"To keep the review thread clean..."

[annaswirls]

okay splinters then

i have hardwood ....

... floors, i mean.

does it grow when you are untruthful?

 

[TheRainMan]

does it grow when you are untruthful?

it sure grows when you are.

and, yes, about Hiss.

we're makin' a habit out of that.

 

[annaswirls]

it sure grows when you are.

and, yes, about Hiss.

we're makin' a habit out of that.

I thought you liked the hard truth or were you just kiddin'
I am so bad at lying, I would be your anti-viagra

Hiss NC-17 you naughty boy

 

[annaswirls]

hmmm guess it depends on whose truth.
It is too late to be philosophical

and sorry for the hijack SennaJ. The absurdity of the counting system blew a circuit in my sensibilities

 

[TheRainMan]

I thought you liked the hard truth or were you just kiddin'
I am so bad at lying, I would be your anti-viagra

Hiss NC-17 you naughty boy

2 poems in ... you too, right?

the NC-17 at Niederngasse, too.



hey, are we hijacking this thread.

rattle off some statistics, will ya.

 

[annaswirls]

2 poems in ... you too, right?

the NC-17 at Niederngasse, too.



hey, are we hijacking this thread.

rattle off some statistics, will ya.

yes 2 in Hiss and
just 1 in Niederngasse you brat, I did not know you were submitting.
Good boy.

the chances of a thread being hijacked when the mods are asleep
1:5

the chances of a thread being hijacked when the mods are awake
1:2

now then, back to the innuendo
numbers make me want to sleep

 

[TheRainMan]

yes 2 in Hiss and
just 1 in Niederngasse you brat, I did not know you were submitting.
Good boy.

the chances of a thread being hijacked when the mods are asleep
1:5

the chances of a thread being hijacked when the mods are awake
1:2

now then, back to the innuendo
numbers make me want to sleep

also 1 in Niedergnasse.

so, its 1:1 in Hiss.

and 1:1 in Nied.

rising stars, baby.

 

[annaswirls]

did I tell you I fell in love tonight, right here at lit from the amateur pics... who knew? oh my god look at her

 

[annaswirls]

also 1 in Niedergnasse.

so, its 1:1 in Hiss.

and 1:1 in Nied.

rising stars, baby.

sleepy stars, baby

 

[TheRainMan]

did I tell you I fell in love tonight, right here at lit from the amateur pics... who knew? oh my god look at her

you're going to share with your poetry editor, aren't you.

 

[TheRainMan]

sleepy stars, baby

night night.

 

[annaswirls]

you're going to share with your poetry editor, aren't you.

of course, you deserve some perks
I really do have carpal tunnel from looking at her entire thread in one sitting

 

[annaswirls]

here is one to dream on, I think you are going to have to go get her for us, I am too shy.

 

[annaswirls]

night night.

oop I missed this one lol! I am delerious, good night, and mods please move this inappropriate chitter chatter to the GB or something

 

[bogusbrig]

oop I missed this one lol! I am delerious, good night, and mods please move this inappropriate chitter chatter to the GB or something

Well I thought another stupid thread about lists and statistics and me with my top poem only having achieved 500 reads in six months, this becomes all meaningless blah blah.

But what heaven anna! Where did you find such lovelies? I felt the years fall away and suddenly I was in my early twenties again with all the romantic allusion that leads you to wasting your life.

Delete the chit chat but start up a thread for the two delightful angels.

 

[Guest]

here is one to dream on, I think you are going to have to go get her for us, I am too shy.

Damn! *eyes pop-out*

I can sleep without them so they can stay and oogle her for me.

 

[annaswirls]

Well I thought another stupid thread about lists and statistics and me with my top poem only having achieved 500 reads in six months, this becomes all meaningless blah blah.

But what heaven anna! Where did you find such lovelies? I felt the years fall away and suddenly I was in my early twenties again with all the romantic allusion that leads you to wasting your life.

Delete the chit chat but start up a thread for the two delightful angels.

Isn't she absolutely beautiful? I tried to post a link, but it did not work. They are both the same girl. I will start a thread under the guise of writing poetry about her. My goddess.

You have not wasted your life. Just hang out with me and gaze lovingly into her eyes....purrrrr

 

[annaswirls]

Damn! *eyes pop-out*

I can sleep without them so they can stay and oogle her for me.

What a great idea! I think I will set her as my desktop picture

 

[FuckDoll]

New Poems Reviews
Saturday 7, 2006


liquid assets by FuckDoll this tickled my chucklebone, although in reality they are right...TAXED energies.

Thank you for the mention.

 

[vampiredust]

Thanks to everyone whose read my latest poems 'Lifer' and 'Naked Eulogy' and for all your helpful comments.

 

[flyguy69]

I'm curious about the paucity of poetry on Fridays. Do folks not submit poems on Thursdays, and hence there are no poems to post? Or is it an artifact of the Literotica staff work schedule? Do they, like me, play volleyball and then go out drinking on Thursday nights and find themselves dangerously unfit to handle an eletrical device like a computer?

I'm not complaining, mind you, but it would be nice to see some of your cheery smiles on a Friday now and again.



*being careful what I wish for!*

 

[Guest]

I'm curious about the paucity of poetry on Fridays. Do folks not submit poems on Thursdays, and hence there are no poems to post? Or is it an artifact of the Literotica staff work schedule? Do they, like me, play volleyball and then go out drinking on Thursday nights and find themselves dangerously unfit to handle an eletrical device like a computer?

I'm not complaining, mind you, but it would be nice to see some of your cheery smiles on a Friday now and again.



*being careful what I wish for!*

Maybe wear a shirt more often, the chest is distracting us,

 

[flyguy69]

Maybe wear a shirt more often, the chest is distracting us,

So much so that you forgot to put pants on.

 

[flyguy69]

I disagree with flyboy. There are some that should get an honorable mention at the very least.

beyond a whisper falls into the sitcom cathegory. While I think it needs tightening it has promise.

Next one is beastie boy the product is very scatchy and raw, but again there is promise. I especially like the grittyness of it all. Hard stuff!

And a different day's light good stuff. But I have to admit that it smells a little of "ubercraft" such as for instance the last line. It's almost cliche for someone as capable.

Not to forget The blank muse with attitude an aphorism of the sort I like. Short to the point and worth hours of ponderance (not sure if that is word).

And finally alone which haunts me. Now, now I know I am biased but if you were married to her wouldn't you be haunted.

Enough for today

I didn't mean there aren't any good ones. I meant there aren't any new ones. Those are from yesterday.

 

[anniebug's man]

I didn't mean there aren't any good ones. I meant there aren't any new ones. Those are from yesterday.

Ahhh - I misunderstood