Comments That Make Your Day

[Duleigh]

This was posted on All Aboard Andi's Dream (Chapter 5) and it summed up the entire story perfectly:

"Best fairytale on literotica!"

 

[gordo12]

Nice comment on April Fool - No longer. He's right, it was a tongue-in-cheek story.

A little far fetched but a fun read!!!

 

[FifthEstate]

This comment came from a successful author in the same category my story I Found My Wife’s Black Dildo posted in.

ThaDee about 8 hours ago
Read it more than once because this is incredible! Loved this chapter and now I can’t wait for the fifth and final installment in what I think has been your best work to date. Sexy, fun and instantly re-readable. This story has my favorite of all your characters and right now you’re the best thing going in this genre. You’ve done it again!

 

[StillStunned]

My shameless marketing in another thread has borne fruit. Not only did it attract the views needed to bring Life and Death of the She-Wolf up to 1k (after a mere two and a half months!), it also brought some lovely comments.

@theWollstonecraftWoman wrote:

A big thumbs up from JAP review society!

(I'd love to sit in on a meeting of that society when they're reviewing smut.)

@djrip had this insight:

That's badass. Feels like it would make for a great graphic novel in Heavy Metal.

You're absolutely right. Or one of those French comics, perhaps in the style of Complainte des landes perdues. Now I can't stop seeing the story like that.

And while I'm at it, @theWollstonecraftWoman also liked The Walled Garden:

A very nice story!

Short and sweet.

And lastly, @countdowntolov3 added this on Flesh for Fantasy:

Fun! Thanks for sending me here.
"For an instant it was covered in her white cream, then the water from the shower rinsed it clean."
Nice, efficient imagery. I appreciate the little "messy" touches like this and Mel sniffing the dildo. Makes it feel more like peeping on intimate private time. Though I guess the last line recontextualizes that

I like to add those bits of realism in my stories. (By the way, there's a sequel.)

Thanks for the positive feedback, everyone!

 

[StillStunned]

Another one on The Walled Garden, this time from @Smuttyandfun:

Well done! I loved how she came out of her shell and took what she needed, with her friend there for her.

ETA: And this one from @ShelbyDawn57:

Truly something special. Thank you for sharing.

And one more, from @Omenainen:

Oo, but this was hot! Thank you for participating in my event. I’m thrilled to have this on the list.

Thanks! I'm really pleased with how this story has been received.

 

[MillieDynamite]

Love the reactions to my new 750-Word story. I wish it would get some s as well.

 

[theWollstonecraftWoman]

Bragard.

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Love the reactions to my new 750-Word story. I wish it would get some s as well.

 

[NoTalentHack]

Woke up to this lovely anonymous comment on Shouldering the Burden:

That was beautiful. Others have called it sad. I find this uplifting. I find this humbling. You heard him. She's worth it. Suddenly, I understand, or perhaps I only got reminded, there can be love like this, and this brings me joy. If even for a moment, my belief in love has been reforged, in gold, like the vase. This is love and loving in such deep, strong and unyielding way, it fills my heart and soul. It reveals how nearly meaningless and empty all those I-love-you+I-love-you-toos in other stories really are.



Thank you for the story.

 

[ShelbyDawn57]

Once again, Anonymous comes through with a smile-bringer...

"I love your writing as life the way it should be. Acceptance by all involved in your incredibly detailed wonderful stories. Can't wait to read another masterpiece from your creative library."

--Fostering Billy

 

[Duleigh]

A while back I published an essay and collection of poetry by the ad department of the Lackawanna Railroad that spoke of Phoebe Snow. A reader commented with a poetic response that says goodbye to the great old machines of yesteryear

As a lover of most old mechanical greats,
who laments the passing of many dates,
the loss of civility seems our fate.

 

[32aa]

Each of the three chapters of 'Laura's Cardinal' received comments that both made my day, and choked up.
Chapter 1:
by Billyboy1953
on 01/07/2024

Oh my God. Powerful. Gut wrenching. … Tears.. Kind of what I know would happen if I lost my soulmate and love of my life…or she hers.
5 stars… more if it were possible.

Chapter 2:
by onetwentysix
on 01/10/2024

I lost my wife almost 7 years ago now and this story has renew my faith that I have another soul mate out there. I too have seen a Cardinal when I visit her grave. Funny coincidence is our boys school mascot is a Cardinal. Then you for a beautiful story. 5 stars!

Chapter 3:
by AnnaValley11
on 01/30/2024

First class story - so beautifully told
Thank you

 

[Candy_Kane54]

Erotic, intense
by Anonymous user on 02/02/2020
Brilliant first effort! More please! It kept me stiff the whole time. Great build-up, satisfactory sex scenes.

My very first comment.

