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new poems for 12-28

Only 3 new ones today.

NEED!
by subaloha ©
Erotic need can be considered a basis
for destruction of self harmony.
This harmony is replaced with a driving need
of eroticism for which consumes.

For she
by smithpeter ©
The sound of leather
Scrunching as she
Brings her
Knee up stretching
The thin cow skin
Along her thigh
And back across her
Ass to the last,

Erotic Journey For Two
by curvyangl ©
The misty scent of roses consumes the air. The mirrors steamy. The clear curtain drawn. Water dancing against my skin. Breathing in the sweet floral aroma, my mind begins to drift.

Read, vote, send feedback, post your opinions here!
 
Thumb up to WE

Thank you, WickedEve for drawing attention to the recent postings.
I note that two are first posting members. Bravo, am hoping to read more from both soon.
And again, thank you for…

Taking back the night from condiments,
Until the next dribble drop,
On bottom, on top.
 
I'm desperate! I want U.P. back! I miss reading about the new poems and the number one poems. I've had new poems out recently, and I've had some number ones. But no U.P. critique! I need my U.P. fix! lol

By the way, smithpeter, great poem. I can't critique like U.P. but I can tell you that I found the scenario, it inspired me to imagine, to be a real turn on. I'm in to what you wrote about. Please, write more.
 
New Poems for 12-29 and 12-30 that caught my attention:

12-29

29-12-41Blitz
by Scabbers ©
Erotic Poetry

And I with helmet waiting,
And waiting with helmet I stand,
Cigarette smoking, exhaling.

Wistful
by JUDO ©
Non-Erotic Poetry

At images, memories
Gaunt and dim
The walking dead
Of time within.

Actions, words
A line to recall
Notes not written
Never written at all.


12-30

Spilling Honey
by Bronte ©
Erotic Poetry

Let me slick
between you
in friction
as buttered rum

Poet Gets Lucky
by smithpeter ©
Erotic Poetry

All in black, her hand on her companions lap,
Whose silver smooth short satin dress,
Shining by the light,
From black wax candles through the glass table top.

The pair enjoyed my 20 minutes of erotic words.
Silver Girl clapped and smiled,
Brutal in Black only smiled,


Please read and vote!
 
Cinnabar Rouge, like kissing a mirror, your poems leave marks

Cheeks livid,
thoughts vivid,
body inclined,
lips decline.
This is a tasty piece, like a segment of blood orange, dripping. I can feel it dribble off my chin.
 
smithpeter

This is a tasty piece, like a segment of blood orange, dripping. I can feel it dribble off my chin.
Click to expand...
I like the way you put that. ;)
 
Last new poems of 2001

HI everyone! Here's a few poems I'd hate for you to miss! I hope you enjoy them as much I do.

12-31-01

On The Block
by Hecate ©
Erotic Poetry

I am on display,
a piece of meat
but I can't help it,
feel building the heat

I think this is a sexy poem. Of course, I'm into BDSM -- maybe that's why.
This woman being sold doesn't come across as a victim. She is a woman that delights in being a sex object, and she wants to be sold to a Master. Different strokes for different folks. ;)

On a scale of hot or not, this one got 4 ssssizzles out of 5!

Aging Gracefully
by WickedEve ©
Non-Erotic Poetry

Jack it up with girly girdle.
Jiggles jubilantly with each hurdle
an aging ass makes me jump.

I like this because it's freaky! Wicked Eve writes some interesting, weird stuff. Makes you wonder what she's smokin'.
It's fun, it rhymes... it's about getting old and still being able to laugh about it.

I give it 3 1/2 Ha Ha's out 5! ha ha ha h-

Grasping question
by Art-of-sin ©
Non-Erotic Poetry

I don't want to give anything away. Just read it!

4 witty ha ha's out 5!


Realizations
by Faceless_Hero ©
Erotic Poetry

Have I been lost, only to fall into the proverbial laps,
and grasps of beautiful strangers?

I read this and the first word that popped into my mind was Haunting.

4 OH's out of 5.

Happenstance
by pita ©
Non-Erotic Poetry

There is a place between heaven and hell
An endless time that I know well
A void so vast, with no future, no past
And in this place I dwell

I think this is a very nice poem. I enjoyed reading it.

4 :)'s out of 5!

Lots of good new poems out in the last few days. These are just some that I really liked. I hope you'll read, and vote, and send feedback!
 
now, now W. E.

don't stay up too late, get ready for a new day and year.
Peace and Happy naught two
sp
 
New Year's poem brings back a memory.......

Soccerstud.....a young poetic voice.......brings in 2002
with a new poem.....the words alone remind me of a piece of
writing that I completed when I was around his age.
I think that for a poem, it is simple and beautiful. Nothing
complicated here.

"Longing....Waiting"
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=33656
 
First new poems of 2002

The poems I'm mentioning today are the ones that offer a little something more appetizing than the usual poetic fare. Not to say that the other poems are bland, but I want a little spice or a different dish on occasion.

