So...today is Arpil 10.2009

[Reshbod]

Yawn. Your sad, pathetic bullshit is starting to wear thin. For someone who hates wimp huband/cheating stories you sure spend a lot of time thinking about them. Some people like them. Deal with it.

Grow up and fuck off.

 

[krastner]

Yo NYMINUS...you sure have all the trolls out in force. Keep it up. KRASTNER

 

[sr71plt]

Yo NYMINUS...you sure have all the trolls out in force. Keep it up. KRASTNER

One comment to nyminus and one to you in the past 10 days is "full force" on responses? If it weren't for you two, this thread would have died the good death a month ago.

 

[nyminus]

Sorry but have been busy Now to the fun stuff. Tihis if for GW66. Tried to send you PM but got the error message."unknown user" Of cours you exist and write great stories about real testicles. Hey MANCELT...want to take me on. I can assure you that you will be hurt because I love to hurt litt pathetic wimp writers.

On a more pleasant note I find that fewer and fewer "wimp" husbands that want to see their wives fuck another man has dropped Hope this is because of me. If one of you sticks your nose up to write another..."Oh I want to see my innocent wife fuck another man because i want to watch him do it and see his cock giving her a fuck that I am not capable of" stories I will put you down...

 

[sr71plt]

I see you didn't spend your time away from the board improving your command of English.

Kind of makes me want to go off and write and post an "Oh I want to see my innocent wife fuck another man because i want to watch him do it and see his cock giving her a fuck that I am not capable of" story.

 

[Reshbod]

Oh good! I was getting worried about you. I thought you might have given yourself an aneurism the way you get so upset over fictional stories.

I think I have an idea for a cool story.

An innocent wife is lonely because her husband is constantly on internet sex story sites getting into a rage because some people fantasize about topics he does not care for. He gets so angry he is unable to "perform". The wife decides to take a walk to get some fresh air. She meets a strong hunk who is 100X the man the husband will ever be and a multi-millionaire.

She runs off with the hunk and has a wonderful, full life while the pathetic dickless fool of an ex husband still rants on online sex story sites about fictional stories.

 

[JADED_ONE1969]

Hello Nyminus

*******

 

[Reshbod]

I can assure you that you will be hurt because I love to hurt litt pathetic wimp writers.

On a more pleasant note I find that fewer and fewer "wimp" husbands that want to see their wives fuck another man has dropped Hope this is because of me. If one of you sticks your nose up to write another...stories I will put you down...

Who is against free speech here?

Yes, anyone can say what they want. Also, anyone can write and read the stories that they want. Why is this a difficult concept?

 

[sr71plt]

The reason you can't email me as GW66 is because I am now JADED_ONE1969-just don'T TELL ANYONE!

I don't normally comment on the disccusion forum I find most writers and readers on this forum to be very intolerant of new ideas and of people like yourself who think differently to them. I see that Sir Split and Roshbad don't like you moaning about cheating wife stories? Strange I thought this site was a free speech site and anyone and everyone can do and say what they like.

Regards

JADED_ONE1969-(GW)

You seem to be looking through the wrong end of the telescope both on who is being intolerant and who is supporting free speech here. But, then, remembering you under your previous name, I'm not surprised.

 

[nyminus]

I personally believe in free speach but when it came to adults wanting to have sex with a three year old child because it was it's right, I drew the line. A writer has to be responsible for the crap he spews out. I think it is a plot by asshole arabs that are trying to undermine us. You and Rashbod , sir split in ass are probably fanatic Muslims that are trying to destroy us and using the written word to help it along. The Indian and Pakis are doing it now with their Yonis and linghams. But stay the course oh Jaded One...nyminus

 

[sr71plt]

You've found stories of sex with three-year-olds (or even contemplating it) here on Literotica? If so, do report them, because they aren't permitted.

I wonder if GW66 would consider the phrase "asshole arabs" and the context you give here to that and Indians and Pakistanis as well examples of your tolerance.

Probably so.

