Comments That Make Your Day

My day started great: I woke up to a couple of fresh comments this morning.

On Life and Death of the She-Wolf:
Great job! Really well painted imagery. I love a good story that draws me in yet also let's me fill in some gaps.

And on Flesh for Fantasy:
Okay, um. Damn. Why haven't I read this sooner??? It's right up my alley lol.
Love the clifhanger ending BTW.

Thanks @Djmac1031 for your kind words! (Flesh for Fantasy has a sequel, by the way, and a third one in the making.)
 
So many negative ones give me a chuckle. And a good chuckle can make my day.

Someone just chimed in to argue with the meta-philosophy ideas one of my characters brought up during pillow-talk.

A more pertinent criticism might be that some of my charcters explore meta-philosophy during pillow talk, in porn.
 
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Out Into the Wasteland has its first comment!
Lotta playing with boners in here! Good shit, can't go wrong with a catgirl. I mean you can, but only if you keep petting them for one second longer than they want you to. Or push them off your keybo--nevermind.
- from @djrip

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it! But what's not to like about boners and catgirls. With the correct number of nipples.
 
(I always avoid sentences like that. Even if you manage to apply the rules properly, they're bound to trip up the reader.)

Reminds me of an ancient joke,
"Doctor, I suffer from premature ejaculation."
"Well, that sucks."
"...Ahh..."
 
Or when @EmilyMiller's and my gazes happen to meet over a crowded room...
Sounds like a story idea. Not that I’d ever write a story about a female Lit member while she did the same about me. Thats would be… bad.
Wow. That's actually such an awkward sentence - grammatically I mean. Apostrophes are confusing when I'm short on sleep.
It needs to be handled wearing nitrile gloves and a splash vizor.
 
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