The comments and ratings that I give reflect my personal preferences. If you think the ratings or comments are absurd or on the mark, then post and let me know! Please! I'm giving my opinion--give yours!

01-01-02

Twenty One Inches
by smithpeter ©
Erotica Poetry

Twenty one perfect inches,
Between ankles,
Bare feet spread apart
On hotel carpet, heels lifted

When I first saw the title, I became very excited. What can I say--I think big. :)
I really thought this poem was interesting. I liked it, but I must admit that I've enjoyed some of smithpeter's other poems better. If you're into bondage, you may want to give this poem a read!

rating: 3 3/4 knots out of 5

The Rose And The Thorn
by vorion_hunter ©
Non-Erotica

The love god forbids man to see,
Some men that may be?
A budding rose or growing thorn,
Both on the same plant born.

This is a pretty poem. If not for the first stanza, I wouldn't haven't given it a second thought. Those first words appeal to me.

rating: 3 1/2 petals out of 5

I love thee not
by amenable fate ©
Non-Erotic Poetry

I love thee in a demonic rage
of scattered thoughts, with unforgiving anger.

This is a nice poem. It's another poem where a few words really caught my attention.

rating: 3 1/2 love-me-nots out of 5

Whales
by paganangel ©
Non-Erotic Poetry

Humans are so fascinated with them
I am not
They breech
And dive
They rise
And dive
They need not


Well, this poems not bad. I wonder if paganangel went whale watching before she wrote this?

rating: 3 1/2 blowholes out of 5


There are more really good poems, but I think the ones above are the most interesting. There are so many poems on Literotica that some are starting to sound alike. That's why I liked the group above--they are different!

Read, vote, give feedback! Please.
 
New Poems 01-02-02

Well, I started out by reading cymbidia by KillerMuffin. I'm still sniffing. My eyes watered up. cymbidia is about friendship--and more. This poem doesn't ask for votes, so I won't rate it. I will tell you this--read it! It's full of honest emotions.

After that I read Love by tiger_n_NJ. This poem is dedicated to LoveToRead. More honest emotions.

So, if you want to read about how these two poets feel about love and friendship, you may want to give these poems a try. :)


Peggy, Aretha, & Celine
by tigerjen ©
Non-Erotic Poetry

**this is a tribute to Peggy Lee, Aretha Franklin,
and Celine Dion....the words in quotes are songs
performed by them**

I. Peggy

So "why don't you do
right" and make like
"little Joe" and
see ya "manana!"

III. Celine

I feel as if I'm
"falling into you"
just as cream falls
into hot coffee

This poetry reader was looking for different and this is different! It's tigerjen teams up with the Peggy, Aretha, and Celine! You have to give the 3 well-known ladies half the credit for this poem. (I hope there's not any kind of a bad copyright thingy going on here.) :eek:

When I read this poem, I thought LEGOS! My kids have them all over the house. The parts are there for you, and all you have to do is put them together to make something interesting. This is kind of what tigerjen did. She used her own words to connect the titles of these popular songs together to make a poem. Well now, isn't that something! Never would have thought of doing that.

rating: 3 1/2 choruses out of 5 songs!

Girl In A Red Canoe, Epilogue
by smithpeter ©
Non-Erotic Poetry

The Rain
~
The sound of one tent flap,
Summer rains having washed,

The Boat and the Girl
~
Canoe wielder, graceful feather paddling,
A one week ago stranger, then hand holder,
Now companions nearing the shore with toes
And finger tips dragging in the river,

I really enjoyed this one very much! No. I loved it! This is an excellent poem. I saw it, felt it; I was there.

rating: all 5 red canoes out of 5!
 
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Wistful

WE-

Thanks for mentioning those few lines from my new poem "Wistful" in this thread. It's a first sketch that will hopefully lead me to write something longer (believe it or not).

I like the long poem that takes the reader through a story or event (just as much as I like the short, but I don't see much of the long here). I am a fan of Browning and Longfellow, so there you are.

Anyway, something I'm attempting-a little old mountain to climb.

;)
- Judo
 
hold my interest

Judo--

I read your poem. Check your mail. :)

I enjoy lengthier works. However, they must command my interest. If a poem is long simply because the author fails to be succinct, I'm not hanging out.

In a work that is long, I am more critical of the value each stanza provides. If a stanza isn't enhancing the read, providing a pivotal point or transition, it translate as verbage in my mind.

In your read, the lengthy is largely due to your line breaks and line lengths. If you lengthened the lines which I think would improve the read, the poem wouldn't be as long.

Some of the images beautifully convey the somber tone. Others are recyled illustrations. I enjoy a range of themes and emotions in poetry. Yours was neither about love or lust, and that provided a welcomed change. There are struggles in life, and I applaud you for examining them in your poem.

I have book on Leonard Cohen's Dance Me To The End Of Love it's set against the backdrop of Matisse's works. Beautiful verse. Simple, long, lovely refrain. I'll also admit that despite how he skirts with cliches, I love this poem. Like gary and drake have said, I enjoy how the words roll off my tongue. The sounds of the poem are appealing. The poem makes you want to read it again and again. And, I do have favorite lines that I want to commit to memory.

