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I don't think we will ever solve the mystery of the E.Lauren.Hynde said:I had had the priviledge of reading both Judo's and Angeline's Prodigal of Blue poems before they were ready and posted, so I knew this would happen. They are up there with the best I've read not only in Lit but anywhere, and if Laurel has inexplicably decided not to give both of them Es, I'd surely put them in any of my top lists.
My little Ls aren't working now, but you have'em.
Rybka wrote03sp said:Rybka, please tell me what I missed?
Somehow I attributed one of the poems to you. Sorry about that! I did enjoy your late submission (I was early.) but Judo's blew (Hee, Hee) everyone else away!O.K. Of the poems already posted. here are my choices for 4x4x8ies challenge "Prodigal of Blue". All were a "5" 0r at least a "4". But the ones I liked best were by 03sp, Lauren.Hynde, American Woman, guilty pleasure, and OT . This was an excellent challenge. All the entries were very good (or perhaps we are all starting to respond more seriously to these challenges.)!
So how come it only has two votes and an average of 2.67? (And how is that possible??)Cordelia said:Rybka,
As I mentioned in the other thread, I thought your Prodigal Blue poem was amazing.
Don't delete it!
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Cordelia
WickedEve said:Thanks Judo for making the rest of us suck.
Thank you, Ange. I apreciate the help you gave me and would like to point out the first stanza's not bad either. Well, at least there's no in dreamtime the color arc, killed by fiery gold in it.Angeline said:Lauren wrote a very strong piece, too, I thought. Another great last stanza:
Fluid memories, a brocade of ashes,
indigo unrealities in me undulating:
king in exile, vagabond in a siren's dream
of the sweet blue of East and sapphires.
WickedEve said:Let's start out with Liver Spots. The title makes me cringe slightly but since it's a poem by Rybka I knew it would most likely be good. And it is.
Liver Spots
by Rybka ©
Brown earth shows
through melting drifts
of frozen snow ...
Cordelia said:
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And, finally, go read Blue Dolphin's powerful anti-war poem Democracy deceived.
Blue Dolphin has a way of writing poems that have certain lines that really jump out at you. Here are the ones I kept re-reading:
[...]
kiss the night
clasp the scream
[...]
Good stuff.
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Cordelia
Angeline said:[
reflection by silken_dreammaid
Your reflection is faster than you.
It has no second thoughts
nor distractions from perfection.
Its mirror is you, the flawed
indecisive progenitor
who sees only outside the glass.
I like silken_dreammaid's oeuvre of poetry: it's varied in subject and she writes so fluently--and I find it astonishing that she maintains the level of quality ever darn day! Today's offering though I really think is wonderful--one of her best. She works through the import of one's reflection so thoughtfully and logically and does so with the loveliest flowing language. Damn she's good!
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