Challenge: The perfect ten.

[Tzara]

sparrow sings, rose
is the color
of life and desert.

La vie en rose,
Blue Canadian Rockies,

Same difference, kinda.

-tz

 

[PatCarrington]

Too many people
at her grave.

There's lipstick on Wilde's.

-tz

saliva on hers, adoring
all things french.

the lipstick yours?


(....i don't even know if you're female. so if necessary, i apologize in advance. )

 

[PatCarrington]

La vie en rose,
Blue Canadian Rockies,

Same difference, kinda.

-tz

what's in accent
but a twist of senses.
ear, eye.

 

[Tzara]

saliva on hers, adoring
all things french.

the lipstick yours?


(....i don't even know if you're female. so if necessary, i apologize in advance. )

S'ok. Just don't put it
on Victor Noir's,
um, thing.

-tz

 

[PatCarrington]

S'ok. Just don't put it
on Victor Noir's,
um, thing.

-tz

tombs to fertility
are bound to have many,
um, things.

 

[Tzara]

what's in accent
but a twist of senses.
ear, eye.

wobbly Georgian tenor,
nasal French soprano

no difference:

just life.

-tz

 

[PatCarrington]

wobbly Georgian tenor,
nasal French soprano

no difference:

just life.

-tz

life is something
you notice.
your poetry says so.

 

[Tzara]

tombs to fertility
are bound to have many,
um, things.

And things may be big.
I've been to Pompeii.

Wow.

-tz

 

[PatCarrington]

And things may be big.
I've been to Pompeii.

Wow.

-tz

or small,
like fire extinguished
in brussels
by a mannequin.

 

[Tzara]

or small,
like fire extinguished
in brussels
by a mannequin.

A devious response.
Should I say, "Hobbyhorse?"
Logic is wrong.

-tz

 

[PatCarrington]

A devious response.
Should I say, "Hobbyhorse?"
Logic is wrong.

-tz

logic never worked for me
before. why
get sensible now.

 

[Tzara]

life is something
you notice.
your poetry says so.

May I morph
away from pose
and thank you?
j'espere

-tz

 

[PatCarrington]

May I morph
away from pose
and thank you?
j'espere

-tz

you may do anything
you wish...um,
...oui...

 

[Tzara]

logic never worked for me
before. why
get sensible now.

Poetry does not give information.

No--
It is the other.

-tz

 

[Tzara]

(....i don't even know if you're female. so if necessary, i apologize in advance. )

A hermaphrodite avatar
may have advantages,
non?

Gender neutral reading.

-tz

 

[PatCarrington]

Poetry does not give information.

No--
It is the other.

-tz

it's both,
or either,
or neither.
two-way streets
clog too.

 

[PatCarrington]

A hermaphrodite avatar
may have advantages,
non?

Gender neutral reading.

-tz

you missed the anonymity debate...
stick around, add
new twists.

 

[Reltne]

poetry provides
words
some rhyme
some don't
meaning is yours​

 

[Tzara]

it's both,
or either,
or neither.
two-way streets
clog too.

The world is more than is the case.
--(not) Wittgenstein

-tz

 

[PatCarrington]

The world is more than is the case.
--(not) Wittgenstein

-tz

nostalgia ain't what it used to be.
--Simone, red tart.

 

[Reltne]

Philosophical problems arise
when language goes on a holiday.
- Ludwig​

 

[PatCarrington]

they're rising in montparnasse.
in jersey, it's time
to fall.


...g'night

 

[Man Ray]

in bright sunshine
in dark woods
my love shines bright

 

[Tzara]

nostalgia ain't what it used to be.
--Simone, red tart.

weakly...

Existence precedes assent.
--Jean-Paul Tarte

No mas, Patrick. You win. There is no way I am ever going to beat "Simone, red tart." That is so perfect on so many levels that I am compelled to bow to the master.

No fair, anyway. I'm supposed to be working on my gluey dull poems, aren't I?

G'night, mate.

 

[RhymeFairy]

in bright sunshine
in dark woods
my love shines bright

lantern of love
lights the way,
showing passions
desirous deeds ...