To keep the review thread clean...

[Angeline]

I see myself playing a crescent role

wise ass.

 

[Tathagata]

wise ass.

I was going to say Parkerhouse but no one would get it

 

[Tathagata]

I'd like to mention Drinking with Magi by Tathagata, which was also posted on the 3rd.

even though it appears to have been written without being edited??


Thanks Eve

 

[Angeline]

I was going to say Parkerhouse but no one would get it

I was going to make a joke about poppin fresh but it was too crass...

 

[Tathagata]

I was going to make a joke about poppin fresh but it was too crass...

theres no such thing as too crass at Lit...only too vague

 

[Angeline]

theres no such thing as too crass at Lit...only too vague

Well in that case...

Dear Dough-boy:

Why you so happy
in that little chef hat?
Marchin around like
King Spoon of Cup kitchen.

You smug little brat.
You flour-paste thing
come wigglin alive to giggle
some lyin' Mad Avenue jive
in my face!

Better get on outta my place,
evil toddler, and don't dare
ask me how to bake a square cake
in a round pan.

I got your pan right here.
Bend over.

Mr. Spatula thinks
you need a new career.

Enough happy laughs
and insincere words.
Gonna bake you to biscuits,
feed you poppin fresh
to the birds.

 

[*Catbabe*]

Well in that case...

Dear Dough-boy:

Why you so happy
in that little chef hat?
Marchin around like
King Spoon of Cup kitchen.

You smug little brat.
You flour-paste thing
come wigglin alive to giggle
some lyin' Mad Avenue jive
in my face!

Better get on outta my place,
evil toddler, and don't dare
ask me how to bake a square cake
in a round pan.

I got your pan right here.
Bend over.

Mr. Spatula thinks
you need a new career.

Enough happy laughs
and insincere words.
Gonna bake you to biscuits,
feed you poppin fresh
to the birds.

He doesn't like getting called dough-boy anyone more, Ange.

He makes everyone call him P- Doughie now.

 

[Angeline]

He doesn't like getting called dough-boy anyone more, Ange.

He makes everyone call him P- Doughie now.

lol.

Remember when we wrote those poems about stuff we hate? About a year ago? I hate the Pillsbury Doughboy. Um P-doughy.

I think it was a challenge of Champagne's...right champers?

 

[Lauren Hynde]

Re: Roll Call~ Poetry Forum

**Please don't post off topic

Ahem!

......... unless you absolutely cannot help yourself

Oh.

 

[Angeline]

Re: Re: Roll Call~ Poetry Forum

Ahem!

Oh.

sorry.

 

[WickedEve]

even though it appears to have been written without being edited??


Thanks Eve

Dear Literotica Poster,

Your post will soon be removed to some random amateur pic thread. Your phone number will be attached for the convenience of any monkey lover.
During the process, please stand back and tuck in any danglies. Moving your post will require several excruciating minutes of effort, and your name will be added to The List.

 

[The_Fool]

Re: Re: Roll Call~ Poetry Forum

**If you don't post your own bio within 2 weeks, I will make one up for you without hesitation.
Now I'm sorely tempted to erase this post just to see what you'd come up with for me.

I missed that part....Think it is too late to erase my post?

 

[robynwildchild]

I HAVE MORE MONEY THAN

SOMEONE .. HAAHAHAAAA...

Just kidding.. i'll live down to .86 cents in about a day or two...

 

[The_Fool]

IMy role? To single-handedly keep the sonnet alive. Rhyme is not a dirty word!

This is gonna make Angeline swoon.....



Just wait till she gets you writing villanelles....

 

[The Mutt]

Just wait till she gets you writing villanelles....

Is that like a young, female bad guy?

 

[twelveoone]

I'd like to mention Drinking with Magi by Tathagata, which was also posted on the 3rd.
Monday is currently not being covered and I'd hate to see good poems on that day not get the recognition they deserve. Would anyone like to volunteer to cover Monday's reviews? 1201?

cannot do, very lttle time then

 

[Tathagata]

Dear Literotica Poster,

Your post will soon be removed to some random amateur pic thread. Your phone number will be attached for the convenience of any monkey lover.
During the process, please stand back and tuck in any danglies. Moving your post will require several excruciating minutes of effort, and your name will be added to The List.

