Comments That Make Your Day

[Duleigh]

Having worked with multiple translators during my career, I can confirm that they often provide comic relief.

In my stories they're outstanding translators but they're little tiny naked women flying around (they all look like females, but the male of the species are all brunettes and they can't change their hair color. The females change constantly) In The Gate they're incredibly horny. in both series they're crazy for cheese and the best way to calm them down is put a chunk of cheese in their house (a bird cage with furniture)

 

[ShelbyDawn57]

People think the fairies I put in my stories are weird. They've appeared in The Gate series and Enchantress series
In Enchantress I used them as a light source, translators, and comic relief

Working on an epic fantasy about a world where faeries and their magic have been either eradicated or enslaved. There are legends, prophesies even, of the royal bloodline returning. My faeries are faerie is pretty bad ass.

 

[samhasstories]

Some lovely comments on my latest, The Photo Shoot Pt 02:

From Klitomatic:

Totally unbelievable, totally impossible, and I am totally drained. Wunderbar ! ! !

D_O_Londoner:

So hot - nearly came hands free. Definitely one to read again.

Wilson Spalding:

Ya know... this is the perfect situational set-up. Arms length lowers defenses, character history sets expectations, then it just slowly builds. Just the right amount of tease and reveal, relief and reset. Carefully stepping over threshold after threshold, with a main character who's got the right balance of humility and performance for the reader to really buy in.

Well done.

️ ️ ️ ️ ️

 

[Lifestyle66]

Interesting comment on my latest Loving Wives story "The Loving Wife - 750 Words" (currently rated 3.67 with 483 votes.)

To put this in context, the user "26thNC" is a regular hater of any LW story which involves extra-marital sex, even consensual sharing, 1-bombing them. That user prefers BTB stories.
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26thNCabout 2 hours ago
Lifestyle actually wrote a LW story?
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Wow! I did something right!

 

[Trionyx]

Not a comment per se but a reader has been alphabetically going thru my stories and favoriting roughly a third of them. The first one was a holiday story from December. It’s nice to know so many of my stories are appreciated and it is also a reminder that submitting stories for contests gives a writer a fair amount of exposure which can lead to older stories being appreciated.

 

[StillStunned]

I just found this very motivating comment from @PirxPilot, on Ben's Big Mistake:

Love it! Well written, engaging, surprise twist, sexy as hell.
I usually don't pick random stories with ratings in the low 4s, but I had a mysterious feeling that I would like it -- sooo glad I did!

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

 

[SouthernCrossfire]

I had a number of nice comments but two really great ones come in yesterday on As Big as the Moon, just minutes apart, from two members who were signed in.

pepepilot:
I spent my day unproductively reading a story that I couldn't put down. Well developed and well written. Anyone that doesn't read this story has missed a great chance to see literary excellence. 5+ stars for me also.

The bold above was added for emphasis since it made me smile. Here's the more detailed one with minor spoilers.

Cali_Love:
When I saw a Southern Crossfire romance pop up this morning, I knew I had no chance of any productivity today and dove in. I didn’t have to get too far into it before I thought, uh oh, a truck-stop pickup of someone down on their luck and the knight in shining armor savior romance. I’ve read that before (haven’t we all?). Only this was done right. This is the way to write it. Bravo. Then, when he races to the bus station, another uh oh, are we going to have a simple Hallmark-like ending?! No. Again, it was written the right way and the complication/conflict continued. Excellent. Bravely written, and I wish I could do it that well. Then, all the other elements that many Anons fail to recognize: great character development, fun situations, and technically written sans flaws (not even little ticky-tack editing errors, what?!). Concluding with a supremely satisfying ending plus a properly paced leadup to it, that will keep the grin on my face the rest of the day (and probably tomorrow). A very heartfelt thank you to the author for the effort and for sharing. 5*

Unfortunately, the without flaws part of the second one proved to be in error when I found two blunders (one small, one big) at little later. Those were also caught by another reader and I also found an entire plot thread that ended abruptly when I forgot to tie it up. Fortunately, this missing thread was a short and very minor and no one has questioned it.

 

[gordo12]

A couple of nice comments this morning:

Wheelchair Girl:

great Storey tks

Homeless:

Short, sweet, and great!!!!!

 

[Djmac1031]

So my first ever story from a gay male POV published this morning. 750 words, short and (hopefully) sweet.

It's been doing well; some lovely comments so far including this one:

BlueEyes1969 13 minutes ago
Thanks for a beautiful, emotion-packed and erotic story. I am impressed with the depths of the inner psychological struggle you revealed for so many men tormented by religious and societal oppression and bigotry. Well done!

I'm glad it's hitting the mark I intended for it.

 

[Djmac1031]

And then our friend Anonymous shows up:

Like a poem re-written into a bad short story that was done by someone in high school.

Oh, like Anonymous ever went to high school.

