Rybka
Nit pick; pearl too!
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- Jan 6, 2002
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new poems on 3/09/03
Sunday brings us 33 new poems. This was expected since yesterday held so few.
Maybe I am just a grumpy fish this morning, but I find little of exceptional interest today. To my eye, even the works of our regular contributors are, for the most part, only average for them. But these are only the thoughts of an odd fish. Please feel free to jump in the water and add to the list those poems that caught your attention.
Here are three that I thought rose above the rest:
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The Supplicant by samadhi ©
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My choice for the day is jazm49's The Blacksmith
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OK, OK. Here is the mandatory 03sp poem of the day.
Just Never Mind
Regards, Rybka
Sunday brings us 33 new poems. This was expected since yesterday held so few.
Maybe I am just a grumpy fish this morning, but I find little of exceptional interest today. To my eye, even the works of our regular contributors are, for the most part, only average for them. But these are only the thoughts of an odd fish. Please feel free to jump in the water and add to the list those poems that caught your attention.
Here are three that I thought rose above the rest:
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The Supplicant by samadhi ©
For an erotic poem this one if pretty good. I especially like this first stanza.I am bound with honeyed embers
that slowly stitch beneath the skin
seeking to weave your mark
into tender hidden places
...
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My choice for the day is jazm49's The Blacksmith
And I love these lines......
I dreamed I approached his shop at twilight
as his heavy hammer made the anvil sing
and entered the deeper dark
to watch as he, my uncle, naked to the waist,
illuminated by the forge's glowing coals,
beat his body's fleeting wisdom into iron.
...
This is a wonderful poem of homage.Damaged,
one leg shorter than the other,
he walked with a flawed magnificence.
...
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OK, OK. Here is the mandatory 03sp poem of the day.
Just Never Mind
For some reason I seem to prefer 03sp's longer poems....
I adore a friendly back space key
life is not poetry
straight lines up and down
horizontal melt
cookies for the kids
a look seen
...
Regards, Rybka
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