I aint skeered a no girl what wears a red bra

 

[The Poets]

cannot do, very lttle time then

Thanks anyway.

eve

 

[Angeline]

cannot do, very lttle time then

1201 dear,

I responded to your question about my poem in the public comments.

 

[HomerPindar]

Originally posted by The Mutt
IMy role? To single-handedly keep the sonnet alive. Rhyme is not a dirty word!
------------------------------------------------------------------------

The sonnett is not defined by a rhyme scheme, only the more well known sonnett styles are in part defined by their rhyme scheme.

In the post modern era of non-forms, the only lasting rule to sonnetts is that it be fourteen lines long.

(now I only have $.84 cents left)

 

[Liar]

Originally posted by The Mutt
The sonnett is not defined by a rhyme scheme, only the more well known sonnett styles are in part defined by their rhyme scheme.

In the post modern era of non-forms, the only lasting rule to sonnetts is that it be fourteen lines long.

So hey,
in a way,
when all is said and done
this too
could be one,
bounced between brain cells,
stuck in my mnemo
like a post-it note memo,
read, realized, repeated,
typed and tap-tap-tap trapped
in bytes and packets,
sent through a wire
for you to admire;
my sonnett, sire.

?

#L

 

[Guest]

Re: 3 4 1 5 5

Well, if nobody else will step forward I will point a few out to you.

You might want to start at the top with 9:30 club by Annaswirls.
You won't know where this one is going until the end!

*********

My second pick is
Persephone, Please. by Angeline.
The poem makes reference to King Lear and is well written as Angeline always does, but it may feel more at home somewhere else than on a porn site. Go read it before it gets lonesome and wanders off.

*********

Thirdly, I recommend
Liar's sleep, damn you.
There is enough word fun here to keep you awake at night. Go see for yourself.

Thanks, Reltne. I live in PST and work wee AM hours, which allows me not to do reviews until later... such as now. You recommended what I would've highlighted myself.


- neo

 

[Angeline]

Well, if nobody else will step forward I will point a few out to you.

You might want to start at the top with 9:30 club by Annaswirls.
You won't know where this one is going until the end!

*********

My second pick is
Persephone, Please. by Angeline.
The poem makes reference to King Lear and is well written as Angeline always does, but it may feel more at home somewhere else than on a porn site. Go read it before it gets lonesome and wanders off.

*********

Thirdly, I recommend
Liar's sleep, damn you.
There is enough word fun here to keep you awake at night. Go see for yourself.

What?!? King Lear isn't porn???!!! Damnit! I'm taking that poem somewhere where they appreciate good not porn...

well eventually.

Thank you Reltne and Neo for the mentions, as well as those who commented on Persephone, Please.


Ange

Next time I'm referencing Romeo and Juliet--now there's a hotsy-totsy play!

 

[Maria2394]

Eve, thanks for the mentions yesterday of, Dark Shine, and separation of church and hate. I was worried I might get tons of haye mail for that one and didnt even see your reviews till just today. Thanks again

maria
oh, p, eve and flyguy, thanks for the suggestions/advice on dark shine, I submitted that version as an edit but it seems to take forever for those to be applied

 

[The Mutt]

Originally posted by The Mutt
IMy role? To single-handedly keep the sonnet alive. Rhyme is not a dirty word!
------------------------------------------------------------------------

The sonnett is not defined by a rhyme scheme, only the more well known sonnett styles are in part defined by their rhyme scheme.

In the post modern era of non-forms, the only lasting rule to sonnetts is that it be fourteen lines long.

(now I only have $.84 cents left)

Sorry, I guess I meant the Elizabethan sonnet. Or whatever it was that Shakespeare wrote. Forgive me, I majored in Bong in college.