ARCHIVAL DISCUSSION to 11-14-08

[angelicminx]

OK, horsie after minx. (sorry had to work Sun). Is minx up?

Yep... sorry, I forgot to post here too. <sheepish grin>

 

[Pure]

OK, horsie

This is your green light. The starting gate is raised (for tomorrow 3-27).

Any volunteers willing to follow up this 'class act', next Sun?

 

[Black Tulip]

Perhaps, not sure yet. I have finished three chapters of a longer story. Looks like it will be at least 8 chapters. Maybe I should wait till I have some more?

So if anybody else has a desperate need to be abused: please go ahead.

 

[BlackShanglan]

I've posted my snip from the beginning of the longer work. Many thanks for the opportunity.

Shanglan

 

[Pure]

Note on moving threads; note to mab crossposted

hi mab,

among the vast powers of the moderator: he or she can relocate threads or lock them down or essentially make them disappear (subject to appeal).

out-of-the-blue "What do you think of my story" postings from a stranger do not belong in story disc. circle, so they are relocated to either AH or Story Feedback. this has been occuring since i stepped in. in a good mood and with a polite 'author', I leave a redirection in the original forum (though I am not obliged to).

weird offtopic things go to GB, and ads and crap are disappeared.

i'm not sure if you're objecting, or just expressing puzzlement. note that they are moved to NONmoderated threads which have minimum rules. so if you have an objection it must be that the original thread loses by such moves; do you think that?

if you look at SDC for the last weeks there are very few 'out of the blue' threads; rather, the threads all relate to selected stories or process. I hope this is satisfactory to you, but of course i will listen to any 'grassroots' proposals for exceptions. I personally like the look of the current threads, all of which seem 'on topic'.

i'm aware you participate at 'story feedback' as I do occasionally, and that generally seems like a good place for unsolicited and 'no strings' feedback.

----
PS. Thanks for the 'heads up.' I've clarified this situation in the information thread of this forum.

 

[Pure]

Call of the wild

Hi friends and guests,

We're open for volunteers (from among those who've participated) for any of the next weeks, i.e., those starting on Sun April 10, 17, 24, etc.

In particular,

WOULD

Carson,
Wishful,
Moonlight
Softouch
msboy


and such regulars as

Neon,
Mabeuse
Penelope,
Black T
Angelic
Hiddenself


AND others reading this who have participated in Shang's, Angelic's and other recent threads

please consider volunteering a story [posted or in progress].

Post your responses here if you are willing to consider, even if a date cannot yet be set.

 

[Black Tulip]

.... I have finished three chapters of a longer story. Looks like it will be at least 8 chapters....
So if anybody else has a desperate need to be abused: please go ahead.

My offer still stands. Not in a hurry, but if nobody else steps forward ...

I'm rewriting my last submission to this circle of torture right now.

 

[Pure]

OK, black t, this sun, apr 10.
thanks.

 

[Black Tulip]

OK, black t, this sun, apr 10.
thanks.

Will do.

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

Greetings,

Some of you may remember a story (other than the one still posted) the SDC helped me with a few weeks ago. Two female friends, one black, one white, in a dorm room begin talking about why the black girl won't date white guys. The black girl tells her friend about being coerced into sex by a white h/s teacher to get the A she needed for a college scholarship.

I asked, and there was some discussion of, what category would be best for this odd story. Since opinions seemed pretty evenly divided between non-consent and non-erotic, I submitted it first to non-consent, then a couple weeks later to non-erotic. The only differences betwee the two, other than when they were submitted, being their titles and descriptions.

FYI, here are the results.

NonConsent/Reluctance
Scholarship Sex To make an A under her teacher, she had to play under him
3.14 -- 21 -- 20571 -- 03/07/05

Non-Erotic
Prejudicial Act It's just not fair.
4.73 -- 11 -- 1144 -- 03/21/05

Thanks again for all the help with the story. In case you're wondering, I'll soon ask Laurel to delete the Non-conset version. I can only stand so much pain.

Rumple Foreskin

ps: Pure, if you feel this takes up more space than it's worth, feel free to invoke your vanishing powers.

 

[Pure]

nice feedback, rumple.

i have no problem with posting related thoughts, in this thread, regarding the process here, provided the 'business'--the queue-- is not overrun.

Nor do I have a problem with threads that are not 'story discussion', but related to it, like mab's on the effects and use (or lack of use) of feedback.

In case some people follow the old threads, though, Rumple, I'd suggest you also post that feedback in the thread about your story.

please note that we work by common agreement, not moderator-dictated rules, and if lots of people want changes, I hope they speak up. true, if they really displease me, all their postings from the beginning of time will vanish, but hey, life has its risks.

:frog:

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

nice feedback, rumple.

In case some people follow the old threads, though, Rumple, I'd suggest you also post that feedback in the thread about your story.

