SireLooksinMA
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Critique of my 1st submission
I would love to hear a frank critique of my first submission. It is titked Caroline's Undoing and can be found at http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=43336
Hope to hear back from you.
SireLooksinMA
I would love to hear a frank critique of my first submission. It is titked Caroline's Undoing and can be found at http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=43336
Hope to hear back from you.
SireLooksinMA