"To keep the review thread clean..."

[cloudy]

You're absolutely right. My comment primarily addressed the response of other readers and not your poem. I apologize.

Apology accepted. Thank you.

 

[flyguy69]

Apology accepted. Thank you.

I never tease a girl that owns a dog like that one!

 

[cloudy]

I never tease a girl that owns a dog like that one!

don't let his appearance fool you. He's quite tame.

 

[WickedEve]

Eve, there are some gems sprinkled among his "brittle sand". It does need work, but actually, I thought the first part wasnt all bad, then it begand to sound like a story, sort of. BUt did a good job expressing...thans for posting this link, I dont read all the new poems anymore, just dont have time.

Thanks for giving me your opinion. I was wondering what others thought. It's interesting, at least parts of it. I didn't even comment on it, because I wasn't sure what to say. I'll try to correct that later today.

 

[annaswirls]

Apology accepted. Thank you.

damn you were too easy on him. I wanted to see him over your knee....he deserves a good spanking!

 

[flyguy69]

don't let his appearance fool you. He's quite tame.

Yeah? Then what happened to all of your clothes?

 

[cloudy]

damn you were too easy on him. I wanted to see him over your knee....he deserves a good spanking!

I prefer to be the spankee rather than the spanker.

 

[flyguy69]

damn you were too easy on him. I wanted to see him over your knee....he deserves a good spanking!

I only get those when I have been good.

 

[annaswirls]

I prefer to be the spankee rather than the spanker.

come on, just one for the team

 

[cloudy]

Yeah? Then what happened to all of your clothes?

what are these "clothes" of which you speak?

I'm a barbarian, don'tcha know.

 

[flyguy69]

what are these "clothes" of which you speak?

I'm a barbarian, don'tcha know.

Nice to meet you, Barb.

 

[annaswirls]

I only get those when I have been good.

hmmm you men are so difficult


:trying to think of the appropriate punishment:



I got it! Let her pick out your av... something flabby and pale

 

[flyguy69]

hmmm you men are so difficult


:trying to think of the appropriate punishment:



I got it! Let her pick out your av... something flabby and pale

Ah, something post-coital.

 

[cloudy]

Ah, something post-coital.

 

[annaswirls]

Ah, something post-coital.

hmmm I was thinking more along the lines of Andy Sipowitz's ass cheeks

 

[flyguy69]

Thanks for giving me your opinion. I was wondering what others thought. It's interesting, at least parts of it. I didn't even comment on it, because I wasn't sure what to say. I'll try to correct that later today.

Hey! No chatting on this thread! And why isn't there a boob in your av, Maria?

 

[flyguy69]

hmmm I was thinking more along the lines of Andy Sipowitz's ass cheeks

Sorry, but I am not fucking Andy Spiowitz. Not even for a spanking from Barb.

 

[annaswirls]

Sorry, but I am not fucking Andy Spiowitz. Not even for a spanking from Barb.

no no no fucking involved,
it is more Zen than that:

you just have to accept his ass as your own,
on your av, see how your ego holds up

you might be surprised at all the hot chicks who dig flabby pasty assed men

eh hem

 

[flyguy69]

no no no fucking involved,
it is more Zen than that:

you just have to accept his ass as your own,
on your av, see how your ego holds up

you might be surprised at all the hot chicks who dig flabby pasty assed men

eh hem

I ordered a flock from Heiffer International for you.

 

[WickedEve]

Hey! No chatting on this thread! And why isn't there a boob in your av, Maria?

We are discussing/mentioning a new poem. You, on the other hand, are not. So, shut up.

 

[annaswirls]

I ordered a flock from Heiffer International for you.

you are so sweet! How did you know I wanted a flock of hot chicks? Have you been reading my diary again?

 

[annaswirls]

We are discussing/mentioning a new poem. You, on the other hand, are not. So, shut up.

oh my god, why is it SO thrilling to watch such a hunk of a man getting spanked. I feel like I should be paying someone for this.



oh and to keep with the discussion, I read the poem and left a comment. I thought it was interesting, and agree with Maria-- it would be a great short short story. Flash baby flash.

 

[flyguy69]

We are discussing/mentioning a new poem. You, on the other hand, are not. So, shut up.

I guess I'd better write one called Maria's Boobs pretty damn quick.

 

[Maria2394]

oh my god, why is it SO thrilling to watch such a hunk of a man getting spanked. I feel like I should be paying someone for this.



oh and to keep with the discussion, I read the poem and left a comment. I thought it was interesting, and agree with Maria-- it would be a great short short story. Flash baby flash.

OMG!! one little slice of a leg pic and yall wanna see my boobie? Whoever has to clean up this thread is gonna be so mad at me, okay, I will post one, but it will stay only for tomight then the 43 year old boobie turns into a pumpkin...


ps, thanks for asking, that makes me feel so loved

 

[annaswirls]

OMG!! one little slice of a leg pic and yall wanna see my boobie? Whoever has to clean up this thread is gonna be so mad at me, okay, I will post one, but it will stay only for tomight then the 43 year old boobie turns into a pumpkin...


ps, thanks for asking, that makes me feel so loved

oh my god, now we will have to start up a real thread for Maria's boobies, I am inspired! god you are a gorgeous woman! I never had a doubt, but it is sure nice to see! I am a visual girl y'know.