 

[gordo12]

A couple of nice comments yesterday:

The Bet:

Ok. I really liked this story. The only problem I had was her little revenge. Should she be pissed he cheated? Sure, I feel human mummy sounds like a good way to express that she was upset he broke a promise. Sending photos to everyone is taking it to far since the marriage was already at the end anyway. If she was planning on trying to fight for her marriage than being mad enough to send photos would probably be ok. But not when u have your foot out the door already and came damn close to cheating herself.

I found this comment interesting. Other commenters said much the same thing. In the BTB world if the woman cheats they tie her to a stake and pile up the kindling before tossing a match. But when the male cheats...crickets. Strangely enough, the duct tape mummification seemed to upset the women more than the men.

April Fools - Gotcha:

wow.

 

[STrent]

Anonymous2 days ago
Wow .. sounds so delightful

Fabulous.. I love it

djrip2 days ago
Nice one!

Rob_Royale1 day ago
A very good effort for a first story. Nice job.

Anonymousabout 23 hours ago
Sounds very much like my wife. Men turned her out & made her a hot whore.

lovecraft68about 22 hours ago
Solid first effort. There's something to be said for a simple set up and delivery, not everything has to be an opus with a deep meaning. Old lovers reconnecting through "business" is a fun trope.

Thanks to everyone who has commented on and/or read my first published story on Literotica. I appreciate the feedback and comments greatly and hope to publish more in the Peta/Sam series soon.

You can read it here: https://www.literotica.com/s/polaroids-1

 

[Kumquatqueen]

A couple appreciative comments on Making Lemonade, a short story (heterosexual and vanilla!) about a guy making the best of having a small penis. And what the female narrator thinks.

From Omenainen:
So good! Points to him for learning to compensate. Loved the sex positivity. Thanks for posting this in my event.

And nthusiastic:
Just confirms my theory that the skill of a gentleman is inversely proportional to the size of his equipment. The best lover I ever had was virtually impotent, but he certainly rocked my world! Provided the most amazing orgasms! Almost every man I’ve met with a large cock used it like a club. Ugh. No thank you! Whatever the opposite of a size queen is, that’s me. Of course, I’m rather petite in general. If only Steve had lived on my side of the Atlantic, sigh . . . Anyway, thanks for sharing your talents with us and it was great reading about my preference, for a change. LOL!

 

[gordo12]

A nice comment today:

Cheatify The Bitch:

Bluesnarfed. Learned something new today. 5 stars

 

[Comshaw]

I just saw this comment on my story "HomeComing". A nice way to start the day.

This story
Is a great story line it has a bit of everything that you can put in one Love , Kindness, Sex and Action also Family. Thank you.

Comshaw

 

[onehitwanda]

On Chiaroscuro and Catgirls:

Sadly another example of OHW’s trope: poor little thing rescued by rich/in control/dominant character. OHW has such a control over the language it is sad to see it wasted on the same theme time and again.

they're really going to hate my next story then

 

[SimonDoom]

On Chiaroscuro and Catgirls:



they're really going to hate my next story then

Of course, "another example" indicates that, notwithstanding their disdain for your "trope," they can't help but come back to read the next story that illustrates it, leaving one to wonder, "Why?"

 

[onehitwanda]

Of course, "another example" indicates that, notwithstanding their disdain for your "trope," they can't help but come back to read the next story that illustrates it, leaving one to wonder, "Why?"

how I like to imagine them:

 

[Djmac1031]

Of course, "another example" indicates that, notwithstanding their disdain for your "trope," they can't help but come back to read the next story that illustrates it, leaving one to wonder, "Why?"

how I like to imagine them:

Reminds me of that scene from Howard Sterns Private Parts movie where the ratings guy explains to the program manager that people who hate Stern listen even longer, because "most common answer: they wanna see what he'll say next."

 

[SimonDoom]

how I like to imagine them:

So true. Also makes me wonder whether there's a special room reserved, at the same place that customers went for arguments or insults in the famous Monty Python sketch, for people who wanted to have erotic stories they hated read to them.

"And then your mum made eyes at you."

"Not mum!"

"Yes, mum! And she touched your knee."

"My knee?"

"Knee!"

"Argh!"

 

[intim8]

Oddly enough, this one made my day.

it wasn't really a story, just a random passage with no direction and no storytelling skill. Minimum stars and no credit to offer I fear. Try harder next time, if you dare!

If I dare! It's my 15th story.

 

[Zootonius]

On Chiaroscuro and Catgirls:



they're really going to hate my next story then

How many authors here have tropes... er, themes that they use over and over.

 

[Djmac1031]

How many authors here have tropes... er, themes that they use over and over.

Definitely not me. I totally don't write about voyeurism, exhibitionism or the scent of panties on a regular basis. Nope, not at all.