Well, gee, you see, it's like this. Uh, it seems the SDC's dedicated and hard working moderator deleted certain old, no doubt uninteresting, threads including the one containing the feedback in question, and it doesn't seem to have been placed in the archive thread and, no, I hadn't copied it to my 'puter, so while your suggestion is a good one, in fact one I had considered, following through on it is, baring an act of God or our beloved moderator, impossible.

Rumple Foreskin

 

[Penelope Street]

Rumple's lost thread?

This is not the thread in question?
https://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=313015

Clever and interesting experiment, btw.

Take Care,
Penny

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

This is not the thread in question?
https://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=313015

Clever and interesting experiment, btw.

Take Care,
Penny

Uh, well, yes.

I must have the settings messed up, somehow. I set the time span back a year and still only got twelve posts, not including this one. I figured Pure had cleaned out the old ones. I'll keep tinkering around and try to figure out what I've done wrong, this time.

Thanks, Penny.

Rumple Foreskin

 

[Penelope Street]

You're welcome.

Well, gee, you see, it's like this... baring an act of God or our beloved moderator, impossible.

You were right on one point: Act of God, Act of Woman-pretty much the same.

Take Care,
Penny

 

[Pure]

Non delendum est

Rumple: //it seems the SDC's dedicated and hard working moderator deleted certain old, no doubt uninteresting, threads including the one containing the feedback in question, //

No threads of any substance have been moved to limbo or deleted.
Some inactive threads may eventually fall off the Literotica server, but I've not noticed it here.

afaik, all story discussion or feedback threads are intact. none are moved, none are locked down. such threads have as far as I remember, been separate entities, one per story, as we do now.

i simply archived the first two pages of the original business thread, and locked it off (it's read only, iow).

all remaining pages of the business thread are right here, but they, afaik, contain notices about stories reviewed, not the reviews, and obviously this thread is open.

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

Hah!

Trying to plead innocent just because you didn't do a single, solitary thing wrong. What'll they think of next?

What I was doing wrong, this time, was clicking on the reset button after changing the time parameters instead of Show Threads. Sew souix me.

Rumple Foreskin

 

[Black Tulip]

My story is up, be gentle please.

 

[rikaaim]

My story is posted and linked in my thread. I want to get some detailed feedback on it and how to improve my writing, so I'm wanting to get involved here. Pure, PM me and let me know what I need to do to get qualified and get my story tossed in the mix. Thanks. I know I have to do a critique on two stories, so I'll do that when I get some free time later. Thanks again.

 

[Pure]

Hi rikaaim

Welcome, and thanks for your note.

My story is posted and linked in my thread. I want to get some detailed feedback on it and how to improve my writing, so I'm wanting to get involved here. Pure, PM me and let me know what I need to do to get qualified and get my story tossed in the mix. Thanks. I know I have to do a critique on two stories, so I'll do that when I get some free time later. Thanks again.

It's unclear what your first sentence means, but Please don't attempt to open any thread here, until a final OK.

As you say, you'll go into the queue, which is set up here, after you join in the critiquing process. This is more like being on a soccer team than making a purchase at a grocery store. All contribute. There are posted guidlines in the sticky about 'what's going on here.'

Probably you know that 'free' no-strings critiques may be solicited in several spots, such as 'story feedback' or 'authors' hangout'.

Let me know, here, when your critiques are posted and you wish to join the queue. I'd urge you to look to the more recent stories; you can see the threads are dated. I'm eager to see you join in; I'm sure you have something good to offer, and that you will, in turn, benefit.

Jan

 

[Pure]

Next in queue

IT looks to me like this Sun 4-24 we can proceed with 'dr lust', a person who participated here some time ago, and has rejoined the flock.

This is assuming there are no outstanding promises to others, and in particular that Rikaaim has not posted his or her two critiques yet.

Unless I hear from Rik (as to where the critiques are) or someone else, dr lust will have the go ahead for this Sun.

 

[Pure]

Dr. Lust is up

dr lust, up for today 4-24.

calling dr lust!

 

[Pure]

open for business

sorry folks, was away this past Sun.

if there are any volunteers who've done a couple critiques, post your name here for Sun 15 or thereafter.

i believe any of the 'old' roue(e)s should consider offering their material, since we've temporarily exhausted the 'newbie' supply. don't hesitate; you're not displacing any new person's magnum opuscule.

 

[Boxlicker101]

I am writing the next story in the series about Cindy Lou in New York. This will be a story of a lesbian experience, her first ever, she has with her new roommate. I won't be able to finish it by May 15 but I would like to put it on the table for May 22. My main concern is how realistic the responses of the women are. I believe I have benefited from reading the essay by Colleen Thomas on the subject but I want to get the viewpoint of other women. I also want to know just how readable the story is. I made extensive changes, improvements I hope, in the first story in the series and I am prepared to do the same with this one.

 

[Pure]

Hi Box,
Have you done some critiques since your last posted story? I have not monitored each person. If the answer is 'yes', then yes, you may proceed on the 22nd. Confirm here.