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Re: YIKES--EVE wrote me about this

JCSTREET said:
she wanted to know where i got her poem to comment on it

I had the impression that a kattpurr (sp?) post had alerted me to it and now i see it also from the peripatetic and ever omniscient Angeline (whom boomerengeue figures will eventually track me down)

so now i see it under angeline's sobriquet so Eve--I'm getting it from all over the place

and this is my feel

and this is what blew me away--because i have spent the last 10 years (online in 87--browser by 94) reading crap poetry on the Net--the eternal whinings and rants of the decerebrate and now suddenly i come on couplets like this

In the swamp's distance,
the flesh house leaned


LOL...boy, leave it to me to visit a place for a few minutes and get the place astir! I saw Eve's poem in JC's post, with kudos to Angeline in the subject line. I was confused. I knew that poem came from Eve's entry in a Lotus Blooms Forums competition/exercise. I couldn't figure out why the heck there was no mention of her in that post, so I asked (without divulging I knew it was Eve's). It appears, (after relentless investigation) that the original post can be found on pg. 1 of this forum. No idea about anything after that. My final conclusion was that JC had visited the first page, and agreed with Angeline's review of Eve's "Bordello Circus".

So, JC, howarya? lol...What a way to meet you! I'm enjoying reading you, and reading here again.

Best to you all,

Kat :rose:
 
originally posted by JCSTREET

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long skirt--possibly black--possibly blue pinstripe - gasrter belt and stockings underneath--hard to define the panties but white french knickers would not disappoint

a woman like this used to beat me when I was 8 or 9 and i couldnt' figure out why I yearned for her


oh Tara darling _ I see your pretty convent uniform

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Nun in garters with raised fist.

Now there's a fantasy you don't come across every day.
 
originally posted by JCSTREET

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long skirt--possibly black--possibly blue pinstripe - gasrter belt and stockings underneath--hard to define the panties but white french knickers would not disappoint

a woman like this used to beat me when I was 8 or 9 and i couldnt' figure out why I yearned for her


oh Tara darling _ I see your pretty convent uniform

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Nun in garters with raised fist. :eek:

Now there's a fantasy you don't come across every day.
 
tarablackwood22 said:
originally posted by JCSTREET

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Nun in garters with raised fist. :eek:

Now there's a fantasy you don't come across every day.


:eek:



lmfao


so.....................
; )
 
Re: Re: Re: Re: YIKES--EVE wrote me about this

WickedEve said:

Fat ass, my ass! (Wait--that came out wrong, lol.) I think your ass is um yknow small...and...and round....

Have we had this convo before?

:D
 
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: YIKES--EVE wrote me about this

Angeline said:
Fat ass, my ass! (Wait--that came out wrong, lol.) I think your ass is um yknow small...and...and round....

Have we had this convo before?

:D

You forgot yummy.


Yummy:D

Syn :kiss:
 
Re: Re: Re: Re: YIKES--EVE wrote me about this

WickedEve said:

Hi sweet stuff
as far as I can see...your ass is muy delisicioso
; )
y mi hermosas habalas SI!!
 
I just spent the last half hour trying to

track down the link to TaraBlackwood

and failed
miserably

am I losing my powers

should I just lie down in my casket and close my eyes

(it's in the spare bedroom--I usu hide bottles in it)

Tara?

Please write me at carledgar@email.com unless you're a cynic

Carl
(giving up and going back to bed)
 
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: YIKES--EVE wrote me about this

Tathagata said:
Hi sweet stuff
as far as I can see...your ass is muy delisicioso
; )
y mi hermosas habalas SI!!


Si si!

magnifico y muy delisioso

Syn :D
 
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: YIKES--EVE wrote me about this

Syndra Lynn said:
Si si!

magnifico y muy delisioso

Syn :D

tu es me hermosa Syn
; )
hola y como estas tu?
 
