MelissaBaby
Wordy Bitch
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- Jun 8, 2017
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Codoc24about 6 hours ago
This is great MA. Ignore any negative comments. Loved her conflict. I'm afraid I don't have time to read all of your stories but I have always been impressed with your writing. Hope you don't mind, but as a fellow author, I try to pick up tips from your sex scene descriptions to make mine better. I'm not a big fan of serial stories, but that is just my personal preference. Cuz I know that I probably won't be able to read the whole series. LOL But some readers love them. Keep up the good work!
Anonymous
These stories are in my top 4 favorite literotica serries. This is so fucking good!
I remember getting a similar reaction to Angie, the crazed fan in Running Down a Dream who stalks a celebrity while expressing jealousy towards his marriage and ends up joining the couple for a one night unicorn engagement.One of the most gratifying types of comments I can get, and which I've received a few times, is to be told by a reader that she liked the story and can imagine being the female character in the story. That tells me that I've succeeded in writing my female character sufficiently to draw in and engage that reader, and as a male author it's nice to know that. I received a comment like that today in response to Late Night on the Loveseat with Mom:
Hot action, engaging plot & characters. Kudos. 5/5.
The final version turned out even better than I had anticipated! Fantastic story, my friend. The connection between Christina and Rosa truly blossomed into something marvellous, and I think the pacing came out perfectly, the intensity and heat constantly escalating. Another StillStunned instant classic. Bravo!
Devinter, you know I'd probably never have finished it without your encouragement and input, so a double thank-you, my friend.
Glad you appreciate my comment. Feel free to return the favor any time if you enjoy my work.Two comments so far on The Walled Garden, in its first hours of publication.
From @AchtungNight:
And from @Devinter, who beta-read the first half:
Thanks, both of you! Devinter, you know I'd probably never have finished it without your encouragement and input, so a double thank-you, my friend.
I've promised myself to spend more time reading, and less time writing. Time to recharge the old braincells and steal some inspiration from my fellow authors, so beware!Glad you appreciate my comment. Feel free to return the favor any time if you enjoy my work.
(But she might be under a Spanish influence.)Oh my goodness. That was a fun read.
steeltiger01 4 minutes ago
I didn't know that I would like this. Seriously. I figured that I'd read it & see how it was. Damn, talk about a surprise!
(Well, it's a Pink Orchid story, after all.)Excellent. Having Roberto be, not the main focus of the story, but the catalyst for the story of both Christina coming out of her doldrums and how she and Rosa formed a bond was a really good choice. Hot as hell, to boot.
Which, believe it or not, is the first time a reader has commented about getting off on one of my stories, as far as I can remember.WOW!
Great story and well paced. Hard not to finish before the end!
wasn't me, I clicked the star on the right.taken a huge rating hit (down from 4.82 to 4.63)
Much appreciated. I suspect it was some uncultured Philistine who couldn't appreciate the metaphorical importance of things like the apple tree and Rosa's gown.wasn't me, I clicked the star on the right.
Some people just never give fives on principle, short of an all-time best masterpiece.I suspect it was some uncultured Philistine