Thanks for the read.

Peace,

daughter
 
canoes

W.E., what can i say? you should have been there.
actually, there is one more chapter of the 3 part short story to appear. it was posted before the epilogue.
i hope you enjoy that as well.
Peace and best wishes, one and all.
sp
 
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*cringing*

I fixed that WE. I had it turned off because when I originally submitted it, I'd stuck in the wrong poem which is about the worst piece of cliched, junior high school tripe that ever graced this site. I put in the Edit and shut off the voting until the real poem was put up, but not soon enough for someone to read it and vote in fully correct and flagrant disgust.
 
Erogenous Zone

Alone Again

I just read this poem again. It is a good poem. I'm glad you mentioned it. I've been trying to bring attention to a few poems each day. It's hard to give attention to all of them. On the 1st there were 26 new poems. I read them all, but didn't have time, of course, to say something about each of them. I regretted that because there were more poems that I would have liked to have called attention to.
I hope you'll post more about your favorite poems.

Eve
 
Poem from 12/30

Spilling Honey -
Submitted by Bronte (Erotic Poetry) 12/30/01

I like the provocative start and it gets even better:

Don for me your open mindedness
Share me with him
as I would love
to slide
between you
……

spilling honey secrets
wildly from my innermost
deepest reserve
where there will be plenty
to go around
 
E Zone and smithpeter, I like this one, too. Near the top of the page I mentioned this poem.
Here's the stanza that I really liked:
Let me slick
between you
in friction
as buttered rum

Good job, Bronte!
 
Legos?

Hi W.E.!

here's what you wrote:
<<This poetry reader was looking for different and
this is different! It's tigerjen teams up with the Peggy,
Aretha, and Celine! You have to give the 3 well-known
ladies half the credit for this poem. (I hope there's not
any kind of a bad copyright thingy going on here.)
When I read this poem, I thought LEGGOS! My kids
have them all over the house. The parts are there for
you, and all you have to do is put them together to
make something interesting. This is kind of what
tigerjen did. She used her own words to connect
the titles of these popular songs together to make
a poem. Well now, isn't that something! Never would
have thought of doing that. >>

Legos.....that's what daughter mentioned to me in an
email...in re: this poem. Very unique analogy in regards
to my poem. I played around with the diff. song titles,
and tah dah! There it was...something different......
In terms of copyright, I put the titles in quotes to CMA......
(CMA=Cover My Ass) to play it safe, though daughter
suggested I use italics to make the titles "less intrusive"
(I was thinking about that but couldn't change the font
because I was typing the poem directly onto the poem
submission form). Makes sense though.

I thank you for reading my poem! :)

tigerjen
 
01-03-02

The Rape
by guilty pleasure ©
Erotic Poetry

Rough hands pull up and out.
Strong legs force thighs wide.
Against
All will.
Hard mouth to stifle hope

Not an easy topic to write about. You read about violence in the papers, see it on the news. Usually, you're just given general details that keep the ugliness at a distance. But this is a poem. A poem has the potential to be very personal. A poem about rape can make you feel violated. It should be more personal than what you read in the news.

This poem doesn't completely succeed, but this stanza puts us there with the victim:

Nerves twang,
And strain for some familiar voice
Who holds me here,
Smells this way?

The rest of the poem describes the act of brutality. I would have liked to have been told more about how the woman felt and what was going through her mind. Even in a state of panic, her thoughts must have been racing wildly. Was she thinking that she was going to die? Was she thinking of how to escape? For a moment, did she think about the back door she sometimes forgets to lock?

Once again, just this reader's opinion.

Healing Power
by smithpeter ©
Erotic Poetry

Before my flu goes away
She brings me soup and licorice
To warm my tummy and push
Things into my mouth

Ahh. smithpeter takes something so simple, a little slice of everyday life, and turns it into a poem--and does a great job at it.

A Mother's Dilemma
by Littlemissblair ©
Erotic Poetry

I've allowed her have her way with me
she signs my paycheck
and I must be able
to put on the table
food for my daughter.

I've read several of Littlemissblair's poems. The ones I've read, I have not enjoyed the content. But I must confess that Littlemissblair has a way of telling a story. And in this poem, she does it well--all the way to the disturbing ending.

Behind My Eyes
by g_kcat ©
Non-Erotic Poetry

Sometimes I despise the darkness within me,
Other times I embrace it and set it free,
Ugly images from the bleakest part of my brain,
Fill me ideas of suicide and pain,

Behind My Eyes is filled with pain, suicide, surrealistic fantasies, knife and blood, car wrapped around a tree, and feeling like you're going insane! Why? "My mood grows more dismal with each passing day, With every second that he is away," Maybe it's over a man? Hmm... Read it and see what you think.

There are more poems for 01-03. Read them, vote on them, send feedback, and post your opinions.
 
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