Guys (and girls), please don't misinterpret this or hate me for saying it, but do you remember why this thread was started?

The original New Poems thread had become a sort of chat room, and people would have to go through over 20/30 posts between each poetry recommendation. It was fun, but...
 
Lauren Hynde said:
Guys (and girls), please don't misinterpret this or hate me for saying it, but do you remember why this thread was started?

The original New Poems thread had become a sort of chat room, and people would have to go through over 20/30 posts between each poetry recommendation. It was fun, but...

I'm in a great mood. I'll be proper tomorrow. I promise.

:heart:
 
Lauren Hynde said:
Guys (and girls), please don't misinterpret this or hate me for saying it, but do you remember why this thread was started?

The original New Poems thread had become a sort of chat room, and people would have to go through over 20/30 posts between each poetry recommendation. It was fun, but...

Killjoy
 
minsue said:
There are too many good poems today to let them pass without notice so I'll toss a few out there. Forgive my ramblings...;)

First up on my list is the first poem on the new poems page: RazzRajen's Straining Sounds. I had some trouble following because it's hard for me to read when the lines are formatted that way (a personal failing ;) ), but the images painted were beautiful.


- Mindy, poet-groupie

Thanks for taking the time to review and mention the poems...It is always appreciated - the giving of time and self so people can see what might be of interest to them.

And I am sorry for the delay in noting since the review was 3 pages back :p or maybe 2 :D


Razz
:devil:
 
Lauren Hynde said:
Guys (and girls), please don't misinterpret this or hate me for saying it, but do you remember why this thread was started?

The original New Poems thread had become a sort of chat room, and people would have to go through over 20/30 posts between each poetry recommendation. It was fun, but...
Shut up, girl. They are talking about my ass. My ass!

Oh, and I want to say this about new poems. We have new poems today. Please read them. And then talk about them on this thread that is a new poems thread. It really is. If anyone wants to start an Eve's ass thread, feel free... as long as it's poetic, of course. On second thoughts, don't do it. :rolleyes:
 
RazzRajen said:
And I am sorry for the delay in noting since the review was 3 pages back :p or maybe 2 :D
See?! :D


edited to add:

Eve, that's a fine ass and it deserves its own thread. ;)

When was the last time I shut up for anything? :eek:
 
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We now interupt your regularly scheduled playtime

for a word about some poetry!

Please go right now and read ALL the New Poems

Here a few must sees:

annaswirls is still having conversations. I like the seventh of the series

Liar wrote my favorite today aspiring to dream

jthserra never writes a bad one. Today's is disturbing and profoundly moving. Go read two nights, two mornings and one afternoon

sappholovers brings us a GREAT poem from the shower: (illicit) Shower Thoughts I love a steamy shower scene and this one has twisted mind games wrapped around it!

Boomerengue brings us Wasteland to which I am sure we all relate

and I can only imagine by WickedEve caught my eye and made me catch my breath.

and if you want one just for fun, try The Complexities of Wine and Poetry by me

Bright blessings to all who write and read and vote!

Syn :kiss:

edited to say that I was writing this while Lauren was chastising the rest of the kids cause great minds think alike;)
 
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Re: We now interupt your regularly scheduled playtime

Syndra Lynn said:
and I can only imagine by WickedEve caught my eye and made me catch my breath.
Breathe deeply and accept my gratitude for mentioning what I can only imagine and write.
 
Re: We now interupt your regularly scheduled playtime

Syndra Lynn said:
jthserra never writes a bad one. Today's is disturbing and profoundly moving. Go read two nights, two mornings and one afternoon

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Thank you Syndra for the kind words. This was written about a young girl who was murdered in the Houston area. She was missing for a couple of days while they searched the woods in the surrounding area. They finally found her in the attic of a nearby neighbor. The ordeal started one night, carried over one entire day until the following morning, hence the title two nights, two mornings and one afternoon.

thanks again,

jim : )
 
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