 

[krastner]

Hey Nyminus...let me answer this one. There are asshole Arabs and there are asshole Chinese, asshole, asshole Mexican, asshole Brits and asshole Americans... even...no no...ESPECIALLY ASSHOLE SPITS SO TAKE YOUR ASSHOLE AND SPIT IT...preferable over a hot fire

 

[nyminus]

Thanks Krastner but I don't need help to take down a bunch of wimps. Have you noticed that they have been rather quite lately...I am just waiting for the next one to pop it's litt;e pointed head...then BANG.

 

[krastner]

Hey Nyminus...I have noticed that a lot more writer are getting balls and stomping the other guy's ass and I have also noticed that all but the most avid cocksuckers are writing cheating wioves stories. They can't help it...It's like a compulson...like the compulson to wank off a little drippy pewee...Could be you are getting to them with your phycho babble...Keep it up...KRAS

 

[nyminus]

I see you posted a few days ago. Sorry that I wasn't here sooner. You're right about thw writers sprouting testicles. You noticed that too. Well Kras of buddy I got something new to bitch about. I hope you are not a drinker. I just saw a story by MICK60SA who doen't accept feedback either on his story feedback or his profile page. Another drunked sop that thinks with a mind clouded with alchol. In this one he tells about two co-workers that have sex after waking up from a drunken night after a party (given by his employer after going out of business...I can well see why he went out of business if all his employees were hung over every morning like the writers "hero" drunk. He sleeps with another employee that is married and a whore drunk with a drink sodden brain who doesn't realize that the guy isn't her husband. Well old Mick...you might not accept any adverse thought on your story page but you 'll sure get it here from me. Why do you have to drink at all? you and your fellow drunks keep MARIJUANA illegal and keep drinking a drug nthat is a hundred times more harmful. You glorify being a drunk. You and your kind caused the world economy to collapse with your sodden brains.

And yet MICK60 old drunk...I bet if I say the word smoke pot you get all red in the face ...probably from advanced liver problems from drinking ) and bluster and call us dopefiends and all sort of shit. Well you are the problem...not pot smokers...you can't even think straight and certainly have no problem with infedility...all you pot heads read "It Never happened' bu our local drunk... Sorry Kras but i really get hot about drunks like him...

 

[LaRocha]

Mick60, don't listen to him, we need more stories where the cuck husband comes home, finds his wife in bed with his boss, then accepts his new station in life by slurping up his wife's creamypie. Then and only then will this nation pick itself up by it's bootstraps and have the gumption to say "Hey Chinese! We don't need you to buy our thirty-year treasuries any longer, we're gonna get right by the Lord and balance this darn budget!"

 

[nyminus]

Spoken like a true wimp. Man are you sick> "get right with the lord???" I always thought that you so called christians were sickos

 

[LaRocha]

I'd like to recommend Nonstopfunguy's "Me, My Slutwife and Tim"

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=440973

I think you'll like it NYMINUS. It involves a submissive hubby sending his wife to a real man. You'll read it and think, "If I had a wife, I'd send her to Tim too! Then I'd eat Tim's semen from her anus."

 

[nyminus]

I have already read the authors note. [AUTHOR'S NOTE: Clearly, lots of guys don't get the slutwife fetish. They are too insecure with themselves to allow their wife or girlfriend to realize her true self, and really enjoy life. So many guys think women are possessions, so when you have a hot one, other men can't and shouldn't touch her. If she's really, really a sexual creature -- and some women are, not all, but some -- then you're depriving her of fulfilling her true happiness. That doesn't make you a man, does it? So for all of you who think guys like me are pathetic wimps who should be put out of our misery -- check out the comments to the "Brian" story previously posted -- I would just say, who's the real man who's secure with himself and his lover? Huh? Is it more macho to be disgusted that your wife wants to fuck other men -- or to recognize that we're all human, we have positives and negatives, and your wife might actually have good reactions with other men but that doesn't mean she doesn't love you. Be a man, face reality, you're not perfect. No one is. That's the point of this story here.]
And have already emailed him with my answer

So nonstopfunguy
Some men realize what slobs other men are (like you..you cuckold muther) and wouldn't want them slobbering all over the woman they love. You are sick , sick, sick. Don't try putting us down because you are a wimp and probably a closet queer to boot.

I think you just identified yourself as a wimp cockold but I am not sure about the closet part. I think you are a bonified (get it...a BONE ified cocksucker)

 

[LaRocha]

You're killing me, NYMINUS. "Bonified" isn't a word, it's 'Bona fide' from the latin, meaning: By the Law. And I didn't like nonstopfunguy's preface either, that wasn't very manly at all.

