
each blink of sun.

Especially this -

Free,
Is a large word
it comes in moments
when the soul is loud,


Regards,

sampo.

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I liked the juxtaposition of the toy soldiers and life. Wonderful. I remember playing Strateego myself. Here, too, the antithesis of the plastic pieces and the old-fashioned lead soldiers. Old wars, new wars, the loss is still the same. This really touched me.

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[Liar]

It seems to me to be a matter of "Well, you started it, so now I have carte blanche to throw whatever mud I wanna, and I'm never ever backing down. Waaa!" from several people, and has exploded far beyond any original controversy.

So may I please ask all sides of this sad circus, Andy, Maria et al, to provide links to the post or posts where this all started? I'll bet my pants everyone is "just defending themselves" here.

Stop hurling mud, people. Get specific and justify your rages with concrete arguments. If there is a first stone thrown, show it.

Or shut the fuck up.

Personally, I don't care who started what. Like I said before if A throws poop and B throws back, B is still a poop thrower. But it seems to be of oh-so-great importance to some. So at least do it right.


thank you,
Liar