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First of all, the 5 - 7 - 5 syllable rule is not mandatory in English. It is more desirable to reduce the poem to the minimum of syllables that express the poet's intent. I am not one of the "resident" experts in Haiku (but I try to pay attention to their comments). Should you draw attention from one of them, listen to their words, but ignore any invective.jsh3180 said:I am a novice Haiku poet...I have always enjoyed the style and have written a few..mostly from inspiration of love or whatever..I have written haiku for my bride to be on impulse only. Oh lord, now I have been requesed to write one for her on a particular subject...her lips....I guess my last one about her hair impressed her..HELP? Does this work?
Sun bursts profoundly
Warmth calls nature to her heart
Lip blooms awaken
This is one of the longer works that I have read by this author. A lot of it reads like a coffee house recital by a Joycian poet, and all of it requires several readings out loud....
Folding seats need crease,
Two hand salutes,
Swept away by exploration into the secrets of others secrets and minds and pants and ears until there are many and all are alone and only singular when with another of similar fashion whispering and letting drool hang and drip to the duel lovers of no or little name with no or little pain meant for colors of meaning where there were lessons learned but most remembered are the hot tongue tipped metal piercings of them and the other done only for the first one and enjoyed by the saluting suitors.
OK,OK, so I am a sucker for alliteration.Four feet feather a dirty floor,
she is smoke spinning
suspended in sacrifice;
a serene soulful séance.
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OT said:An image of a hasty departure, rendered in rhyme:
"She fell upon the spread
As he zipped and left the bed,
Throwing a Jefferson to flutter
While she finished a final shudder."
Look here for the rest:
Sousa Gets Inspiration by JUDO
In another Judo offers up this phrase:
"Our chorus rises to cacophonic screams"
Look here to see what all the screaming is about:
A Chorus of Droplets by JUDO
OT said:----------
Eve has a way of making you smile and feel just a bit afraid at the same time.
Divorce This Side Of The Rainbow by WickedEve