But the story, that was so nice. The man's about to have a nice night with his wife, but she gets a call from her boyfriend and she leaves her husband to spend the night with the other guy. The husband is bummed with his cuck experience, it's actually in your favor, it sort of shows how it isn't the glamourous lifestyle that you're used to in all the cuck stories you've read over the years.

Maybe your voice is reaching their ears. Soon all the wimpy cucks will be showing their true colors in their stories, they'll be writing about how when they watch their wife get drilled by another man(with a 9 incher) they're really hurting inside and wish they could resist having to clean the sheets after. Someday, you'll be reading through the loving wives category, and every story will be about a virile husband fucking the young and the old under his wife's nose.

 

[nyminus]

He roche...What you say has merit but I'll pass. For you reading enjoyment here is a comment I wrote JDM2626..although it should read . DUMBASS0000. Oh and don't correct me...that's a stupid way of putting me down and it makes you smaller than you are. I write these and don't worry about "political correctness in grammar or spelling or what ever. I just write. You must understand me or you wouldn't mention it. I feel that the purpose of writing and speaking is to communicate and I've done that...So fuck your self with you own little pee pee ( or would you prefer "wee wee?" Now to that JDM WIMP PEICE OF CRAP.

This is a comment brought on by the open marriage
09/28/09 by nyminus
comment. I too read your comment at the beginning of # 2. I read # 1 not knowing what kind of an office day she had. I didn't read past your notice on #2. I read the two comments. One written by you the other by a sensible reader that read your notice and thought that you deserved a comment.I do too. From the way that you wrote your notice you seemed to excuse your wimpness. That's right, even as you protestest to much, you are a wimp personally or a wimp cuckold writer, I put the two as the same. I'll ditto the remark about your "open marriage" as being one sided. you are not only a wimp but you are stupid for falling for your whore wife's bullshit. Now I have included my user name and you can email me...or better yet answer me in story feedback...the one is" so today is Arpil the 10th" it's basically my feelings on wimps like you and whores like your sweet little skank of a wife. Let's see you defend your self in "OPEN" forum. Now JdmWIMP answer me or shut the fuck up./

 

[nyminus]

Oh yeah JDWIMP you sound like a faggot.

 

[LaRocha]

nyminus, someone started a thread in story feedback today asking to be directed to the best cuck stories. I told him to come here and ask you, you know them all by heart.

 

[LaRocha]

...

my feelings on wimps like you and whores like your sweet little skank of a wife.

You use "sweet little skank", that sounds like you enjoy how his wife performed in the story. She sure was "sweet" cucking her husband... So you hate the husband for writing the story, you hate his unmanliness, but you read the story and fantasize about the wife? That sounds like some mini-prick type hypocrisy to me, NyMinus. I thought you were the Executioner of All Cucks, now I find out you enjoy part of the cuck fantasy...

 

[michchick98]

You know, you never did address the issue you obviously have with your own story, so I'll repost it here again (with my critique inter-woven in red) so you can respond as you do to the rest:

I have decided to write my own story and dedicate it to JW66. Papa Toad. Winterfrog, Brittease and others i can't think of right now but this is for you guys and to hell with the wimphusband. whore wives genre. Hope yall like it. I dnot think the wimp brigade will like it. NYMINUSADICK

Knowing well that the people that publish stories on Literotica are just wringing thier hands in glee and waiting for me to try to publish another story that they can use up all the reasons to rejectit, I will write my own here. To answer the most vocal of critics: no I do not write jerk off stories. I write stories of men that were wronged by thieir wives. If there is sex then it has a reason other than getting a hard on.

Oh goody, we get to have fun with reading a whole story from the mistress of cuckolds! YIPEEE!! My comments and critique are in red, woven intricately throughout the story. No, really, there's need to thank me, I'm happy to do it.

