Lauren Hynde
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Only a few new poems posted today (unless there are still more to come) so you might as well read them all: New Poetry
Still, some that caught my attention:
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different live$
a new life is made between the sheets
a life is worth a pile of money
how big a pile of money?
[...]
and
Sweet Angels
by Senna Jawa ©
don't know no violence
they work hard
they've sold their private cars
for the cause
[...]
Not your average Senna--both of them maybe a little too preachy for my taste--, but technically irreprehensible, like always. Read and send feedback.
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The Sound of Jazz
by tailwind1913 ©
Sexily,
Slowly,
Sleepily,
Seductively drowning in a sea of
Rhythmatic,
Dynamic,
Orgamsic Notes.
[...]
New poet. Make her feel welcomed and send feedback. I think it has potential--a case for Angeline the Poetry Girl?
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simply Blues
by silken_dreammaid ©
by silken_dreammaid ©
Whispers of splintered blues
quiver, seeking the mate
that paints on living page
with a brush of soul.
[...]
Another very good swinging effort by one of the best poets out there. I love the last stanza (follow the link).
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Still, some that caught my attention:
-------------------------------------------------
different live$
a new life is made between the sheets
a life is worth a pile of money
how big a pile of money?
[...]
and
Sweet Angels
by Senna Jawa ©
don't know no violence
they work hard
they've sold their private cars
for the cause
[...]
Not your average Senna--both of them maybe a little too preachy for my taste--, but technically irreprehensible, like always. Read and send feedback.
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The Sound of Jazz
by tailwind1913 ©
Sexily,
Slowly,
Sleepily,
Seductively drowning in a sea of
Rhythmatic,
Dynamic,
Orgamsic Notes.
[...]
New poet. Make her feel welcomed and send feedback. I think it has potential--a case for Angeline the Poetry Girl?
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simply Blues
by silken_dreammaid ©
by silken_dreammaid ©
Whispers of splintered blues
quiver, seeking the mate
that paints on living page
with a brush of soul.
[...]
Another very good swinging effort by one of the best poets out there. I love the last stanza (follow the link).
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