 

[AG31]

So my first ever story from a gay male POV published this morning. 750 words, short and (hopefully) sweet.

It's been doing well; some lovely comments so far including this one:



I'm glad it's hitting the mark I intended for it.

I'm glad you posted here or I would not have seen it. 5 stars!

 

[Djmac1031]

I'm glad you posted here or I would not have seen it. 5 stars!

Thank you! I suppose I should have included a link too but I always forget that lol.

 

[gordo12]

Another nice comment on Hidden Boss:

Not entirely sure what they mean by "broke it," but ...

Wow you broke it and it works perfectly lol great read thanks

 

[Smuttyandfun]

A nice couple of comments on my Valentine's Day entry, 'Surprise Valentine.'

I was having a bleak day until I read this story. Thanks for putting a smile on my face and one in my heart.
That definitely put a smile on my face. Thank you. 5*

 

[Djmac1031]

New comment on "Of Glory And Holes" that I promise I won't let inflate my ego too badly:

CinnamonToast6 37 minutes ago
A masterful piece of writing. It takes a lot of skill and thought to fit so much into such a short story. Historical context, character development, plot, setting, mood. Every word in this story counts. It's a gem. Thank you very much for writing it. I'm going to go see what else you've written.

https://literotica.com/s/of-glory-and-holes

 

[Trionyx]

"I'm thinking that Scientists would Love to examine your brain. Donating it to science (M.I.T. ?) eventually but in the meantime allow them to run tests / scans, ETC.
I'm sure that it goes without saying that this creation of yours is Exceptionally Creative !
THANKS !"

Received via email on AI Era: The Big O The praise was a bit over the top, but it was still fun to receive.

 

[Phantom300]

I found myself in the position of being compelled to leave a heartfelt comment recently on a story that really touched me. I then sent the author a feedback email going into more detail than my public comment. Not sure if that's relevant here, but The story was that good and really struck a chord with me.

Pal-entine's for Single Parents by BreakTheBar.

 

[AchtungNight]

From "Leap of Faith"( https://www.literotica.com/s/leap-of-faith-7 )-

"Only a woman could compose a love-fantasy like this story. I mean that in a good way. We guy writers have no patience for mentality in our stories, just the physical. I will definitely explore more of your creations."

Since I am a man who clearly has patience for mentality in my stories (I feature a lot of introspection) and I composed this story entirely by myself, I clearly prove this guy wrong about guy writers. Glad he enjoyed it, though.

 

[Smuttyandfun]

Got this nice comment on my Valentine's Day story, 'Surprise Valentine'

I guess it's the best story of love with a capital L that has appeared in Literotica so far. Deserves to be made into a movie.

 

[Devinter]

I've gotten plenty of nice comments recently. Thank you to all my readers.

Some does stand out a bit extra, of course. For example, on my story - Blind Faith - I just got this stellar review from Anonymous:

" Ok this might be the best story I have ever read on lit. It was so unique and that made it 5 star material. The build up, the anticipation, the results all felt perfectly timed. Bravo sequel maybe "

 

[StillStunned]

I've gotten plenty of nice comments recently. Thank you to all my readers.

Some does stand out a bit extra, of course. For example, on my story - Blind Faith - I just got this stellar review from Anonymous:

" Ok this might be the best story I have ever read on lit. It was so unique and that made it 5 star material. The build up, the anticipation, the results all felt perfectly timed. Bravo sequel maybe "

Anonymous speaks wisely.

 

[StillStunned]

@Tom599 is a reader of few words. His verdict on Too Early Not to Fuck:

Love it

Thanks! I hope you enjoy the other stories in the series too.

 

[EmilyMiller]

I’m not trying to be a tease here. But I felt like writing something, without either being too specific, or compromising anyone’s privacy. Sorry if that ends up seeming weird.

I got a message via the Feedback Form today. It was from someone who works in a field pertinent to the FMC in one of my stories. I’m not going to go into the details, but it was one of the most deeply encouraging things that I have ever received. Enough to sustain me through many waves of criticism and indifference.

It made me feel that maybe there is some point to this - frankly kinda ridiculous - hobby.

I wanted to share how it made me feel.

Emily

 

[ShelbyDawn57]

I’m not trying to be a tease here. But I felt like writing something, without either being too specific, or compromising anyone’s privacy. Sorry if that ends up seeming weird.

I got a message via the Feedback Form today. It was from someone who works in a field pertinent to the FMC in one of my stories. I’m not going to go into the details, but it was one of the most deeply encouraging things that I have ever received. Enough to sustain me through many waves of criticism and indifference.

It made me feel that maybe there is some point to this - frankly kinda ridiculous - hobby.

I wanted to share how it made me feel.

Emily

It's nice to get those sparks in the night that help you keep going.

 

[EmilyMiller]

It's nice to get those sparks in the night that help you keep going.

Yeah. Feeling you have connected with the experience of other humans and represented their lives is priceless.

Emily