Clarence was eagerly waiting for the time clock at work to tell him when he could leave the office. (clocks talk now? how cool!) It was a (it should be 'an hour' not 'a hour'. Your imbecile translator isn't working again) hour commute to the home that he shared with his wife of ten years, Lisa. He and Lisa had two children. Andy was now nine and Becky was eight. When he thought about his wife his cock would get hard and his seven inches would become uncomfortable while driving..(only one period at the end of a sentence) He tried to keep his mind off Lisa and what she had promised to do that night. It was Friday and with the weekend comming (aww, spell check broken too? It's 'coming') up they had let the kids spend the weekend with her parents. During that week he had managed to get the homes taken away from five happy families. His job with the bank as mortage (yeah, spell check is definitely not working, it's 'mortgage' you nitwit) officer was fullfilling ('fulfilling' - three L's, not four) in the respect that he enjoyed it. (figures he'd enjoy putting people out of their homes. He probably likes taking candy from small children, too. What a schmuck.)

The people that he forclosed (SPELL CHECK, SPELL CHECK, SPELL CHECK! the word is 'foreclosed') on cried and even one was shot and killed in the bank. He had six kids too. You would have thought that a man like this would have choosen (uh, 'chosen') another type of job rather than put cars together, (uh, I thought he was a 'mortage' officer?) Machines could do it better. He was glad that the bank had built a panic room and he made it to safety when the man came in looking for him. The guards took him out and made his body look like swiss cheese. He wished he could have seen the bullets rip him apart but his job was so important that he stayed in the fortress like room.

Now he reflected on that night. He had begged lisa (proper names are always capitalized, even in your own fucked up world) for a couple of years now to have sex with another man while he watched. He had worn her down. "Ok Clarence if it's so important that you see me fuck another man then i will, but you have to be aware of the consequences," Lisa had told him just last night. He finally took his cock out and let it free. He mush have (mush have? Is that a new phrase we're unaware of as yet?) cum just thinking about lisa (capitalize her name, there sunshine. After all, she's giving you a boner) with another cock in her cause his cock head was all wet and slippery. It seemed to do that a lot lately. (maybe if he didn't jerk-off with swiss cheese so much, it wouldn't)

Lisa was waiting for him and actually seemed eager to get started on their adventure. Clarence changed and lisa (Lisa, Lisa, Lisa, Lisa, Lisa! Get it now?) had already took her shower. All that was left was for Clarence to select her clothing for the night. He went about this with glee. He had told her no bra or paniies (paniies? What are paniies? Are they something imported from Europe?) and Lisa agreed with him. Se (who is Se?) was going out to get fucked so the less clothes was the best option. He choose a black wrap around dress that came to mid thigh. It also had a quick release mechanism at the front. A ripoff from paratroopers that had only to hut (dude, proofread, please? It's 'hit') the large button and their parachute harness fell away to keep them from getting dragger (yeah, getting dragger is a real pain in the ass. Worse than getting 'dragged') or tangled up. Clarence had been thinking of this time when he bought it for her.

The two of them went to a large bar where neither was known. There were a few single men there but most were older and shabby looking. Lisa went to the ladies room while Clarence ordered for them. He was well versed in alcaholic beverages (but he obviously wasn't well versed in 'alcoholic' beverages since he can't spell the damned word) from his lunches and he was eager to impress lisa. (so not going there again) When she came back they sat in a booth and he saw her Moan Lisa (is this a cheap knock off of the famous "Mona Lisa" by DaVinci? And really, if you can capitalize the name of a painting, can't you capitalize his wife's name consistently?) smile on her face. He knew that look and knew that she was excited about the night. " So Clarence just how big should the other man's cock be.?" (pick one. A sentence gets a period, a question gets a question mark) Lisa asked as she took a large sip from her drink. He never had really thought about it before.

"Oh I'm not really sure Lisa but i am on the large size and I suppose something about as large as me will do," He said. ('he' should not be capitalized here. Maybe you could take that capitalized letter, convert it to an L and add it to a few of the 'lisas' up above)

"No ten or eleven inch cocks then honey?" Lisa said. (actually, it would be 'Lisa asked' and I'm proud of you, you actually remembered to capitalize her name here. And ten or eleven inch cocks? It's not the size, but how you use it that counts.)

