REDWAVE
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The Soul of domination
Evil Angel is the new Queen of poetry on this site, at least for now, with her poem "i Turn To You." Rather than include the entire poem here, I'll just put in the link, which is
http://literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=31814
Now that you've presumably read the poem (if you hadn't already), my first reaction is that it's fairly mediocre, with nothing truly notable about it: no startling metaphors, entrancing images, or even striking turns of phrase. Yet there are some interesting things going on here. It starts with the title, where the only word not capitalized is "i." This continues throughout the poem, where the smallness of the "i" is deliberately counterposed with the "You." Even if you're not into BDSM at all, who cannot relate to the feeling of powerlessness and helplessness EA so powerfully evokes? It's even ambiguous whether the "You" the speaker implores so cravingly is a human "Master," or a deity. (And if it's a deity, is it God-- or Satan?) EA is fond of paradox, as the name she chose for herself shows, and it is present in abundance here. In all, a very interesting production.
OK, UP-- I'm still waiting to hear what you think about "Seven of Nine."
Evil Angel is the new Queen of poetry on this site, at least for now, with her poem "i Turn To You." Rather than include the entire poem here, I'll just put in the link, which is
http://literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=31814
Now that you've presumably read the poem (if you hadn't already), my first reaction is that it's fairly mediocre, with nothing truly notable about it: no startling metaphors, entrancing images, or even striking turns of phrase. Yet there are some interesting things going on here. It starts with the title, where the only word not capitalized is "i." This continues throughout the poem, where the smallness of the "i" is deliberately counterposed with the "You." Even if you're not into BDSM at all, who cannot relate to the feeling of powerlessness and helplessness EA so powerfully evokes? It's even ambiguous whether the "You" the speaker implores so cravingly is a human "Master," or a deity. (And if it's a deity, is it God-- or Satan?) EA is fond of paradox, as the name she chose for herself shows, and it is present in abundance here. In all, a very interesting production.
OK, UP-- I'm still waiting to hear what you think about "Seven of Nine."