Comments That Make Your Day

I love it when older stories get love, too...
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I can honestly say that is the most engrossing and well well thought out story i have read so far. Attention to detail was superlative to say the least. Thank you for writing it for us to enjoy.

-- Teacher's Challenge
 
Yeah. Feeling you have connected with the experience of other humans and represented their lives is priceless.

Emily
I get those from other transwomen occasionally. Some are extremely moving and empowering. It nice to know what you write matters. Helps when you write as creatively as you do, too. 🫂
 
"Okay !
Seriously !
Are you an Alien ? Of The Universe ?
Your Talents, Writings / Creativities are "Out Of This World" !
Again, One More Excellent Creation !
THANK YOU !"

Received via email for the story Christmas Unicorn. While I very much appreciate the positive feedback and the enthusiasm, I have to confess I am not an alien.
 
"Okay !
Seriously !
Are you an Alien ? Of The Universe ?
Your Talents, Writings / Creativities are "Out Of This World" !
Again, One More Excellent Creation !
THANK YOU !"

Received via email for the story Christmas Unicorn. While I very much appreciate the positive feedback and the enthusiasm, I have to confess I am not an alien.

I foreshadowed this turn of events for you in Girl Cum - Thus, I have become a prophet! :cool:
 
“On the wall itself, a mural of a trio of aliens dancing around an X.”

Yes, Devinter, you are indeed a prophet.🤣
 
Critical Response 5 is a 750-worder that breaks the fourth wall as two of my FMC antagonists escape their stories. Liked this from Anon:

This is an absolutely brilliant concept!


I love the idea of characters having free will and being able to influence things however they wish. Thank you so much for sharing it!
 
Not that I fully believe it but it sure was nice to get....

"The best sex story that I have ever read in my long life. That is just the way that good sex should be, consensual and sharing"
 
I’m not trying to be a tease here. But I felt like writing something, without either being too specific, or compromising anyone’s privacy. Sorry if that ends up seeming weird.

I got a message via the Feedback Form today. It was from someone who works in a field pertinent to the FMC in one of my stories. I’m not going to go into the details, but it was one of the most deeply encouraging things that I have ever received. Enough to sustain me through many waves of criticism and indifference.

It made me feel that maybe there is some point to this - frankly kinda ridiculous - hobby.

I wanted to share how it made me feel.

Emily
It was an amazing story
 
Hee hee, Anonymous got angry at me:

Well, after reading the story to the end, I declare: It's very cheap. Why should I empathize with any of the characters if they just didn't have time to make love? Two girls met, fucked on the first date, and then because of the cheap trick "I got it, I don't want to listen to you anymore" they had a fight. They've only known each other for a few days. I have no emotions about this quarrel, I did not get attached to their relationship because THEY DID NOT EXIST. I have no more words. One big disappointment...
and
Another story that begins so beautifully... And so filthy spoiled. Another sex on the first date... Moreover, the poor girl, who a few minutes ago could not utter a word without nervous hesitation and uncertainty, from some dick climbed to molest a serious respected woman. Simply so. Just because she was drunk and emboldened. It's just "BRILLIANT." And most importantly: dozens of comments "It's wonderful, it's a masterpiece, it makes me feel!". Guys, just go watch porn. Goodbye Wanda, you were good... once.

both on my latest :cool: job done!
 
If I dunked Tolkied half a star for all the poetry in Middle Earth, I'm sure I will be forgiven for dunking 4 stars for this... well, I'm not quite certain WHAT it was but I'd like to know where I can get whatever... this writing... is.
On the tiny Rough and Tumble
 
I received a comment yesterday on one of my stories that made me laugh. The story is The Scorned Young Woman Pt. 01, and in one scene, the MMC rescues the FMC (his daughter's best friend) from a place called Pie Town. She's gone there to drown her sorrows in pie after catching her husband with the town tramp. She's chubby, and food is her refuge. Anyway, in Pt.01, they end up having sex. The commenter said, "So the poor girl traded her pie addiction for a dick addiction. Five stars." I'm still laughing over this!
 
I have not had nearly as much time to write this year as before (that's a good thing for me and mine), to the point that I've gotten a few, 'Hey, are you still alive?' emails form folks on LKit. I do have another series in the works, and it is hard to stay motivated to write in my narrow free time when I'm not getting feedback.
Then Anony just dropped by with this, on a chapter mid-series of A Reputation:
How the hell are you so good at writing? This series stands out from the run of the mill crap, because you've got a knack for flow and organization, as well as what you might call dramatic foreplay. Wish I could write like that
Thanks. Needed that.
 
One of the most gratifying types of comments I can get, and which I've received a few times, is to be told by a reader that she liked the story and can imagine being the female character in the story. That tells me that I've succeeded in writing my female character sufficiently to draw in and engage that reader, and as a male author it's nice to know that. I received a comment like that today in response to Late Night on the Loveseat with Mom:

Great story! I pictured myself as Maddy the whole story!
 
“This has to be the best and most romantic sexual story I have read in Literotica. Thanks”

From Sweet Suitemate Seduction The comment is somewhat over the top, IMHO. Maybe they simply haven’t read that much. Still, it’s nice to know the story was appreciated.
 
I just received this from someone who anonymously got on my case about spelling errors. The chav scholar finished with

"Why is it that so many Americans profess to SPEAK English but are so bat at SPELLING it?"

Dear Mr. Scholar
You're you are absolutely right, I've never been able to spell "English" with a bat. My professor says it's all in the hips.
 
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