"Lisa , (<== should be a closing quote here, no space after the comma and 'he' should be lowercase here ==>) He said paitentlyly, ('paitentlyly?' Are you serious? Do you even have a spell checker?) "Cocks like those are a myth and most men are my size...or less," (<==if this was the end of his dialogue and not followed by a 'he said' [lower case 'he' remember] then the comma should be replaced with a period) He let the last sink in and smiled at his wife. He smiled to himself and settled back to watch Lisa after three single men had arrived. They were just the kind that I wanted fro my wife. (You want a fro for your wife? Hey, whatever floats your boat, dude. But why did you switch to first person POV here? ==>) I saw that she became very excited as the new men looked at he and flirted. One of them. A guy named Scott came and asked her to dance. I allowed it as i ('I' should always be capitalized when referring to oneself.) wanted to see Lisa in the arms of another man for the first time. As they were dancing i (captial 'I") remembered that Scott was the name of the man that i (ditto) took her away from in college. Lisa later confessed that she would have went all the way with Scott in a few more weeks. She did saw that she had felt his cock when they dated.

I smiled as I saw them dancing slow and close. Lisa 's body seemed to melt with his and i (captial 'I") knew that she had to have felt his cock against her. My own cock was very hard and was now dripping. (a space goes between sentences, but only one.) I Thought about the Scott she went with in college. This Scott was the same built and hair color but he seemed to be a lot bulkier that the rather slim man that i (captial 'I")remembered. Then the dance was over and Lisa and Scott came to my booth. He had his arm around his waist and lisa seemed comfortable with it. (I'm sure she would be comfortable if he had his arm around his own waist, but she's gotta be getting pissed since you can't seem to consistently capitalize her name) Lisa picked up her drink and , (no space between 'and' and the comma) throwing her head back, downed it. I knew that i (captial 'I")was in for a night to end all nights. I was a little drunk by then and stood when lisa (Lisa. Capital L.) indicated that she was ready to do the dirty.

We left the bar and went next door to a small old hotel that was perfect to watch your wife fuck another man for the first time. While i (captial 'I")watched them kissing in the lobby i(captial 'I") went and rented a large room. The desk man noticed that my cock was hard as nails. "If there's any left when he's finished with her then call me," he said. I almost shot my load right then listning ('listening' - channel some of that anger and hate and see if you can find your spell checker) to a stranger talk like that about Lisa while she was kissing another strange man. I followed them both to the room and i (captial 'I")had the chance to see his hand on her naked butt. Once again my cock started to dripping heavily. Lisa and Scott seemed about as anxious as me to get in the room. As soon as i (captial 'I")opened the door, they were by me and well in the room. I saw Scott hit Lisa's quick release and her dress fell away.

Scott was just as fast getting his shirt and pants off. As a matter of fact lisa (Oh, I give up! ) was on her knees before him with his pants puddled around his feet. From his muscular loins stood a large thick cock of at least eleven inches. (wait, I thought cocks that big were a myth?) I stood in the door way with my mouth gaped open as she opened her mouth and swallowed all of him right down to his pubic hair.. (Yeah, I guess that would deserve two periods. Geez, she must have an enormous mouth!) Wenh (two words: SPELL CHECK) she came off his cock she looked right at me, "Thanks for letting me fuck Scott tonight...it's been so long," (<==uh, period here, not a comma and she hasn't fucked him yet, she just took that enormous schlong down her equally enormous throat, and if you don't write stroke, why does size matter? Size of a guy's dick only matters in stroke stories)

" Yeah ." (<== no space between the first quotes and 'Yeah' and the end quotes. Comma not period) Scott said as he shook his shoes off," Like all of four hours Lisa love."

I was hearing but at the same time not hearing. I felt someone push by me and i (captial 'I")saw Scotts friends from the bar enter and start to rip thier (S-P-E-L-L C-H-E-C-K) clothes off. One looked at me and said for me to coplse (He wanted you to do WHAT to the door? How rude! Most people would ask you to open it or close it) the door, "We don't want a replay of today when a neighbor...you know the fat man who lived to the right of you...comming (c-o-m-i-n-g) in and seeing Lisa spread out on the floor fucked half to death."

