To keep the review thread clean...

[Tathagata]

Do you have what it takes to deal with a 3rd leg?

I'm usually the one asking that...

 

[WickedEve]

I'm usually the one asking that...

I'm typing with my tongue. This is really bad. It's not just the legs. My boobs are on my back and my arms are wrapped around my neck. I tripped on a leggo.

 

[Tathagata]

I'm typing with my tongue. This is really bad. It's not just the legs. My boobs are on my back and my arms are wrapped around my neck. I tripped on a leggo.

hmmmmmmmmm..


help Eve feel better
sell her to a sideshow and retire
help eve feel better
sell her to a sideshow and retire

 

[WickedEve]

hmmmmmmmmm..


help Eve feel better
sell her to a sideshow and retire
help eve feel better
sell her to a sideshow and retire

I like the alliteration and repetition, but the rhyme is a bit forced, and you didn't capitalize the second Eve. One less line and this could be a haiku. Not bad minimalist poetry but I think it needs more.
I give it a 3. But that could change if you revise it. Either way, trying submitting it to the Monthly Monkey.

 

[Tathagata]

I like the alliteration and repetition, but the rhyme is a bit forced, and you didn't capitalize the second Eve. One less line and this could be a haiku. Not bad minimalist poetry but I think it needs more.
I give it a 3. But that could change if you revise it. Either way, trying submitting it to the Monthly Monkey.

sell Eve to a sideshow and retire

 

[WickedEve]

sell Eve to a sideshow and retire

again?

Okay, Ange. I found the hot lit women thread. A chick mentioned me. By the way, thanks M.O.

 

[Angeline]

again?

Okay, Ange. I found the hot lit women thread. A chick mentioned me. By the way, thanks M.O.

Sorry, I thought it was The Mutt. I confuse them sometimes because they lurve each other.

 

[WickedEve]

Sorry, I thought it was The Mutt. I confuse them sometimes because they lurve each other.

A woman thinks I'm hot and you blessed my heart and I have 3 legs. I need tea in my giant kitty cup. Yes, that makes me happy.

 

[The_Fool]

sell Eve to a sideshow and retire

Are you pimping her out???

 

[Angeline]

A woman thinks I'm hot and you blessed my heart and I have 3 legs. I need tea in my giant kitty cup. Yes, that makes me happy.

oh. you saw that heart blessing, huh?

the only other person i know who says "bless her heart" is karmadog. he thinks you're hot, too.

 

[Angeline]

Are you pimping her out???

lol.

are you trying to get her to kill him?

hey guess what? i found a sestina i wrote that i forgot all about.

 

[The_Fool]

lol.

are you trying to get her to kill him?

hey guess what? i found a sestina i wrote that i forgot all about.

There's that "S" word again....

I did one on Marias boobs and never got a rise out of anyone....

 

[WickedEve]

oh. you saw that heart blessing, huh?

the only other person i know who says "bless her heart" is karmadog. he thinks you're hot, too.

Did he bless my heart, too?!

 

[WickedEve]

sell Eve to a sideshow and retire

Oh, wait. I'm having a thought. Side show. My pic is sideways. Right? Or you want to sell me to a sideshow because I have boobs on my back? Actually, I have a photo of my boobs pasted on someone's back... but that's another story...

 

[The_Fool]

Oh, wait. I'm having a thought. Side show. My pic is sideways. Right? Or you want to sell me to a sideshow because I have boobs on my back? Actually, I have a photo of my boobs pasted on someone's back... but that's another story...

Rather have my lips pasted to your boobs, but that would be kind of a long stretch even for my pucker....

 

[tolyk]

How's everyone tonight?

 

[WickedEve]

Rather have my lips pasted to your boobs, but that would be kind of a long stretch even for my pucker....

Someone's at the door. Is that your lips?

 

[Angeline]

Did he bless my heart, too?!

Not specifically that I recall, but I'm sure he does.

 

[Angeline]

How's everyone tonight?

I'm fine. How are you?

 

[Angeline]

There's that "S" word again....

I did one on Marias boobs and never got a rise out of anyone....

where's the link baby?

 

[WickedEve]

Not specifically that I recall, but I'm sure he does.

Hey, where's that crazy thread with the purple shag? I think Boo started it. I just realized that we're all gabbing on the review/clean thread.

 

[Angeline]

Hey, where's that crazy thread with the purple shag? I think Boo started it. I just realized that we're all gabbing on the review/clean thread.

I don't remember. I thought *this* was the one we're allowed to gab on...

 

[tolyk]

I'm fine. How are you?

I'm great thanks Bit tired, but that's nothing new for me.

 

[The_Fool]

where's the link baby?

Complex Curves

 

[The_Fool]

Someone's at the door. Is that your lips?

Knock, Knock, Knockin' on Heavens dooooor...