I was speechless. He was talking about Sam. Had Sam saw lisa rolleyes naked. Why was she naked anyway and why were the men there naked with her and why was she looking like she was fucked to death? Before I got the door closed the men were naked and Scott had Lisa on the floor driving his monster cock in her. It looked like she had done this before. "Come on Ted and Jim get naked so i (captial 'I")can have the three cock thing," (Geez, first she has a mile long mouth and throat, now she has a three cock thing? She must be some kinda freak! No wonder you want her to fuck other men, you must feel sorry for the way she looks) Lisa said and reaching out fro Ted's cock (Ted has a fro on his cock? Cool! Matches the fro Lisa has, I'll bet!) she flipped on her front and opened her ass cheeks up. (Now, on top of the whole mouth and throat thing and the three cock machine, she has ass cheeks that open? Maybe you shouldn't take her out in public, she might frighten small children. Although, you'd enjoy that, wouldn't you?) I saw that Scotts (<== there should be an apostrophe before the 's' because the cock belongs to Scott [well, for now it does]) cock didn't even come out of her cunt as she turned around. (Scott must be a contortionist if Lisa can turn around and his cock is still inside her. Damn. A man who can fuck around corners, what a dream!) Ted got behind her turned up butt cheeks (Wait, do they turn up or open?) and rammed his ten inch cock (another man with a mythical cock?) in her tiny anus. (well, if her anus is too small, just have her open or turn up her ass cheeks! ) It must not have been small as she took him easily. She had always told me that she didn't like that kind of sex. (Surprise! Her ass cheeks open and turn up, what'd you expect?)

Jim sank to his knees before her face and she opened just like she had with Scott and took his ten inch cock all the way down. I am not a stupid person. (hehe, could've fooled me on that one!) I could tell that she had done this before. I thought then that Lisa had never taken my cock in her mouth so i nevre (Repeat after me: I ( with a captial 'I")will learn how to spell, I will learn how to spell, I will learn how to spell....) knew how talented she was. She had also never taken my cock in her anus before either so she must have done that before. My ears were assaulted by a lot of grunting and screaming then as the four of them came to an earth shattering orgasm. Jim let loose in her mouth and i (captial 'I") could see her neck work as she swallowed it all dow. (So THAT'S what happened to the Dow. It didn't crash, Lisa swallowed it! Geez, talk about indigestion, no wonder her mouth and throat are so huge!) She then looked t (is she bug eyed too? I mean she's still got his enormous cock in her mouth, yet she can look at it? Is this woman a reincarnation of the elephant man?) his cock and started to milking it for more cum. I didn't realize that she was this acomlished (a-c-c-o-m-p-l-i-s-h-e-d. Spell check is your friend, really. It won't bite if you use it regularly) at sucking a cock. Ted pulled it almost out of her ass except for the head.

Scott wrigled (wrigled? is this a combination of writhed and wiggled? Cool! Looky everyone, a new word!) out from under her and Lisa looked back at me, "Now Clarence we come to what you have longed for so many years. You get to suck my lovers cum, oh my real lover's cum from my cunt. As you have probably guessed by now, even dumb asses like would not be so blind, it's not the first time," She ('she' is not capitalized here. Take some of those unnecessary capital letters and put them where they should go, please!) said as Jim and Scott threw me to the floor and slid my face under Lisa's cunt. It was matted and covered with cum. Her pubic hair was slippery with sperm and a large dollop was just now emerging form her gaping cunt that looked like a raw red tunnel of flesh to me. Lisacontinued (I can understand why she shortened her name to just Lisa. Lisacontinued takes too long to say and type) as she mashed her cunt to my mouth and I had no choice but to swallow Scott's cum. (YAY! You remembered the apostrophe!)

Lisa looked at scott, (oh, now you've forgotten to capitalize Scott's name. Hope he drills you good for that one!) "The little fucker can eat pussy...I told you taht (t-h-a-t ) before," She looved (<==I have nothing to say about this word except, huh?) under her self at me." You don't think that i'v (captial 'I" and add an 'e') liked your pathetic little pecker and your one minute fucks do you. (<== question mark, not period) Shit I was taking Scott and several others in my ass while we were dating. I was saving my virginity for you asshole." She let me suck and then she told Ted to pull his cock out of her anus. "I never let you fuck me there but now you get to suck another man's cum from it. (<== missed the closing quote here) The releasing of her ass was like taking the enema tube from one. Te'd (<== there's the apostrophe that was missing from earlier! I knew we'd find it!) cum sqired ('s-q-u-i-r-t-e-d) form (f-r-o-m) her anus and Into (<== you capitalized 'into' but you can't capitalize what you're supposed to?) my mouth. She hadn't cleaned it quite well enough and the cum Ted shot in her acted like an enema and a little shit came out.I swallowed it all down. Ted said something like Lisa should never kiss him again. Lisa said she had no plans to.

The rest of the weekend was spent with lisa (Captial L!) fucking a lot of men. Even the desk clerk came up to get a little. Well a lot of her cunt and ass both. He had a nine inch cock which was about lisa's rolleyes lower limit. I never got to fuck my wife againor (againor? Another new word! WHEEE!) kiss her even. I found out that Lisa and her boyfriend had planned this all along. Scott and the other two friends had been living in the rental house next to them. I was paying for it. I let Lisa manage the check book. I had bought a very large house for her in a wealthier section of town. Scott and the others moved in and i (captial 'I")moved to the basement. Lisa had a prenupt (prenup [no 't']) that ghave (g-a-v-e, no the 'h' isn't silent. It doesn't even belong there!) her everything if ever I facilliated (f-a-c-i-l-i-t-a-t-e-d) in her fucking another man. In a divorce i (captial 'I")would get nothing but the clothes on my back and lisa got a lot of child support and alimony. I would be ruined. (Maybe if you capitalized her name more often she would give you some leeway? And why would she want your puny little seven inch cock when she has a nine, ten and eleven inch one? Really, it's okay, don't be jealous. They're only mythical cocks! At least, according to you they were!)

Not only thjat (t-h-a-t) but i was told that i(captial 'I" and a space)would only forclose (f-o-r-e-c-l-o-s-e) on real rich people who never paid on time but the bank looked the other way. I was told to let guy's like the one who was killed alone. Not only that but lisa (Capital L!) gave jobs to all the people I repossed (r-e-p-o-s-s-e-s-s-e-d) from plus she fucked the other men and ate thecunt's (space between 'the' and 'cunt' and no apostrophe between the 't' and 's') of the wives and made me watch and then suck the cum off their cocks and eat her out when they finished. The two children weren't mine but I could not prove optherwise (o-t-h-e-r-w-i-s-e) or I would end up with concrete shoes. Lisa had taken out several million dollar policies out on me so I knew it was just a matter of time.

The real kicker came when i (captial 'I")was not able to get on errection. (e-r-e-c-t-i-o-n and most straight men wouldn't want to get on an erection! ) Lisa had me suck Scoot's (who's Scoot? A new character so late in the story?) cock for him (so the whole 'straight guy' thing obviously doesn't apply to you. My bad.) before she fucked him. It wasn't necessary but lisa (CAPITAL L!) loved to watch me suck his cock and eat his dirty asshole. At least I got to kiss something. When lisa (DITTO!) and Scott went camping they all stayed in a big tent while I shivered on the ground. Even my...I mean Scotths (Who's Scotth? Really, you shouldn't introduce new characters so late in the story) kids spept (you know, there are doctors that can correct that kind of thing. Kids shouldn't have to go through life spepting, it's not healthy) in a tent. I had to empty out the piss buckets and drink it in front of lisa. (Again, maybe if you'd capitalized her name more, she wouldn't have made you drink piss, so it serves you right) She had started making me drink the kids piss bucket too but they never knew it. Every time i (captial 'I")am not sucking cock of licking some dirty asshole I have to ask my self why i (captial 'I")was so goddamned (<== two words) anxiuos (a-n-x-i-o-u-s) to seeLisa (<== two words, but I see you capitalized her name! Bravo!) fucked by another man. (put a space between sentences) Careful what you want.

Well there it is. I would write more but i get to tired to. Iam seventy five now so to all you wimps out there suck it./

Yeah, that explains a lot, but nothing at all. Judging by the huge amount of spelling and grammatical errors in this story, not to mention the other glaring mistakes, I can see why your other stuff was rejected.

And seriously, this story wouldn't be so bad if you find yourself a good editor. All that said, this sure does look like a wimp husband story to me. Isn't that what you've been bitching about endlessly that you hate? Yeah, thought so.

Glad I could help!